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Beneath the Neon

© Cederwyn Whitefurr

28th March 2025

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Chapter One: A Night in Neon Eclipse

Bright neon lights flickered overhead, casting long, colourful shadows across the packed dance floor. The bass thumped through the walls, reverberating through the sticky floor beneath Mia’s boots as she moved behind the bar. Her hands moved on autopilot, wiping down the counter, and stealing occasional glances at the clock. It was nearing 4:30 a.m., and the crowd was beginning to thin. The party wasn’t over, but the night was winding down. Patrons staggered toward the exit or disappeared into the back rooms, seeking their after-hours fun.

Mia gave a wink to a young whitetail buck who swaggered by, dressed in little more than a bow tie. He was with two older humans, clearly in the mood for a little private indulgence. Mia had always admired the kid’s confidence. He had a reputation for being able to keep pace in the club’s wildest circles. As he passed, she shot him a playful smile.

"Have fun," she called out. The young buck threw her a smirk over his shoulder, his tail flicking behind him like he owned the place. "I will," he said, his voice a sultry promise.

But as the minutes ticked by, the crowd started to die down. The bass still pounded, but now it felt distant, fading into the background like a heartbeat slowing down. Mia wiped the bar down again, lost in her thoughts as she finished out her shift. She was looking forward to closing up and heading home, but as the clock inched closer to 5 a.m., her focus shifted.

Then he walked in.

Alistair, the ever-confident whitetail buck who'd been strutting like he owned the club just hours earlier, now stumbled through the door. His bow tie was long gone, replaced by an awkward stumble and a face that was far from its usual cocky, smooth demeanour. His fur was a sweaty, sticky mess, clumped together in patches like he'd been through a battle. He was panting heavily, barely holding himself upright as he shuffled to the bar.

Mia couldn’t help but let out a soft laugh, eyes narrowing as she wiped down the counter for what felt like the thousandth time. Sliding a fresh glass toward him, she added the usual electrolytes and leaned over the bar, giving his shoulder a light, affectionate pat.

“You know,” she said with a teasing grin, “maybe take a breather next time before you break yourself, hmm?”

Alistair groaned. His voice was thick with exhaustion, barely above a whisper. “No promises...” His head dropped onto his forearm with a dull thud, his whole body sagging under the weight of his exhaustion.

Mia’s grin deepened. “Did you meet your match in there?” she asked, unable to resist the tease. The usual cocky air that had followed Alistair all night had completely deflated. He looked like he had been through a war and was barely hanging on.

“Mmmm... yeah,” Alistair muttered, voice muffled by his arm. He didn’t even try to lift his head. “One of the humans—he was... stallion-sized. I think he broke me. All the ways. I couldn’t keep up.”

Mia snorted, shaking her head but her eyes still sparkling with mischief. “Sounds like you got a good lesson tonight, buck. You sure you weren’t the one doing the breaking?”

Alistair’s grin faded slightly, and he took a long, shaky sip from the drink she’d given him. His body was still trembling as he leaned back, the last remnants of his energy slipping away. “No. Trust me, he broke me,” Alistair said, voice low and breathy. “Never met anyone who could handle me like that. It was like he was crossed with a stallion or something. I just couldn’t—” He shuddered at the memory, eyes half-lidded, before he slumped further, his tired tail twitching weakly.

Mia leaned in, voice lowering just slightly as her grin grew. “A stallion, huh? Damn, that’s a new one. Guess you do need a break after all.”

Alistair’s tail flicked weakly in response, and he sighed, his body finally giving in to exhaustion. He finished the drink in one long gulp, the glass empty in seconds, and set it down with a soft thud.

“Damn, Alistair,” Mia said with genuine admiration. “That’s... impressive. Even for you.”

Alistair’s crooked smile returned, though it was weary and fading fast. “It’s a gift. One I’ve perfected over the years.” He winced, tapping the empty glass with a tired paw. “It’s how I keep a man, y’know?”

Mia’s eyebrow arched, her smirk deepening. “Well, it certainly seems to be working,” she teased, her tone playful but with a hint of genuine respect for the buck’s stamina.

Alistair giggled, though the sound was more of a wheezy chuckle than anything else. He rested his head against the bar, his shoulders sagging in exhaustion. “Gotta keep up with the competition somehow,” he muttered, his voice strained but still playful. He winced again, tapping the empty glass. “One of these days, I’ll need to recover before I even think about competing again.”

Mia chuckled softly. “Well, don’t push it too hard, buck. You’re not getting any younger.” She winked at him, giving his shoulder another playful pat. Her fingers brushed against his slick, sweat-drenched fur, and the unmistakable scent of musk, still faint but lingering, made her pause for a second. She eyed him with amusement, her voice teasing as she spoke. “Next time,” she said, “take it easy. Slow and steady might win for you this time.”

Alistair didn’t respond. His head was already back on his forearm as he let out a low groan, his body still feeling the aftermath of his endurance.

Mia couldn’t suppress her smile as she turned away. The nightclub was starting to wind down as patrons shuffled out the door, leaving only the staff behind to clean up. She turned to grab her rag and continue with the end-of-shift routine, but then she felt the familiar presence behind her.

Vincent.

The massive, towering anthro canine leaned casually against the bar, his golden eyes gleaming in the low light. His velvety white fur contrasted against the neon glow, a striking sight. Mia's heart skipped a beat, her cheeks flushing at the sight of him. She hadn’t seen him in a while, but her feelings for him were always undeniable.

“Took you long enough,” Vincent rumbled, his deep voice vibrating through the air.

Mia rolled her eyes, throwing the rag aside as she leaned against the bar with a tired but amused grin. “You could’ve helped instead of lurking like a damn statue.”

Vincent chuckled, a deep, rumbling laugh that seemed to come from his chest like a soft growl. “And miss watching you all night? Never.”

She laughed drily as she stepped out from behind the bar. “You’re funny tonight.”

With a practised motion, Vincent caught her hand, his massive paw completely enveloping her forearm. His warmth was like fire as he pulled her gently toward him. “Funniest guy you know,” he murmured, teasing her with the affectionate edge to his voice. “So... you coming with me?”

Mia’s face flushed instantly. Her heart skipped, but she didn’t look at him—pretending to be annoyed when she knew exactly what he was referring to. Ten years of playful nights and quiet mornings, of knowing each other’s body in ways they never needed to explain, and of routine as much as chemistry. It was second nature at this point.

With a smirk, Mia grabbed Vincent’s paw and yanked him toward one of the back rooms. The playful yelp he gave only made her grin widen as she led him into the back room.

*

Mia and Vincent moved in a feverish rush, their clothes tumbling to the floor in a frenzy, breathless laughter spilling between them, their bodies pressing closer, hungry for more. With each discarded piece of clothing, the tension seemed to heighten, the air thick with anticipation. Mia's pulse quickened, matching the rhythm of her thoughts as she guided Vincent toward the bed, her hand firm on his chest—playful yet commanding. Her eyes locked onto his, smouldering with a hunger that made his breath hitch.

With a soft push, Vincent stumbled back onto the bed, his large frame sprawling beneath her. He yelped, his weight making the mattress bounce as Mia knelt over him, flushed and heart racing.

“Naughty puppy,” Mia growled, her voice low and thick with command. She leaned closer, her breath hot against his neck, feeling the tension ripple through him before the words left her lips. “Go to my room…”

Vincent snickered, glancing around the room before meeting her eyes with a cheeky raise of his brows. “This isn’t your room. Guess it’ll have to do?” His grin was a perfect mix of mischief and affection.

Mia’s growl deepened. Without warning, she sank her teeth into the soft flesh of his shoulder. Vincent twitched, a shudder running through him at the sharp sensation, but a breathless giggle escaped him before he could stop it.

“Hey, I’m meant to be the predator here,” he teased, eyes gleaming with mischief. “I’m supposed to eat you up… but it looks like you’re the one in charge tonight.”

Mia chuckled darkly, pulling away from his neck with a teasing smile. Her fingers traced the outline of his broad chest, possessive yet playful, as she hovered above him. “Damn right, I am.”

The air between them crackled with heat, each touch igniting a hunger that neither could ignore. Mia could feel the weight of his words, the heat of his massive body beneath hers, but she wouldn’t give up control—not tonight.

Her lips brushed against his ear, her breath warm as her fingers gripped the fur of his chest. “You’re always so eager to chase me, Vincent,” she whispered, voice soft but commanding. “But tonight… tonight, you follow.”

Vincent’s heart pounded, his body responding to the words with its insistent hunger. His golden eyes flickered with excitement, but his gaze held something darker, something that made her pulse skip. His body tightened, but he stayed still, awaiting her next move. He was ready to play by her rules.

He chuckled low, the sound vibrating in his chest. “You’re not going to make this easy, are you?” His voice was thick with anticipation. “But maybe… it’s your turn to be caught.”

Before Mia could respond, the air shifted. Without warning, Vincent’s hands shot up, grabbing her wrists and pinning them above her head with surprising speed. His strength was undeniable, but his playful smirk was now replaced by an intensity that made Mia’s breath catch.

Mia’s pulse quickened, but instead of resisting, she tilted her head, meeting his gaze with a raised eyebrow. The sensation of his hands on her wrists didn’t feel like control—it felt like a challenge. She wasn’t backing down.

“Don’t get too cocky, puppy,” Mia murmured, voice a mix of teasing and command. “I’m still in charge here.”

Vincent growled softly, golden eyes flickering with amusement and desire. “We’ll see about that.” He lowered his head just enough to graze his lips over the curve of her jaw, sending a shiver through her.

Mia inhaled sharply, her body pressing into his, feeling the weight of him—almost suffocating, but in the best possible way. She loved their balance, the push and pull between domination and submission. It had kept them going for years.

Her breath hitched as the pressure of his body against hers sent waves of heat through her. She wasn’t giving up control. With a sudden shift, Mia used her knee to gently nudge his side, sending him rolling onto his back. Vincent yelped in surprise but chuckled, his eyes darkening with hunger as Mia straddled him.

“You sure you want to play this game, Vincent?” she purred, her voice a teasing challenge. “You don’t get to control me tonight.”

He smirked, his desire mixing with a dark thrill. “Oh, I don’t need to control you,” he growled. “I just need to show you why you shouldn’t mess with me.”

Mia’s pulse raced at the challenge in his voice. Before she could respond, her gaze fell to the nightstand where a foil packet lay. The club’s rules flashed through her mind—safety first, always.

“Vincent,” she said firmly, breaking the tension. “You know the rules.”

His playful edge softened, and he nodded, affection in his eyes. “You’re right,” he murmured. “Can’t let anything ruin this night.”

Mia smiled, her hands gripping his sides once more as she shifted her weight, ready to dive back into the heat of the moment. “Good boy,” she murmured, her eyes twinkling as she kissed him again—this time slower, deliberate, a brief respite before the storm.

With the tension broken and the rules respected, Mia let herself go, lost in the moment once more, knowing they were both on the same page.

As their bodies moved together, the world outside disappeared. There was no club, no ticking clock—only the connection they shared. The rhythm between them was primal, unrestrained, but it wasn’t just lust. It was a bond that surged deeper with every touch.

Vincent’s golden eyes glowed, admiration and desire flashing within them. His hands gripped her hips, guiding her even as she set the pace, pulling her closer when she surged forward. Every movement felt instinctual, the years of knowing each other’s bodies without words shining through.

Her body was on fire, her breath coming in shallow bursts as they moved together, each stroke pushing them toward something inevitable. The warmth between them was suffocating, but so incredibly satisfying. Mia’s hands tangled in Vincent’s fur, clutching him closer, her face flushed with exertion and desire.

The sound of their kisses, Vincent’s low growls, and Mia’s soft groans filled the room, adding to the frenzy between them. Every second brought them closer to the edge, to something unspoken, and it was enough to shatter the world around them.

Vincent’s hands roamed her back, his touch rough but tender, while Mia’s hips moved faster, more urgently. Her body shook with the effort to keep up with the intensity, and everything in her screamed for release. Her breath hitched as her pace quickened, the connection between them tightening.

Vincent groaned beneath her, his grip on her waist growing tighter. With a final, shuddering release, his body convulsed, and the tension between them broke in an instant. Mia followed, a wave of pleasure crashing over her, leaving her breathless and weak.

In the aftermath, their bodies still tangled, chest heaving as they caught their breath. For a moment, the world outside ceased to exist. There was only the warmth of their connection.

But then, Mia froze, the fog of desire clearing just enough for her to realise something was wrong. She pulled away slightly, blinking, feeling the warm spread between them. Her eyes darted to the nightstand, then down to where their bodies were still connected. There, unmistakably, was the broken condom.

Her stomach dropped. “Oh, hell no,” she groaned, pushing herself up slightly, her hand bracing against Vincent’s chest as she surveyed the situation.

Vincent blinked at her, still dazed by the intensity of the moment. “What?”

Her mind raced the reality set in. “You jerk!” she exclaimed, slapping his chest with a force that made him grunt.

He winced, his ears flicking back as he rubbed the back of his head sheepishly. “Hey, I didn’t feel it either!” he said, his voice full of an embarrassed chuckle. “Uh… oops?”

Mia glared at him, torn between frustration and the undeniable fact that the experience had still been incredible. “You owe me a damn morning-after pill—and a hell of a lot of grovelling.”

Vincent chuckled nervously, trying to lighten the mood. “Breakfast too?”

She rolled her eyes but didn’t argue. “Damn right. And you’re paying.”

With a sigh, Mia flopped onto the couch, staring at the ceiling. “We are so lucky I’m not ovulating.”

Vincent swallowed hard, his voice turning cautious. “You’re sure, right?”

She smirked, flicking his nose with a teasing grin. “Guess we’ll find out in a couple of weeks, won’t we?”

Vincent groaned, flopping back beside her, utterly defeated but undeniably in love. “I am so dead.”

*

Chapter Four: Breaking the Record

As the first rays of dawn filtered through the window, casting soft light across the room, the air remained cool, carrying the lingering energy of the night. Vincent sat on the bed, his massive form sprawled comfortably as he caught his breath. The warmth between them still simmered, a tangible reminder of the intensity they’d just shared. Mia perched on his lap, her mischievous grin never wavering as she gazed down at him, her fingers tracing idle patterns along his chest.

"You know," Mia began, her voice light and teasing, "I heard Alistair set quite the record this last rutting season."

Vincent’s ears perked immediately, and his brow furrowed with a playful curiosity. "Alistair, huh?" he rumbled. "What kind of record are we talking about here?"

Mia leaned in, her breath warm against his skin as her fingers grazed the thick fur on his chest. Her lips curled into a sly smile, her eyes gleaming with amusement. "A record for stamina," she purred, her tone almost wicked. "Twelve times. He was practically bragging about it."

Vincent’s chest rumbled with a deep growl, a mixture of pride and frustration making his muscles tense. The idea of Alistair—a deer, no less—setting a stamina record didn’t sit well with him. Especially when it involved Mia.

She watched the shift in his expression, her grin widening as she recognised the challenge in his eyes. "What’s the matter, puppy?" she teased, her voice dripping with playful mockery. "Afraid a deer might outdo you?"

Vincent’s lips curled into a confident grin, his golden eyes sparkling with determination. His massive paws wrapped around her waist, pulling her closer as he nuzzled her cheek, his voice thick with promise. "Oh, I’m not afraid," he growled low in his throat. "I’ll crush Alistair’s record, my mate. You’ll see."

He leaned back slightly, the playful edge in his voice returning. "But just so you know," he added with a wink, "you might need a week off from work to recover. Are you sure about this?"

Mia flushed at his words, her heart racing as the heat between them sparked again. She straddled him, leaning into him with a teasing, challenging grin. "Will I just, puppy?" she asked, her voice breathless with excitement.

Vincent responded with a deep, satisfied growl, his paws tightening around her waist. "Deer have nothing on us canines…" he murmured, his instincts fully awakened. "Trust me, Mia. We’re breaking records today."

Mia’s pulse quickened as she sensed the fierce determination in him, the playful challenge only amplifying the connection between them. She leaned in close, her lips brushing against his ear as she whispered, "Prove it."

And so, Vincent did. He didn’t just crush Alistair’s record. He obliterated it.

*

Chapter Five: A Buck Dethroned

That night, Vincent strolled up to the bar, his usual confident swagger on full display. He slid onto a stool with an easy grace, flashing a relaxed grin at the bartender as he casually ordered his drink. Settling in, he leaned back, his massive form clearly at home in the atmosphere of the bar.

Moments later, Alistair, the ever-confident deer, trotted over, his hooves clicking lightly on the floor as he scanned the room. His usual air of superiority radiated as he slid onto the seat beside Vincent, his gaze flicking around the bar, taking in every detail.

But then his nose twitched. The scent in the air was unmistakable—Mia’s familiar fragrance mingling with the heavy musk of a canine’s post-activity satisfaction. His ears flicked back, and his eyes darted sideways to Vincent, a flicker of discomfort crossing his features. For a moment, his confident posture faltered, but he quickly tried to mask it, though the unease lingered.

Vincent grinned, clearly savouring the effect he was having on Alistair. He didn’t flinch, sipping his drink as he leaned back, stretching his massive frame in a way that seemed almost deliberate, drawing attention to his muscular form.

Slowly, Vincent rose from his stool, his muscles rippling as he stretched. He walked toward Alistair, leaning in just a little too close, his presence overwhelming. Vincent patted Alistair on the shoulder with far too much affection, his grin wicked as he leaned in even closer.

“I believe it was... twelve?” Vincent’s voice was smooth, low, and teasing, dripping with challenge.

Alistair blinked, his mouth opening and closing as if trying to process what he’d just heard. “Wait—what?” he stammered, his usual confidence replaced with a confused, almost comical disbelief. He looked around, as though expecting someone to explain that this was some sort of joke.

Vincent’s grin widened, delight radiating from him. He leaned forward and pressed a quick kiss to Alistair’s cheek, his tail wagging playfully behind him. “Yep,” he said, voice thick with playful triumph. “I’ve shattered your record. And after I hydrate and grab a drink or two, I’ll do it all over again.” He paused, eyes sparkling with mischief. “Oh, and just so you know, young buck: Never send a deer to do a canine’s job.”

Vincent’s laugh rumbled deep in his chest as he turned away, strolling across the bar with a confident swagger. His tail flicked behind him, a happy sway to it as he left Alistair frozen in place, still staring at the space where Vincent had just been.

For a long moment, Alistair just stared at the spot, his jaw slack, his mind struggling to catch up with the words that had just shattered his world. The playful canine had outdone him—not just outdone him, but obliterated his record. Without even breaking a sweat.

Alistair let out a frustrated huff, his fingers running down his antlers in disbelief. He tugged at them lightly, trying to sort through the mess of thoughts that scrambled in his mind. “He... how...?” he muttered under his breath.

He watched as Vincent casually leaned against the wall across the room, a cocky glint in his eyes as he glanced over. The look Vincent gave him was the final blow, a playful taunt that sent a sharp pang of humiliation straight to Alistair’s chest. He opened his mouth as if to protest, but no words came out. Instead, his shoulders sagged, his pride crumbling, and he lowered his head in a quiet but undeniable gesture of submission.

Alistair nursed his glass of water with a trembling hand, swallowing with difficulty. The weight of Vincent’s victory settled over him, the crushing realization that he’d been thoroughly outclassed. His mind raced, but his thoughts felt muddled, trapped in the haze of what had just transpired. He couldn’t quite bring himself to speak, to voice any protest. Instead, he was left to stew in the quiet aftermath of Vincent’s playful conquest.

*

Chapter Six A Buck's Ambitions

Alistair had spent the entire evening brooding over one singular question: How had Vincent, that colossal, arrogant canine, outdone him so easily? Alistair was a buck of unmatched stamina—he knew what he was capable of. He’d earned his reputation as a creature of endurance, and he would not let Vincent walk around with that smug grin for long.

The bar was alive with the usual after-hours buzz, patrons laughing and clinking glasses, unaware of the tension building in the air. Alistair’s eyes scanned the room until they found Vincent, effortlessly seated at the bar. The challenge had already been issued—Alistair’s pride was on the line. This wasn’t about stamina anymore. It was about dominance, control, and making Vincent acknowledge who truly ruled.

With a smirk curling at his lips, Alistair made his way across the room, his gait confident, almost predatory. He knew exactly what he was doing—knew how his body swayed with each step, how the subtle arch of his back and the deliberate sway of his hips would draw Vincent’s attention. Alistair wasn’t just trying to get even; he was testing boundaries. He was going to seduce Vincent.

Alistair slid onto the stool next to the towering canine, his body positioning itself in a way that made it impossible for Vincent to ignore him. The deer leaned forward, the subtle scent of woodlands and musk clinging to his fur. He made sure his voice was soft and enticing, every word dripping with intent.

“Well, well, if it isn’t the infamous canine,” Alistair purred, his tone both teasing and seductive. His eyes flickered over Vincent’s form—the sheer power, the way he carried himself with effortless dominance. Vincent was everything Alistair wasn’t, and that thought ignited a fire inside the buck. He’d make this canine break—he was certain of it.

Alistair’s gaze lingered as he leaned in just a bit closer, his lips nearly grazing Vincent’s ear. He let his breath catch Vincent’s attention. “I’ve been thinking about what you said... about breaking my record,” Alistair continued, each word slow, calculated, meant to disarm and tempt. His fingers traced lightly over Vincent’s arm, brushing against the fur with a deliberate, lingering touch.

Vincent’s expression remained cool, unreadable, but there was a slight narrowing of his eyes as he acknowledged Alistair’s challenge. He was so calm, so utterly unaffected. Alistair could feel the tension building—the stoic canine was giving him nothing, not even a hint of interest, which only made Alistair more determined.

“Well,” Alistair leaned closer, brushing the back of his hand over Vincent’s bicep, “maybe you’ve underestimated me.” His voice was lower now, rich with a provocative edge. “I’m very open to seeing just how far your stamina goes. How far you can handle.”

He felt Vincent stiffen just slightly, but the canine didn’t pull away. There it was—the slightest crack in Vincent’s armour. But Alistair wanted more.

Alistair’s hand drifted down, crossing the threshold of Vincent’s personal space, his fingers curling against the muscular curve of his thigh. He knew what he was doing—knew how to push just enough, testing Vincent’s boundaries, teasing him. He leaned in further, his lips now just a breath away from Vincent’s ear. His whisper was almost a command.

“I could show you just how much I can handle... if you’re willing to test it.” Alistair’s words rolled out like silk, warm and enticing, a challenge wrapped in seduction. He was giving Vincent every opportunity to walk away. To deny him. But Alistair had no doubts. He would break this stoic canine.

The air between them thickened. The sounds of the bar faded into the background as the tension coiled tighter, and still, Vincent didn’t flinch. The briefest chuckle rumbled deep in the canine’s chest, a sound of amusement but also something darker—a hint of dominance that made Alistair’s pulse race.

“You think you can handle me?” Vincent’s voice was low, but the words carried weight. The amusement was there, sure, but there was also something else—something that made the challenge even sharper.

For a heartbeat, everything was still. Alistair waited for the inevitable pullback, the rejection, the polite dismissal. But Vincent didn’t recoil. He didn’t push him away. Instead, his powerful hand moved like lightning, grabbing Alistair’s wrist with almost tender strength, yet firm enough to send a jolt of heat through the buck’s body.

Vincent leaned in, his lips brushing over the curve of Alistair’s ear as his voice dropped lower, smooth but utterly commanding:

“Let’s find out.”

Alistair’s breath caught, and for the first time, he felt a flutter of uncertainty. Vincent’s raw, unshakeable confidence was intoxicating, and it was clear: Alistair had underestimated him. But it was too late now. The game had begun. And Alistair wasn’t backing down.

But Vincent had already shifted the power balance. Slowly, with the grace and control only a creature like him possessed, he moved, pulling Alistair toward him with effortless dominance. Alistair’s heart pounded in his chest, the final barriers he’d built up shattering as he leaned into the challenge, his breath quickening, the heat between them now palpable.

Vincent was so much more than Alistair had imagined, and for the first time in a long time, the buck realized just how far he was willing to go to prove himself. This wasn’t just about breaking records. It was about proving to himself—and to Vincent—that he could make the stoic, heterosexual canine want him.

And if he could succeed, then maybe, just maybe, he could have more than just victory.

*

Chapter Seven: A Buck? No, A Doe.

Without a word, Vincent rose from his seat, his movements predatory and controlled. He reached out, pulling Alistair to his feet with ease. The buck’s breath hitched in surprise as he was manhandled with casual, effortless strength. The crowd fell into a hushed silence, watching as Vincent led him toward the bar.

Once there, Vincent turned Alistair around, forcing him to face the counter. The impact of Vincent’s paws slamming down on the bar rattled the glassware, a sharp, sudden sound that made the air tense with anticipation. Alistair’s heart pounded in his chest. For the first time that night, his cocky grin faltered. This wasn’t the outcome he had planned for.

Alistair gasped, his breath catching in his throat as Vincent’s massive paws settled on his hips. The heat from Vincent’s body seemed to smoulder, overwhelming him with every touch. His knees buckled slightly, and for the first time that evening, Alistair felt the weight of the power dynamic shift in an unexpected direction.

He had seduced Vincent, played his hand with precision—but now, he was utterly at the mercy of the canine's raw strength. It was a lesson he hadn’t prepared for, and it sent a shudder of realization down his spine, mixing with a surge of unwanted desire.

Vincent moved with the grace of a predator, dominating Alistair with a steady, relentless pace. Every thrust, each movement, deepened the realization that Alistair had misjudged this encounter. The once-confident buck, who thought he could break the stoic canine, was now on the receiving end of a power so overwhelming that it shattered his sense of self.

Alistair clung to the bar for support, sweat trickling down his forehead as Vincent’s massive body pushed him to the edge of control. His body responded in ways he hadn’t anticipated, heat flooding his senses with each deep movement. His pride—the one thing he’d clung to for so long—was slipping through his fingers like sand.

Around them, the bar staff and patrons stood frozen. Some were too shocked to speak, while others couldn’t tear their eyes away from the spectacle unfolding in front of them. They watched, entranced, unsure if they were witnessing an intimate performance or something far more primal. But Vincent didn’t care. He was a force of nature, and Alistair was simply the latest victim of his overwhelming power.

The intensity of the moment grew unbearable. Alistair’s breaths quickened, the air thick with the scent of sweat and musk. His body trembled, shaking uncontrollably as Vincent’s relentless rhythm sent him spiralling toward the edge. The buck had never felt so small, so insignificant. Vincent’s dominance was absolute, and Alistair was left in awe, his body at the canine’s mercy.

When Vincent finally tied with Alistair, the buck’s world shattered. The weight of Vincent’s body pressed into him, making every inch of his pride crumble. Alistair’s eyes widened in shock, the reality of his defeat sinking in fully. A loud, shameful bleat of submission tore from his throat, cracked and desperate, echoing in the bar. His body trembled under Vincent’s dominance, and for the first time, Alistair realized just how much he had misjudged the canine.

The aftermath left Alistair breathless and broken, barely able to stand. His legs trembled as he clung to the bar, his body a mess of sensations—sore, spent, and thoroughly undone. The air around him felt thick, his thoughts clouded by the overwhelming aftermath of what had just transpired.

Vincent, by contrast, was the picture of composure. He stood tall, his posture unchanged, casually smoothing his fur as though nothing had happened. The ease with which he carried himself only deepened Alistair’s humiliation.

Vincent glanced over his shoulder, his grin widening with satisfaction. “Good deer,” he rumbled, voice low and approving. “You were wonderful.”

Alistair, completely shattered, could barely lift his head. He was broken, not just physically, but mentally and emotionally as well. His once-untouchable confidence had been utterly crushed. He stared at the floor, unable to form words, his mind still swimming in a fog of disbelief and awe.

Vincent, unfazed, leaned back slightly, his voice calm and casual. “You might want to go lay down, probably on your belly, buck,” he remarked coolly. “It’ll take you a while to catch up. Oh, and I'd not recommend working tonight, you’ll be quite sore for a while…”

The patrons and staff, who had been watching in stunned silence, finally snapped out of their shock. The atmosphere shifted from disbelief to raucous laughter. One of the staff members had to wipe away tears as they caught their breath, shaking with laughter.

Vincent, completely unaffected, shot them a cocky grin before turning to walk away. His steps were calm, deliberate—entirely nonplussed by the chaos he’d left in his wake.

Alistair, still bent over the bar, could only whimper. His pride was gone. His confidence shattered. His entire sense of self had crumbled under the weight of Vincent’s power. As he watched the canine stroll away, the buck was left with nothing but the crushing realization of what had just happened.

His antlers drooped, his shoulders sagging as the laughter of the staff echoed in his ears. He was no longer the proud, cocky buck he had once been. But amid his humiliation, there was something else—a growing respect for the canine who had utterly dominated him.

Alistair would never forget this. As much as his pride burned from the laughter and the overwhelming loss of control, he knew that what Vincent had done wasn’t just a show of strength. It was a humbling, a lesson in dominance and submission that he would carry with him.

For now, he was left broken and gasping on the bar, his body sore, spent, and aching. But in the coming days, as the haze of the experience cleared, Alistair would return to his usual, charming self—though with a new understanding of just how far Vincent's quiet strength could go. His flirty, confident nature would resurface, but there would always be a new layer of respect for the canine who had humbled him in front of everyone.

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