Devil Crier Part 1

Story by chaosfault on SoFurry

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This is a big story and I mean BIG been working on it for ages but this also going under mature you will not beleave how long this is and it's not even finished.

This is just a WIP.

I will be drawing up the characters.


It starts off with two people down town a brother and a sister, it's starting to get late and the sister says "Here I want you to have this"_she pulls out a rope bracelet curled around with a brown leather strap and a green rope with a tiny star attached, the boy asks _"what's this for?", she replies "For your birthday of course, since I'm missing it tomorrow, I am really sorry" "it's fine, it's not your fault, but why this" "well you said you like unusual and weird stuff and I thought this would be your style!" the boy nods and thanks his sister with a smile and they wander off.

It starts to rain and becomes really cold, the sister turns and says "we better get a taxi back home, weather looks bad, look over there a taxi rank" they both run towards it minding the road as they cross, the boy grabs his sister and says "WAIT!" "What, what is it" "you know how I'm missing your birthday cause of my friend dragging me off to this trip?""yeah, but I told you it's fine, I told you to go enjoy it" "well I know it's a bit off but I got you this" the boy pulls out a beautiful silver necklace with a very bright blue crystal attached to it with a silver swirl surrounding the crystal "OH GOD! Arc it's beautiful, but how did you pay for it, I hope you didn't steal it" she said jokingly "no, no of course not" he said while laughing "I used my birthday money" he said with a smile, with a shocked expression she said "Oh no, Arc, you shouldn't have, I'll just return it and get the money back" "Nope you can't, it's non-refundable" she said "oh thanks Arc" while hugging him "No problem Sara, you deserve it" after finishing with their conversation they decide to get in a taxi, but surprisingly there's only one left, Sara knocks on the window and the taxi driver turns round and gestures her to enter she sat in the front and Arc in the back, the Taxi driver looks at them both and says with a very grim and you could say evil smile "right, where to".

Sara tells him the address and there off, both Arc and Sara trade words with each other while waiting to get home, but suddenly when there just round the corner from home the taxi parks somewhere dark and out of sight, Sara asks "why have we stopped? We're not there yet?" the man turns round and goes "oh where there" with an evil smile he goes to touch Sara, Arc jumps up to try and stop the man from touching his sister knowing what he might do to her, but the man with his other hand pulls out at a gun and says "How about you be a good boy and sit there while I.....play with her" the boy shouts "GET THE HELL OFF MY SISTER!" the man smiles and slaps Arc with his gun and says "How about you shut the fuck up you stupid idiot" the man returns to touching Sara, but Arc not caring about what he said goes to grab the gun, Arc tries fighting it out of his hand but sadly Arc isn't powerful enough and the man pulls the trigger, with a single scream from Sara "Arc NOOO!" the boy falls into his seat looking at his sister about to be violated by the man and blacks out left with his thoughts he says (in his head), "is this it......NO! I refuse to DIE! I need to save my sister...." All a sudden a single suspicious and dark voice begins speaking "poor human, such a fragile life span you have such a shame.....but if you....desire it I could give you......POWER". Arc not caring about where or who the voice is shouts "I DON'T CARE WHAT YOU WANT JUST HELP ME!" the voice replies calmly "...agree and.....I'll see what I can do" Arc impatiently replies "fine I agree."

We return to seeing the man pulling up Sara's skirt she screams "NO GET THE HELL OFF ME!" "hehehe don't worry....it'll just hurt........A LOT!"

Suddenly a demonic hand grasps the man's hand which he holds the gun and Arc says "What is it you just......" Arc sarcastically ponders for a moment and stares into the man's face with his red demonic left eye and says "Sorry what did you say about me being a good little boy" with a scary smile Arc crush's the man's wrist, breaking every bone inside it, the man yelled so loudly you would think it would break the 4th wall, Arc bashes the car door down and then gets out, he then rips the front car door off the car which Sara entered. He then began guiding his sister out and away from the car, he turned around and said "you won't be hurting or touching anyone with that hand again" he said with a grim smile, they both ran and left the man in his extreme painful situation.

As they both ran Sara suddenly stopped, concerned about his sisters scared also worried look, he decided to ask "what's wrong? Were nearly home" Sara having trouble speaking after the shock that she'd just witnessed "H-how can be so calm you were shot and died and then you-" Arc cut her off "I know it's confusing....but...I don't even understand it fully myself" she ran up to her brother and put her arms tightly round him and said whilst crying "I don't care if you have changed on the outside.....your still my brother and.......I'm...just happy your alive" she began to sob very loudly and with that Arc put his arms round her and said softly "I'll always protect sis." Arc returns to normal.

After they both began to run towards home, Sara looked and says while running "this is going to make a hell of explanation to mum and dad" Arc replies with a little smile "yeah this will defiantly beat the time when I crashed my bike into a rose bush and told my friends I was attacked wolves" with a small but calming smile across Sara's face.

Closing in on their home, Arc stops and begins to feel dizzy, Sara asks "Arc...are u ok?" as everything began to turn dark Arc fell to the ground, he blacks out.

As his vision begins to clear up, he sees a demonic looking creature a bit bigger than him with a long spiked tail, big horns on the of his head like a rams horns with big horse hove feet, the creature gives a sinister grin showing his sharp pointed teeth and begins to speak "Welcome Arc I'm glad to be able to meet you in person now let's-"the monster is cut off by Arc as he speaks over him "person? You look more like a monster than a person" the creature chuckles "Well let's just say I'm.....a friend, and I believe since I helped you, you now owe me something" all a sudden the dark place there in becomes a dark, sinister throne room, Arc looking quite surprised by the sudden change of scenery.

Arc realizes his demonic hand is back, the monster continues to speak "I believe since I was the one who saved your sister I think I_" the monster is once more cut off by Arc "You? No, I saved my sister with this thing" Arc shows the monster his demonic arm, the beast only smiles evilly and continues talking "No need to show me that, after all I was the one who gave you that" Arc face suddenly changes from weary to shocked "That's right Arc I was the one who gave you the power and it was me who brought you back to life and I also was the voice you heard whilst dying" Arc only had one reply "Wh-who are you?"

The monster lets out a cynical laugh "Ha-ha Me? I go by many names The Father of Lies, The Dark One, Hells God but my preferable name is Lucifer" a mix of feelings passed though Arc face sadness, horror, anger and shock "W-wait a minute Lucifer isn't that the name of the devil?" "Of course and as you know all my notions lead to some kind of type of chaos" With realization Arc gets up and shakes off the feeling of dread, sadness and paranoia and heads for the door. The door is huge and looks imposable to open, all a sudden like a flash, Lucifer stands between Arc and his exit "Please move" Arc puts simply, Lucifer begins to purr like a cat "Such a polite and handsome young man" the devil simply licks his lips which makes Arc shiver a little.

He didn't see it before but Arc has just noticed that the devil has changed into a human form, Arc notices he looks about his age (maybe a bit older) he has silver long hair to his shoulders and tan skin. He also is wearing a long black and red robe with black long shoes but the thing he noticed most was his bright 'yellow eyes' they were filled with longing, but what Arc was wondering was 'longing for what'.

"What's up with you?" "What's your game?" Arc was really on his toes he decided to play the devils game and distract him long enough till Arc could come up a plan "Hm straight to the point, I like that, and as for games, I could think of a few" Lucifer gives Arc a wink it makes Arcs whole body shiver from top to bottom.

The devil began teleporting from place to place whilst talking to Arc "your very interesting Arc, young, handsome, confident and courageous and you have a decent body. But you all so have fear...What if I told I could make you destroy your entire world" Arc speaks in his head (Yeah keep talking yer giant prick), "and yes Arc I do have a giant prick" Arc was surprised by the fact that he can mind read , this just meant Arc had to smarter and quicker "impressive you can read minds" "that's not all I can do to your mind, I can control, destroy it or even....violate it." "So what's your point I ain't scared of you, just because you're the devil doesn't mean I should be afraid of you, you have no power over me."

The devil shows his teeth though his toothy smile, which as you'll guess his teeth pointed. "Power.....power is what makes corruption and war, you, you have plenty of it.....so, if I'm correct, all that power will soon go to your head and then you shall be under my influence" Arc was troubled for words, he decides to say the first thing he can think of "if you think you're so strong how about a challenge" the devil instinctively smiles "a challenge you say? What sought of challenge" says the devil whilst licking his lips "a fight you verses me" "Sounds delightful which form do you prefer I use" "to make it fair stick to your current form" "Would you prefer to use weapons" as the devil reveals his collection of horrifying and deadly looking weapons "Yes I would" Arc replies, "May I choose first?" asks the devil, after the a bit of silence between Arc replies "of course".

To be continued....