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Elisyum: The Great Lords: Chapter 1 (Re-written)

Guardianship

The forest was very calm at the Island of Pout, the the wild animals and wary travellers were getting ready for a big storm, it was evening, but it seemed night.

Sometimes I wonder if I made the right choice... all of this... my life, if you can call it life seen all, but a bad dream... a dream that i wish to awaken from. That day... I still remember exactly what happened...

"Nooooo! Mother!!"

"My son you... must... hurry... run!"

"Shhhh don't talk."

"I'm sorry my son."

"Huh... what are you doing mom!"

"Veratio miscael minaci optom agravel..."

"No mom please stop!"

"Protectio maxis... amem!"

"Ahhhhh!"

"Sorry my dear... its for your own good... at least like this I'll know... that... you... are...safe..."

I still feel sometimes, the magic coursing through my body, encasing me, stopping me in time... untill he appeared... in my dreams... Khai...

"Child... last living of Cervius... do you wish to be my avatar?"

"W-w-what?"

"As my avatar you will have a long life, but will not be able to bear children... you will have control over part of my powers, but you will lose part of your free will, should you accept I will show you to your objective, should you refuse you will awake and remember nothing of this dream... now tell me do you accept my offer? Will you make the pact?"

"Yes!"

If only I'd knew he was going to send me to this stinky island an have do nothing more than start building that small shrine... sight... now the pact has been made, and I've become a tool, a weapon, to be manipulated by his hands... sometimes I wish I was dead... were could that temple be? I've been looking for hours and a big storm is coming, the animals have already left this area, I must make haste.

This must be it! This is the only temple to have the simbol of life in this cursed island.

The boy entered the temple and inside he saw a gigantic sapphire. Surrounding it were many statues of strange people offering strange gifts to the sapphire. The temple had an air of wisdom, it had many surprisingly lit torches scattered on the walls and a slab containing writings in an unreadable language. The boy walked towards the crystal and inside he saw something... a form that seened to be a body... when he touched the crystal the torches were blown and the temple entrance suddenly dissapeared. Then a voice started to speak inside the boy's head.

"You who dared to candidate for guardiamship... step closer an take the 3 tests, should you fail your soul will be consumed and your body will be crushed into dust."

"Wait I didn't candidate to anything!"

"The 1st test is the test of strenght."

Suddenly 3 of the statues that were around the crystal started moving and head towards the boy. 'Damn I have no choice!'

1 of the statues tried to pounce him, he quickly stepped out of the way barely escaping the furious lunge of the statue. The boy drew his katana, the katana's balde was silver with a slight touch of blue, on both sides of the blade there was the image of a chinese dragon that begun at the base and ended at the tip. The boy swung the sword and with a mighty slash he managed to cut off a leg of 1 statue making it fall and shatter. The other 2 statues seemed to react to this and turned into what seemed a strange metal, then they moved to attack. The boy once again tried to cut off the leg of the statue but the statue didn't suffer even a scratch. 'What the hell!? The Leviathan couldn't cut it?' The nearest statue punched the boy full on his belly sending him flying in the air and landing with a big thud. Both statues started to head towards the boy then he had an idea. 'This statue's punch is very strong, maybe...'. the boy lifted hmself and ran towards the middle of both statues making them hit thenselves and thus passing the test.

"Very well... now the test of Wisdom." A strange box appeared in the boy's hands an the voice said. "Open it without breaking it." The boy tried but was not sucessful the box would not open, it had no opening so the boy grabbed his sword and cut a small opening in the top of the box then a flame burst throught the opening.

"You have failed!"

"No! You told me to open it without breaking it and I didn't I just cut an opening large enought to get whatever was in there

"Well done, you are keen, many would have begged for another chance, now the final test the Test of Loyalty."

"You have to guard the torch from the water how will you do it?". Suddenly a wave formed the boy quickly pointed his hand towards the wave and yelled "Freeze!" the water froze and stopped. He took the torch and took it to a safe place, then the ice shattered letting the wave go.

"Good now destroy the torch.". The boy initially started to turn towards the torch to blow it, but he stopped midways. "No. You told me to guard it and thats what I'm going to do. I can't destroy the torch." He said simply. 'Heh... all those tricky classes Master Keen put me through really had some use after all, like he always said: 'A true warrior must have a tongue as sharp as his sword'.

"Well done young one, you have the right to be the faithful guardian of this Keaton."

The boy froze at the words that where spoken. 'Keaton? They're supposed to be all dead! So that's why Khai sent me to look for this temple!'

The temple was soon lit by many torches and the crystal started to light up. Soon shards of the crystal started to fall and the crystal was torn in 2 pieces in the center the boy could see the Keaton, she was for the lack of a better word beautiful, she had a slim (but not overly slim) body with perfect curves that could Afrodite envious, a light grey fur that was almost white, standing at 5'4, her hair long and grey as well, but darker than her fur, her 3 tails had snow white tips and her breasts were perfect not too big, but not small in any way, she had a small muzzle and black tipped ears, a black nose, her hands and feet were snow white making it look like she was wearing small gloves and socks...and... she was naked.

When the boy saw that she was about to fall he quickly dashed forward sheating his katana and grabbed the vixen girl in midair, unbalanced he fell and to prevent him from falling atop her he quickly turned falling and hitting his back painfully. He took his cloak off and placed it around the girl clothing her, she was sleeping peacefully, he gently laid her on the floor, she was trembling and she was cold, after laying her down he noticed that a strange crest appeared on the left side of his chest, but he didn't have time to look at it he had to rush, grab wood, hunt, and get fresh water.

The girl woke up with a small faint moan, yawning and stretching a bit the cloak held tightly to her body, she glanced her surroundings noticing that something was different she then turned to meet jade green eyes staring expressionless at her ocean blue eyes. She gasped at the surprised and backed a bit looking at the figure standing before her. It was a boy, probably on his 19s, standing at 5,7, he had a human face and red scaly arms, his fingertips had sharp claws his eyes pupils were slits and he had two tatoos on his cheeks that ressembled stalagmites, he was blonde and had long hair, he was wearing a deep blue t-shirt with ripped sleeves, and baggy, almost black blue pants, held by a dark brown belt and he was wearing small boots, he wasn't very bulky, but had some muscles... she kept staring at him for awhile, then she came to herself and said.

"Where am I? And who are you?"

"You are in a temple on a isolated island called Pout, and who am I just doesn't matter, or at least it won't after some time." She quickly notice the crest in his chest.

"You bear the guardian's crest so you must be my guardian."

"Guardian? So that's what this crest is about."

"Yes, every Keaton Shaman has a guardian to protect..." She was quickly interrupted by the sound of a growling stomach, her stomach, she blushed, her light grey fur not helping her hide it much.

"Don't worry I got food and water, you must be hungry and parched after being in that crystal for who knows how long." The boy grabbed a steak from the small campfire and a small jug with water and handed it down to her.

"Thank you."

"Eat." She quickly ate the steak and drank all the water of the small jug then with a satisfied sight put the jug down, she stared at the boy he was now standing near the entrance watching the sky outside.

"So... you were assigned as my guardian and aren't even going to ask my name?"

"Speak if you wish..."

"My name is Michiro Ambershalk, and yours is?"

"Doesn't matter, sooner or later we'll part ways..."

"I'll follow you."

"You can't."

"Yes I can, as my guardian its your duty to protect me."

"Maybe, but I doubt I'll be your guardian for much longer, my god will tell me to hand the crest to someone stronger than me anyways."

"What if I refuse? Guardianship can only be passed if the guardian and the shaman are willing to pass it."

"You... well I guess I'm tied to you then..."

"Yes you are." said Michiro with a smirk.

"Now tell me your name."

He remained silent. Michiro stood up and kneeled near him faking the best pleading puppy face she could.

"Pleeeeaaaaassse?"

"Sight... ok then if you insist..."

Michiro grinned

"Janus Alreil..."

"Pleased to meet you Janus, my guardian."

"The pleasure is mine." Michiro sat beside him and asked.

"So are you going to stay there looking at the sky all day or are you going to do something else?"

"I'm calculating how much time we have to get you to the cabin near the shrine my god had me build."

"How about we go now? Its pretty cold here."

"Your muscles must still be numb from staying still and you must be tired, I'm just waiting for you to get some rest."

"I admit I'm a bit tired, but I think I can make it."

"No... let's wait a bit... its bette that way."

"If you insist." Michiro snuggled up with Janus and rested her head on his shoulder.

"What are you doing?"

"Keeping you warm... you must be cold from sitting here away from the fire and only with this sleeveless shirt."

"I'm used."

"Oh... well I'm feeling a bit cold and the campfire is just getting boring, besides you have a good smell, and I feel warmer near you than the fire."

"What?"

"Janus I don't know how to express this myself but I just feel good here like this."

"Michiro... you don't even know me, I'm not a person that can love."

"Janus... I... I don't care, just let me stay here like this for now."

"Very well..." They stood there with Janus looking at the sky and Michiro hugging him, her eyes closing and her breath getting heavier and heavier as she entered a calm deep slumber. She was very close to him now, he could feel her heart beating slowly, her breath, her smell... she smelled better than a bed of the worlds finest flower, her silky soft fur rubbing gently agains his scales, he was looking at her inhaling her wonderful smell, his heart beating at an increasing rhithym, his stomatch felt like it had butterflies in it, he was feeling hard to concentrate in anything but her. He was now looking at her sleep gently breathing, smiling, so calm as if nothing could hurt her... hugging him... Janus wondered what was making him feel this way... could it be... love? But... how? How could he love in a world where love had almost dissapeared, beign replaced by hate towards each other...

Janus stood still just looking at her with tender loving eyes and small but meaningful smile on his face... he probably wasted half a hour looking at her, and then he moved his hand and placed it atop her head, gently rubbing it up and down along her hair, then he started to scratch the base of her ears, she opened her mouth to let out a small faint moan, but loud enought for Janus to her then he suddenly stopped.

"Why did you stop?"

"S-s-sorry I woke you up."

"Please don't stop that felt just so good, you have such a gentle touch."

Janus continued to scratch her ear she moaned every now and then, they stood like this for about 15 minutes when her eyes opened and she gazed up to look into his eyes he stopped scratching her ears and placed his hand on her left shoulder, they were now looking deeply at each other's eyes, as if they were staring into each other's soul, Michiro leaned forward a bit, so did Janus, they closed their eyes almost simultaneously and locked into a deep, passionate kiss, exploring each other's mouth enjoying the moment to the maximum, after what seemed an eternity they broke their kiss and looked at each other's eyes once again...

"Michiro... I... I..."

"Janus I love you." Janus sighted gathering all his courage he spoke softly.

"I love you Michiro..." And they locked into another deep kiss.

After they broke their kiss Michiro let the cloak drop exposing her perfect breasts and moving to unbuckle Janus' belt, Janus cupped both her breasts rubbing his palm scales gently on her nipples eliticing a moan of pleasure from her. She then started to remove his shirt and once she had suceeded they locked in another deep and passionate kiss. Janus was now wearing only his boxers witch where quickly removed by Michiro showing his scaly legs and his erection, Michiro then noticed that he also had dragon legs even though they looked more like human legs than a dragon's. Janus removed the cloak from Michiro and threw it wo were his clothes were now laying he then place the tip of his cock on her slit, his manhood getting lubricated by her slippery nectar. They blushed.

"Janus... please be gentle... I... I've never been with a guy before..."

"I promise I will Michiro... and... well... you are my first too..."

They kissed and Janus started to penetrate her in a slow but steady rhithym, Michiro was moaning as Janus penetrated her, until he met the barrier that was proof of her maidenhood.

"Michiro are you sure you want..."

"Janus, just don't stop."

Janus cupped one of her breasts, playing with her erect nipple and started to lick and suckle at ther other nipple, she was moanig at the waves of pleasure coursing through her body and then with a gentle thrust Janus took her maiden hood, Michiro twitched lightly at the pain, but it was quickly replaced by increasing waves of pleasure, Janus was now fully hilted and they once again stared at each other's eyes with a smile in their faces, then they locked into another kiss before wispering to each other, "I love you." Then Janus began thrusting at a slow and steady rhithym, he leaned and resumed his sucking on her nipple while his hand was now slowly rubbing her sides, his other hand was now laying on her hips while he thrusted into her, and she started bucking her hips in perfect syncronism to Janus thrusts until they tensed and with a final thrust Janus planted his seed as deep as he could on her body while she spilled her juices onto Janus' cock.

They laid there on the floor still locked togheter panting, both tired, Janus withdrew from her and laid beside her embracing her in a tight hugh using the last of his strength to say.

"I love you."

They both smiled and fell asleep, Janus lovingly and protectively embracing her, with a smile just as big as hers.

Meanwhile on the gods plane:

"Khai was this part of your plans?"

"Yes, Phoenix... they love each other just as we do."

"But... but Khai, what if they are separated? What will be of then?"

"Don't worry the guardian's crest will make sure Janus is where Michiro is and besides..."

"Yes?"

"Their love will prove to be a weapon more powerful than all the existing avatars togheter."

"You know I trust you very deeply my love."

"Yes, just as I trust you."

They lock into a deep kiss and afeter a few moments they break it.

"Khai the storm..."

"Yes, I wanted to let then sleep a bit more, but I guess unless they rush they're not gonna make it through the storm... don't worry I'll wake Janus and tell him to proceed and soon my love you will have your avatar and we will be able to carry on with our plan."

"Yes, my love."

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