Commission story- Monster Hunter
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Commission story Monster Hunter
This is a commission, meaning that t...
Commission story
Monster Hunter
This is a commission, meaning that the idea for the content of the story is from the commissioner. This is a standard warning, if you are under the legal age to view this kind of material then hit the back button, if you chose to ignore this warning, then that's not my fault. Also please be mindful of the tags for the story. If there is something there that you do not like then go back now. If you chose to ignore that warning to, then that's your fault. If you like the tags and are the legal age, then feel free to keep reading, and I hope that you enjoy it.
It was a calm afternoon in the woods out side the walled city of Rak'ki. Or as it was better known, the Imperial city. A band of hunters were on the way back to the city from a exceptionally successful hunt. Not only did the hunters manage to come across a small nest of Nargacuga, but they came across a strangely colored one. With minimal casualties the hunting party managed to capture the beast, deciding to take it and present it to the king on Rak'ki as a gift. The party came to a small clearing, a place that they had used on there in trek to camp for the night, and it was going to be used for the same thing again. After having the slave set up the tents and get a fire going, the hunters set about cooking a meal, and resting. A young slave boy was busy taking care of his work. The dark haired and green eyed boy had be tasked with feeding the catch. He was dressed in just the simplest of clothes, a collar adorning his neck, a small tag bearing his name, Jared. He slowly edged closer to the cage, being wary of the beast. He knew what it can and would do it got out. He got close to it, and took in its looks. The beast's yellow eyes followed every move that he made. Its tail lashing a bit as he put his hand close to the cage, letting it lean in, and sniff over his hand. Something a kin to a smile showing on its beak like muzzle. With out warning it reached out with a long, slender arm, its paw grabbing the boy and pulling him close. "Wha?" Was all the boy could get out as he was pulled close, letting him see two things about the monster. The first, the monster was a female, and quiet an endowed one at that. The second, she didn't seem to want to hurt it. "Your....your not going to hurt me?" He asked looking surprised. She shook her head, answering his question. "I wish I could help you, but I'm in the same place as you." He said pointing to his collar. She let out a soft rumble, a sharp clawed finger, this made the boy shiver a bit but he soon let out a sigh of relief when he saw that she was cutting the collar off. "You....you have some plane don't you?" He said, a devious shimmer appearing in his green eye, his mind formulating their escape. "I know." He said walking to the door and opening it, and slipping in. "We wait till they all fall asleep and I let you out, and you do the dirty work of taking care of them." He said setting the food bowl in front of her. She just nodded and set about devouring the meal that he had placed in front of her. Jared went about the rest of the afternoon, doing his chores. Witch right now involved cleaning the hunter's armors and weapons. Once he was done with that he made sure to put them at the vary back of the storage cart. "Oooooh this might help." He mumbled as he say a small box containing a few knock out potions. He knew that they were strong, seeing as one could knock out several enemies if used right. So one should be more than enough to knock out or at least slow down four hunters. The hunters weren't the average group of rag tag mercenaries that you could find dicking around at the local bar, drinking and waiting for work to come to them. Jared smiled as he carefully hid the little vile on his person and left the storage cart and went to make dinner. "Hay runt, is dinner about done?" The largest hunter yelled across the camp site to Jared, who was busy cooking the meat stew. "Just about, give me about ten more minutes." He said smiling to himself, and producing the vial. "And then just a bit more till I'm free." He mumbled to himself as he poured the contents of the vile into the bubbling pot. "God damn it, hurry up." One of the other slaves yelled, tossing a rock. The rock missed, any other time it would have nailed Jared in the back of the head, but the hunters were celebrating their victory. "Well come one." He said as he reached for the first bowl and filled it up and handed it to the first hunter in the line. He repeated this with the other three, and then went for his meal. He managed to make him a bowl of the stew and hide it from the others before adding the special ingredient. He made is way to his bowl and then to the cage, and sat down next to it and started eating. The monster just lifted its head a bit and watched him. "You know girl, what are you going to do when you get out of here?" He asked as he ate and watched her sitting there. She let out a sound that could be a kin to a purr or murr. "I guess you'll go off to find a new pack or something. I don't know what I'll do." He said looking down a bit. He looked up, suddenly feeling the monster nudging his cheek, the little nudge seemed like something more, she was nuzzling his cheek. It looked like she was trying to cheer him up. Jared let out a little epp as he felt her doing this. "Thank you." He said softly as he reached up and patted her cheek. It didn't take but about an hour for the drugs to work there magic, and put the four hunters into a nice deep and peaceful sleep. Jared had faked falling asleep, once he had finished his chores of coarse. He smiled as he opened his eyes after sneaking a little peak to make sure that they where asleep. "I hope this doesn't hurt to bad." he said looking at the hunter that had passed out close to him. "I'm kinda sorry that it has to happen like this, but I'm not going to be sad that I'm free." He said getting up and making his way to the storage cart. He really didn't have to bother sneaking, considering how drugged up the hunters are. He grabbed one of the extra back packs and packed it full of different supplies that he would need to make it through the forest and back to the city. Once he had gathered the supplies he went around to the back to the cage and smiled. "Well this is it girl." He said reaching for the lock on the cage. "I hope you find a new pack, or mate, or what ever your going to look for." He said opening the lock and door, letting it swing open. She rushed out in a furred blur, heading right for the hunters. Jared shivered as he herd the sounds of the nargacuga was setting about her task of getting rid of the hunters. A brief thought passed the now free slave, is she just killing them, or is it worse? Is she eating them? He was strangely tempted to go back and see what was happening, but he decided against it. He just wanted to get back to the city, and figure out his next move. The sounds soon grew low, and then stopped all together. "Well, looks like she finished them." He said as he kept walking through the strangely quiet forest. The place was normally filled with the sounds of the different monsters moving about, and doing there things, but tonight was different. The faint rustling of leaves, and snapping of twigs could be herd echoing through the woods. The sounds coming from the now free slave making his way through the woods. His bare, and warn feet crunching leaf and twig alike. Soon settling on taking a break after walking for what felt like half the night, he took his back pack off and set it next to the log he sat on, stretching out his legs. "Well I should be close now." He said looking off towards the city, seeing the glimmering lights in the distance. "What..what was that?" he asked no one other than him self. He quickly got to his feet and hosted the sword that he had taken with him. With out warning the nargacuga leapt out from the bushes and landed right in front of him, blood still staining her muzzle. "You?! What are you doing here?" He asked staring her down, shivering a bit. "I don't want to hurt you." He said backing away slowly. The monster stood up, and slowly started walking towards Jared. Her movements not showing any kind of aggression. The monster's body was in perfect view, now that she was out of the cage she could stand up. She was clearly taller that the slave, her body is tight, and curved in all the right places, her ample breasts bouncing a slight bit as she walked closer. She must have sensed that he was scared that she was after him, and she was after him, but in a deferent what then he was thinking. She stopped and fell back to walking on all fours, and from there she laid down and showed her belly to the male. A sign that he knew that she wasn't going to hurt him. The thought that this could be a trap did cross his mind but with the female monster lying there and showing off her supple breasts, down to her tight and softly furred belly and then right to that spot between her legs. Her supple and slightly damp slit hiding behind her soft fluff. "Your...your not going to hurt me are you?" He asked softly as he dropped his sword, knowing in hine sight that it was an incredibly dumb idea. He closed the distance between them, and knelled down. "I guess you came back to me, seeing as I'm the only one that was nice to you." He said smiling and tearing a bit of his shirt off, and using it to clean her muzzle. She murred and nuzzled into his hand as he did. "I'm sorry girl but can't go with me to the city. They'll kill you the moment that you get close to the city." He said getting up and going to sit under a tree, using the trunk as a back bored. She came up to him and nuzzled his cheek, she was doing her best to show him that she wanted him to come with her. She stopped nuzzling him and started tugging his sleeve trying to get him to come with her. "No girl I'm not going to go with you, or take you to the city. It's to dangerous for me to stay here, and to dangerous for you to go to the city." He said petting her, and smiling softly. She just let out a huff and walked over to a near by tree and squatted down, and let out a little grunt. The air filled that was filled with only the sound of the two breathing was soon filled with a new sound. The sound of the monster farting. The sounds where low and rather quiet, but the smell was rather powerful. Jared blushed a bit and looked away. Following the farts the sound of a thick heavy plopping sounds filled the air. Not only was she relieving gas, but she was flat out shitting. Jared couldn't help looking, something about watching the monster do her business, he could feel his cock starting to stir and harden. It didn't last long, and the monster was done. The monster murred as she finished and walked away from the pile of mess that she had just left and went over to the back pack and started sniffing around it. "Hay, don't mess with that. It has to last me till I can get to the city." Jared said getting up and starting to walk over to the pack. The monster's ears twitched as she herd him getting up and yelling at her. It was then something in her mind seemed to click, she let out a little snort and took one of the straps in her beak and started running into the woods. "Hay, com back here." He yelled at her, and taking off after her, he was doing his best to keep up with her, and he was managing to do so. He was wondering if he was faster than he thought or if she was going slow, trying to lead him off to someplace; someplace that he might regretted going in the end. After leading him deeper into the woods, she stopped in a fairly large clearing, complete with a small, crystal clean river. She stopped in the middle of the clearing and sat the pack down and waited next to it. "Great, now I'm deeper in, and lost." He said looking at the monster, and shaking his head. "I'm starting to think that you lead me here for something." Jared said looking at her. The monster's ears twitching and folding back a bit as she stood up and walked over to him and started to nuzzle him, much like a cat would it's owner's leg. "Look, I set you free so that you could go be free and that I could do the same." Jared said stepping back a bit. She looked up at him, her eyes glittering with something that the boy couldn't quite put his thumb on. She went back to nuzzling him, this time she was nudging at a new spot. He beak nudging and rubbing along the boy's flaccid cock, witch wasn't going to stay that way long. The monster's attention was causing it to grow hard. She stopped and looked up at him, and then to a small cave. "You want me to follow you right?" He asked, knowing that she wanted him to and that she couldn't answer him. "I'll go with you, but I don't know about staying." He said taking the backpack and following her into the cave. Her long tail softly wrapping around his wrist and tugging, she was leading him through the dark cave. He kept up with a few of the twists and turns, but soon he was lost. Suddenly she pulled him around a corner and into a large open area. Large crystals growing all throughout the cavern, they gave off a glow. The large number of crystals made the room glow softly, Jared could see the room clearly. "Wow. This is amazing." He said walking in, the nargacuga following right next to him. The two walked into the middle of the large room, Jared sat his bag down and looked at one of the spire of crystal, his mind distracted by the softly glowing stone so much so that he didn't feel the beast nudge and then tug at his shirt. "What? What is it girl?" He asked turning to face her, seeing her sitting in front of him. She just leaned in and started nuzzling him again, her beak going back to what it had started in the woods just a short time ago. "Girl....what are you doing?" He asked trying to push her away, but that was a fruitless task. She would just keep pushing his hands out of the way, or even nipping at them if he wouldn't move them. "Stop it. Your not supposed to." He said feeling his cock growing hard in spite of himself. "I mean I'm not supposed to. Its not right." He said, his voice softening as his cock grew harder, and soon tenting his shirt. She took that as a sign that Jared was ready for the next part, and without hesitation she wiggled her beak and head under his shirt, and started to tug at his shorts. Jared's hands reached down and lifted his shirt up and tossed it to the side, and then gave the monster a hand with his shorts. With the rope untied and his shorts at his ankles, his cock sprung free and stood tall and ready. Jared was well endowed for someone his age, his cock would make most, if not all men envious, it stood a god ten inches from tip to base, he has a lovely pair of full balls to go with it. The nargacuga let out a soft and long murr as she set about using her long, agile tongue to lap over the large cock. Taking her time as she did, seeming to tease the boy and making his cock jump and twitch at the attention. With one last, agonizingly slow lick she stopped and took a few steps back and turned. It was then that she made her attentions clear, letting Jared know what her true wants were. She lowered her front in and lifted her rump, giving a clear view of her damp and ready slit. He didn't saw anything, he just kicked his shorts over to where his shirt was, and got down on his knees. He lined his large cock up with the slit, and started sliding into it. The wet, heat that it was giving off made him want more, and soon he had just that, he was hiltted deep into the monster. His cock head brushing the deepest parts of her flower, kissing the lips of her cervix. She let out a murr in approval of what he was doing, she even gave him a little nod, telling him that it was all right for him to have his way with her, how ever he wanted and that was just what he was going to do. He wasted little time in starting to mate his new lover nice and hard. His cock slamming into her fast, and with enough force to make her breasts jiggle as he did. He let out a loud moan as his hands traced down her body, taking in the soft curves of her slender body and the feeling of her strong and supple muscles. His hands then making there way up her softly furred belly and to her jiggling breasts. He continued his rough thrusting into his lover, his balls starting to draw up as he got closer. His hands Groping and fondling her breasts as he slammed into her. He was panting and moaning all most non-top now. She let out a loud rawr like moan as she came, her tight wall clamping onto the cock that was pounding into her, the walls doing there best to milk the cock. It wasn't long till he let out a loud moan of his own as he slammed into her one last, hard time. His cock pushing deeper than he thought it could go, the tip poking right through the cervix as he came. His seed spurting out in force, and painting the walls of the monster's cervix, ensuring that she would be soon bearing his off spring. He held her close as the two fell to the cool floor of the cave, both panting and happy in the after glow of their orgasms. Jared stayed firmly planted in his lover, just enjoying the feeling of her still hot and moist pussy, shivering a bit as his cock slowly softened and slipped out with a wet slurp and only the smallest trickle of cum leaking out. Most of his seed was planted deep in her, guaranteeing that she would be pregnant with a pup. Jared was the first to let out a yawn, but not the first to fall asleep, his lover had dozed off snuggled right up to him. She had her tail wrapped around his leg, and her head resting on his arm. Jared let out a little sigh knowing that there was no getting away at this point, so he wrapped an arm around her waist and laid his head on her softly furred body and shortly passed out. The two slept for what was left of the night and then well through the next day, waking up some time afternoon. The monster was the first to wake, stretching her muscles and setting about grooming the matted fur between her legs, letting out a murr as she tasted the mix of her juices and her new lover's cum. Her soft movements and happy murrs slowly woke Jared up, who gave a loud yawn and stretch. "Mmmmh good morning girl." He said reaching over to rest a hand on her shoulder, blushing a bit when he realized what she had just finished doing. She let out a murr and a happy chirp when she felt his hand on her. She seemed to take it as a sign and started to groom her lover, cleaning away the dried mix of their juices that covered his cock. The tongue that was lapping at his cock caused it to soon stir to life and become hard again. She gave another teasing lick as she stopped licking over his cock and turned away from him, presenting her pussy to him. He was getting ready to say something to her, but he was caught off guard at what she did next. She squatted down so that her slit was right over the head of his cock and she let out a small grunt. A strong stream of urine spraying from her loins as she did, the hot water splashing and drenching Jared's lap. The spray was so strong that the splatter was landing on his chest. The scent was strong, all most over powering; it wasn't a bad smell to Jared, there was actually something about the scent that was turning him on more, making him want his monster lover more. She let out a soft sigh of relief when the spray finally slowed to a trickle and then stopped. Jared did know a little about monsters, and knew that when one did something like this, it meant that their marking their territory. "Girl, does that mean what I think?" he asked smiling and reaching a hand down to her damp mound and running a finger along her damp folds. "If it does, then I will stay yours, and you will be mine." He said pulling his finger from her slit and licks it clean, savoring the sweet and somewhat spicy taste of her. "But you'll need a name." He said smiling and resting his hands on her hips and pulled her onto his lap, his cock slipping right into her deliciously tight hole. "I was thinking, Sheira." He said following it with a moan. She gave a little nod and a soft moan in approval. Jared started to thrust his hips upwards into Sheira's cunt, like last night he didn't waste any time. He started pounding away, his lover bouncing in his lap. His thrusting and her bouncing made her breast jump and jiggle as they made love, his hands traced up her sides and found what they where looking for. His hands started working over her breasts, his long fingers working over them, rubbing and groping the furred mounds of flesh, finger tips tweaking and twisting nipples. They where both moaning and panting up a storm as the they made love, in celebration of there commitment to one another. With a thunderous roar from Sheira, and a loud moan from Jared, they came. Sheira's walls clamping down and milking Jared's cock, her cervix opening and letting the tip of his cock slip in and pump more seed into her, adding to the load that he left in her last night. Once again the two collapsed on one another, Sheira snuggled on top of Jared, who didn't mind having the large monster girl on him. He smiled softly as his hands moved from her breasts and tickled there way down her belly, and then over her hips, taking in the curves of her body as he did. The two stayed snuggled together for a few hours, just enjoying that lovely feeling of closeness. "Well Sheira, if this is going to be our home, then we need to do some work." He said smiling and letting out a soft moan as he felt himself slipping free from her cunt. "We need a bed of some sort." he said as she got off of him and stretched. "I can go back and gather some of the bedding material the hunters used." He said getting up and gathering his clothes and got dressed. Sheira set about busying herself with the task of digging out an area for the bedding to be laid. Now that it was day light outside Jared could see where he was going, so making it back to the camp site wouldn't be a problem. It was literally a walk in the woods to get back to the camp sight, but it wasn't a pretty sight. The bodies of the hunters where scattered about, all dead and stiff. From the looks of there wounds Sheira did make it fast and as painless as she could, and Jared was happy about that. He walked up to the cart that held all the supplies and walked in, he figured that it would be best to get everything that he could use, and to do it in a single trip. He knew that the king would send out a group to search for the hunters and if he was found then he would have to go back, and now that he had someone to be with; it was something he didn't want to happen. He gathered up the sleeping furs and some leather mats, what was left of the dried meat, some extra clothes and cloth, and the few hunting and fishing tools that they group had on them. After stuffing the pack that he found he set off to the cave, to his new home. He wasn't going to look back, he couldn't, not with the way things had changed for him. He was freed from his life as a slave, he didn't have to worry about people looking down on him, or having to do demeaning work, and he had his new lover, something that he thought he would never have given his status in life. As he got closer to the cave a scent hit him. It was something strong, but not bad smelling, something that he had smelt before. It hit him as he reached the edge of the clearing and saw Sheira marking trees. She wasn't just marking them by peeing on them, she was all so marking them using her scat. Jared found the sight of going from tree to tree, and lifting her backside and letting a spurt of pee spurt onto the tree trunk, or a lump of dung plop onto the tree's roots. He smiled as he walked into there new home. "I'm back Sheira." he said smiling at her as she walked up to him and followed him into the cave and took him to the little den that she had dug out for them. Jared sat down the large pack and fished out the leather mats and started spreading them out, Sheira helping the best that she could, after getting the mats laid out they started on spreading out the furs. The inside of the cave stayed a nice, warm temperature, one could get away with just having on light clothes, or not even having any on at all. It didn't take long for the two to settle into the flow of things. The lovers would head out on hunts together. Sheira would move ahead, and flush out the prey and Jared would be there ready with his bow to fell it. Together they would gather the food and Jared would dry it out so it would last longer, so in no time at all they had a nice stock pile that would last them through the winter. Then with the help of Sheira's sharp claws they dug a small trench from the river that lead into the cave. It branched out, on leading to a small pool next to there sleeping area, the other to a deeper pool that acted as there bathing pool. It was a nice, cool afternoon, the two of them where sitting next to the river. Jared was fishing, more for the fun of it than for the need of food, and Sheira was curled up next to him, partly dozing off in the setting sun. Jared had noticed that Sheira was a little more apathetic, and was eating more, it dawned on him that she was gravid, that she had his child in her, growing. The thought of her being a mom and him being a dad filled him with a great pride. Then again he knew that with all the love that the had been making that she would end up with a baby, and he knew that they would have more than the one too. Time passed slowly, and peacefully. As the months passed Sheira's pregnancy started to show more and more. Her belly grew large and round, her breasts swelled with the milk that would nourish her off spring. Even through out her pregnancy the two's love making didn't change, they would make love regularly and often. Jared smiled as he leaned in and kissed along her neck, his hands tracing over her large belly, feeling the life growing within, his hand coming to rest on one of her breasts and started teasing and tweaking the nipple, getting a little squirt of milk as he did. He smiled at her as he slipped between her legs and slipped into her opening, letting out a moan at the warm, wetness. His thrusting was nice and slow, long teasing thrusts. He leaned in and kissed her, the kiss was short as his thrusts picked up, and he started kissing down her neck. His lips meet with her nipples and he began suckling a bit, moaning as he got closer. Sheira's milk was sweet and strong, it was better than any sweets that the boy had ever had. Sheira was the first to let out a roar, signaling her orgasm, her walls working there magic as they quivered around his cock, forcing a moan from Jared as he pulled her close and held her tight and started filling her tunnel with his seed. And thus ended the two lover's nightly ritual. Many rounds of strong and passionate love making, then passing out in one another's arms, and sleeping well through the night. But this night would be a bit different. That was the faithful winter morning that her pups where born. After a long morning of pushing and panting, the cave was soon filled with the sound of two little nargacuga pups whining and crying for mom. Jared smiled, snuggled close to the nursing mother, one of his hands resting on her shoulder, the other stroking the check of his pup. "One boy and one girl" He said smiling and looking them over. The two looked nothing like their father, but he knew that their where his and her's, and that he was going to be the best father that he could. "A girl so cute and sweet, delicate to, she will be Rose. A boy strong and smart, kind as can be, he will be Atlas." Jared spoke softly, Sheira giving a murr and a nod of approval. This was just the beginning of the two's life together, and all the things that are to come. The trials and tribulations and the rewards that come with them. And with that the lover's story started.
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Idea, characters and commission by Commissioner. Story written by Shanoa Lilly Frostpaw. Monster Hunter and Nargacuga belongs to their owner.