Bratting for a Rough Ride

Story by Amethyst Mare on SoFurry

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Raiden pushes things too far with his dom, Roman, who takes his bratty sub for the rough ride both of them need...


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Amethyst’s Christmas Tales 2025


Bratting for a Rough Ride


Written by Arian Mabe (Amethyst Mare)

Commissioned by Zapaeryan

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“Unff!”

Raiden whined, the jackal letting his ears slant back submissively, though his body really thrummed with pleasure. The jackal wobbled, his legs buckling, although there was really no need for him to get down on his knees before Roman. He was already naked, his smaller cock swelling to full hardness, but it was not as if that was going to be the focus of the evening now that he’d “slipped up” and let his tongue run wild. Raiden would have thought he needed to stop doing that, at some point, if it had not always turned out so damn fun for him.

The taller, seven-three, hyena smirked subtly, but Roman had never needed to play something like that up to be dominant, no. It just came naturally to him, though all the hyena really did was pay attention. The more he paid attention, the more he was in tune with his submissive partners, his playmates and his subs.

“Where’s all your big talk now?” Roman murmured, his voice deep and velvety, but with a bite to it that was not to be argued with. “Didn’t you want to suck my cock?”

Raiden squirmed. In the dim light of the hallway, upstairs in Roman’s home, he’d pushed things too far. He could have just got what he wanted if he’d asked for it, maybe whined for it or even begged sweetly for it, but he’d just had to be smart and backtalk the hyena. The yellow markings on his bare fur stood out in the hallway, the light from the nearby bedroom spilling out, soft and golden, like his markings. The black of the jackal’s fur otherwise begged attention, but Roman easily grasped him around his wrists. With a height difference of a couple of feet between them, nearly, his dom handled him with arousing ease.

Roman had been about to remove his towel, his fur wet from his shower still, when Raiden had accosted him. Yet the jackal pushed all the right buttons, whether he was being bratty or submissive. The hyena couldn’t really complain, not as his cock throbbed and tented out the blue towel.

Casually, he leaned back against the wall, pushing the towel away with his free paw. Raiden’s legs buckled, for if he went down on his knees he wouldn’t be at the right height to suck his dom’s cock, but they always made it work. His shoulder blades were pushed back from the angle, but the jackal didn’t care, whining openly as he stared at the big, dark prick throbbing in his face, swelling urgently to its full size.

Raiden looked up at the grey hyena adoringly, his spotted hide muted in the lower light. But he didn’t care: he felt he’d more than mapped every inch of Roman with his paws and mouth since he’d been submitting to him. However, it was time for Roman to get what he wanted from him.

When that cock shoved against his muzzle, leaving a sticky smear of pre-cum in its wake, he gasped and parted his lips obediently for it. There was a quip on his lips still, but it was hard to be bratty in the slightest when there was a thick length of cock burrowing its way between them, grinding over his tongue and shoving its way urgently into the back of his mouth.

“Mmmph!”

“Ah, see?” Roman teased casually, taking full advantage of the situation, though Raiden struggled even to keep his bare hind paws under him. “Better with a dick stuffed in your mouth. Where are your bratty lines now? Go on, groan around me. Let me hear you.”

“Mmmm!”

Raiden did his best, but there was still only so much he could do, trying to suck on Roman’s dick even as it thrust back and forth, commanding his muzzle. He trusted Roman to take his weight, inhaling the hyena’s musk, but that thick length dominated his view, so he couldn’t even really see the hyena’s muscular abs, his waist tapering in to a sexy V-point at his hips.

Roman thrust, taunting him. It took a little more than that for the jackal to suck down his cock, but he was just getting started. He leaned back, getting comfortable, needing to do no more than lightly pump his hips, rocking them as the jackal’s cheeks filled with his cock, struggling to contain them. But Raiden had always known what he was getting into with him, so he thrust on, forcing the jackal to swallow around his cock as he drove his dick into the back of Raiden’s throat.

“Mmmph!”

The jackal squirmed and thrashed, but he wasn’t really fighting back. He twisted, yet it was all to sustain himself through the stretch of his throat, how drool marked the corners of his lips as he grunted. But he had to do it, had to take it, his head already swimming in that delirious sway of submission that only came when someone like Roman dominated him. Getting put in his place was the best thing, though sometimes he still had to test boundaries to see if Roman was still up to the task. The hyena had never failed him.

So, he did his best, pressing his tongue to the underside of that cock and scooping it weakly over the head every time Roman pulled back. His shoulders thrummed with strain, though the jackal ignored it, all in the want for the lust his dom could show him. That dick throbbed on Raiden’s tongue, even if it was hardly cradled there as Roman grunted and speared in a little harder, just a little deeper.

Ah, the bratty thing was good at sucking dick: Roman had to acquiesce to that. However, his need burned through him, wanting to satisfy his own urges too. Just using Raiden’s muzzle, until the jackal was fully warmed-up and ready to gulp him down, just was not going to cut it.

He pulled sharply from Raiden’s maw as his sub grunted and panted after it. The pink flick of his tongue curled out in the wake of his cock, but Roman pulled him back.

“Get up.”

Raiden scrambled to obey, on two hind paws, though he would not be for that much longer. Spinning him so the jackal faced the wall, Roman still didn’t head on through to the bedroom. Was it even really necessary?

With his paws on the jackal’s hips, he hefted him from the floor and Raiden caught himself with his forepaws on the wall at just the right moment. It was needed, exactly the way it was right then, and he arched his back, grinding onto Roman as the hyena thrust. Yet it was the hyena, of course, who roughly adjusted Raiden’s position, so his cock was pressed right up to that puckered anal ring, tight and wanting.

It was not tight enough to stop him from pressing his way inside, however. He put his weight into it and Raiden opened up around his dick like the slut he was, though Roman only ever intended that in the best of ways. Praise wasn’t a kink often shared with Raiden, but they spoke in the language of long, ardent thrusts, deep strokes of Roman’s cock forcing their way into the jackal.

“Ahhhhhhhh!”

Raiden cried out, though there were no comprehensible words on his lips, not in the slightest. He didn’t know what to say, what to do, prey to the moment and his dom as Roman claimed his ass as he had done so many times before. Every thrust was welcomed, even if it was an exceedingly tight fit, though it was not as if he hadn’t taken the hyena’s cock before. He squeezed around it, mindlessly wanting to urge Roman on in some way, even if he didn’t really have to. He was getting the fuck of his life either way, his hind paws dangling, body at the whims of the casual dom.

“That’s better… Taking my cock like a good boy now.”

Raiden whined, his ears splaying out.

“Unff… Not…good…”

“Oh, but you damn well are,” Roman grunted, thrusting harder, over half his length buried inside Raiden’s ass, stretching him out. “Just for me. You don’t have to be such a brat to get what you want.”

Raiden could have had something else to say about that, but the hyena dug his fingers harder into his hips still and used that leverage to grind the final inches of his dick into his sub. The jackal stretched around him, like his body was made to fit Roman’s cock, but they’d just practised the jackal taking his prick hard and fast, using every inch, many times before. A good sub knew how to do that for their master – at least, that was what worked in Roman and Raiden’s dynamic.

Only salacious, lewd moans fell from Raiden’s lips as he was fucked, elbows bending as he tried and failed to fully support himself against the wall. It was not for him to hold out against it, however, his cock remaining harder through the brutal fucking, but he wanted every second of it. He would have had it harder still, fucked until he didn’t even know his own name, pinned down and used, a rampant cock slamming into his strained hole and showing him what a real mating was.

He’d be softer when he’d been fucked like that, more submissive. His ears would prick and he’d be more attentive still to Roman, but that was for later. In the moment, he was still getting there, toes flexing and curling while he tried to bear through the immense pleasure, how it arced through him. His cock stayed hard, not softening in the slightest as the meat of Roman’s cock slammed over his prostate, sending grinding shocks of pleasure lancing through his body.

He was just there for the ride, panting heavily through it, cock drooling splattering drops of pre-cum. Roman huffed and ground more deeply still, though neither of them would know, truly, just how much pre he’d spilt into the jackal too.

Roman licked his lips wetly, tongue flicking out and curling against his dark lips in a lewd pull. His hot breath warmed them, drying the gleam of saliva, and he thrust harder. The jackal’s tight hole gripped him, pulling along the length of his cock, and he groaned, thrusting closer and closer to his own high with every stroke.

Need rolled through him, though he checked in with his sub too, keeping an eye on him. There was being rough, like the two of them wanted, and there was being a bad dom – and Roman was far from the latter.

Again and again, the entire length of his cock thrust deep, the jackal’s ass grinding into his crotch. He could not have gone any deeper if he’d tried, but that suited them both, Raiden suddenly yelping and bucking, though he was not free to move all that much at all. Hot spurts of lust dripped from his cock, some catching the wall, though that was from the overpowering strokes of Roman’s dick slamming into him and not the power of his own climax.

Roman smirked, relishing in the tight clench of needy muscle around his dick. Yet he thrust harder and faster, barely pulling out at all before slamming back in again. He needed to keep his cock as deep as possible, a subtle throb of pleasure heralding the encroach of climax, his cock twitching inside the jackal’s ass.

And then it came, demanding spurts of cum shooting, one after the other, deep into Raiden’s ass, the jackal’s hole twitching and squeezing erratically around him. He didn’t hold back, not a single throb of cum, slowing only as his breath laid heavy in heady pants, dragging much-needed breath into his lungs.

“Mmm… Much better.”

He smirked, emptying his nuts of his first load into the jackal’s ass, all while Raiden moaned his agreement. His sub had been “tamed,” at least for the time being, but Roman was sure that bratty side of the jackal would come to the forefront again.

Again, he would put Raiden in his place, as was their way. As cum dripped from Raiden’s stretched tail hole, Roman grinned.

Getting a rough ride out of it was just all part of the fun…