Anum Chaos - How to say "I love you"? - VERSION 3
Anum Chaos © 2007; 2008;2009
"How to say "I love you"?" Version 3
- Overworked English "Yiff" Version -
Original Version from 2007
Reworked by nopast
A small note beforehand: The grammar of the original version was too poorly written so that I overworked it and released it again. The story is told from W.A.'s view. The Story plays around the time were Faly told W.A. her true feelings for him, so a long time before they got married...
W.A. wears his old style: His jeans and a BLACK SHIRT - Not the waist coat...
Starring: W.A. the Anum, Faly
It was a wonderful morning here in Antiol. The birds were singing, the sun was shining and the rest of the day was normally a good day. But anyhow, I didn't feel good. I laid in my bed in my hut, already awake. My mind began to wander and I thought back into my past. I curled into my blankets and spun around as the sun shined onto my face, causing my eyes to open, tiredly as they were.
‘Another damn day...' I thought and got up. It's earlier than usual but anyways. I took my clothes, beginning to dress myself as I suddenly hear someone singing. My ears twitched softly ‘That must be Faly' I smiled to myself. As I'm dressed , I went to the bathroom, which was right next to my own room. I heard how Faly sang under the shower . "La la la~..." She sang with her gentle voice.
I giggled a bit, my mind wandering again. ‘She is such a pretty vixen' I thought and blushed, making me get nervous and cough. "W.A.? Is that you?" Faly asked. "Emmm...yes. It's me. How are you today?" I replied back in a shy tone. "I'm alright. I'm also done now. You can come in if you want." She giggled. ‘Ok...' I thought and slowly opened the door. I took a deep breath "So...how have you..." I stopped in mid-sentence as I looked at her. Quickly, I closed the bathroom door shut again. ‘S-S-S-she is nude!' My face got so red, more than it had ever been in my entire life!
‘She is so cute but...I can't tell her how I feel about her. How would that end? Why does she tease me so often?' I shook my head and drew another deep breath again and said "Faly, could't you have told me that you are....naked?" at which she giggled and replied "Sorry W.A...." She waited for a few seconds "It was a little joke."
"Are you ready now?" I asked shyly. "Yes. Now I'm really done." She replied and I opened the door again. Now she wore her clothes, blue jeans and a black t-shirt. She smiled at me, blushed after a while and quickly left the room. ‘...strange...' I thought and kept silent. I closed the door and blushed a bit as I got out of my clothes. Shortly after that I went under the shower and let the warm water run over my fur, soaking it. "W.A....emmm...can I speak to you after your shower?" Faly stood in front of the bathroom door as she asked me shyly. I blushed and gazed towards the door "Emm...Ok...." I replied and continued with my shower. "Ok...I'll wait in your room then." She said and went into my room.
My heart started bouncing faster and I thought back to the first time I had met Faly. ‘She is so cute...' my mind wandered and stood still on Faly. I couldn't think of anything or anyone else but her.
As I finished my shower, I took a towel and dried myself off, getting myself into my clothes again right in front of the mirror, leaving the bathroom soon after and going back to my room where Faly already sat on the edge of my bed. I sat down next to her, already seeing her caused me to blush once more. As I sat next to her, she blushed and her eyes wandered towards the ground.
I looked at her "Something wrong?" I asked and blushed even more as I talked to her. I felt embarrassed and turned my eyes away from her. Suddenly Faly plaved her hand on my shoulder and I blushed more and looked at her again. "W.A. ...I...I need your help..." She said, stuttering. "What do you want from me?" I asked her, the blush on my cheeks not willing to fade . She teared up as she said "How....how can I say..." She stammered and her eyes wandered over the ground again "How can I say...I love you?"
I was shocked at her words. ‘S-S-S-She loves me too!?' I thought and resumed being silent. ‘I simply HAVE to tell her my feelings now, no matter what her reaction would be...' I took a very long and deep breath before I replied "Faly...can I ask â€"you- something?" I blushed more. Faly lifted her face towards meher eyes filled with tears. I got nervous but I gatherd all the courage I had. "How...Faly...how can â€"I- say ... I love you?" I asked her and my face was more than as just red. She blushed and stopped crying. Then, She hugged me gently "You..." She said "You....." She smiled at me and blushed, just like I did to her.
Suddenly, she brought her lips to mine, kissing me softly before she soon parted my lips with her tongue. ‘WHAT IS SHE DOING...?' I thought at first...but after a while...It felt.....good....yes...I couldn't explain it.
After a moment, she stopped, looking deep into my eyes and asked "How does it feel...?" "Well..." I blushed still wondering about what happened just now "It feels like a good looking vixen." I replied and blushed more as Faly began to kiss me again. I didn't know why, I didn't know how but I felt so good that I COULDN'T really explain it! The one I love loved me too!
Her hands went slowly under my shirt, warm strokes caressed my chest while she kissed me. I got nervous but my basic instinct took my actions over. I stopped kissing her "Are...Are you sure that...that you â€"want- that?"
I asked her within a soft and unsure whisper but in that moment she pushed me onto my bed and laid down on me, within that time she took off my shirt and allowed it to fall next to the bed. "Yes....Honey...I beg you...I have waited...so long for this moment..." She replied and stroked my nude body again. It felt so good! Her caresses forcing light gasps to escape my mouth, yet, even a stronger gasp as she leaned down and licked my chest. AWW!!! Damn! That feeling!
She began to pant a bit herself as she sat up and took her shirt off. My eyes traced over her upper body only to stop gazing into her deep eyes. A moment ago I was ashamed of myself to stare at her like that but now....I couldn't get my eyes away from her. She lowered herself back onto me again, her fingers fiddling at my jeans to open the. It was by that moment that I gently to licked her breasts with my warm tongue. I didn't know why, but I had to! She gasped from this passionate touch while she finally got me out of my jeans "It's...not fair...I wear nothing and you are still wearing your jeans." I said with a grin. I rolled around with her and now laid ontop of her, still panting and out of control from the way I felt feelings. I unzipped her jeans and slid them off of her.
Completely nude how we were now we began to kiss and stoke each other, exploring the other's body. THEN I felt it! My.....my...length...got harder and I stopped my motions. I blushed and closed my eyes, coughing "Faly....I'm not sure.... Should we do this?" I asked her and blushed more. Her lower lips moistened with her excitment, I could feel it! I felt it as my plength errected further and softly touched her little pretty ...."Flower".
She gasped more and replied "I beg you...please do it..." after her words were said, she wrapped her legs around my waist and pulled me towards her so that I suddenly went into her! I moaned and gasped! WHAT A DAMN FEELING! And it's comming so abruptly! My basic Instincts took over once more and I could't stop to hump her gently. She gasped with pleasure and rocked her body against my humping. ‘Huh...huh...It feels good and...she is so wet...she feels so good...GNAR!'
I suddenly threw my head back and opened my eyes completely. "AWW.....I'm coming!!!" I moaned loudly, just as she moaned with me! I brought her to her climax!
We both came at the same time and it was a feeling we shared with pleasure. I panted heavily like she did. I lowered myself down onto her, the climax had made me so weak. After a minute or two, she licked my face and smiled at me. "Honey....huh...huh...how can I say I love you?" I smiled and replied "Just say it while facing me and then kiss me." I blushed.
She embraced me , looked deep into my eyes and then said "I love you..." in the sweetest voice, kissing and squeezing me just before we both relaxed...
The End
Walter Albrecht / Anum Chaos © 2007; 2008 , Nopast 2009