Chapter Four: Impactful Morning (edit 4/9/2015)
#5 of protecting harmony book 1: pathfinding edit 4/9/2015: major revision and editing pass. added some details here and there.
Chapter Seven: Old Traditions, Trust Transitions (edit 5/2/2015)
#8 of protecting harmony book 1: pathfinding edit 5/2/2015: major revision and edit pass complete. extended by over 2600 words. fixed some things so they are more sensible to my intention.
Chapter Six: Poingant and Playful (edit 4/21/2015)
Edit 4/21/2015: major revision and editing pass. extended by over 4200 words. added some missing things, rewrote a couple moments, enhanced several others. a couple clues i forgot are now included.
A Very Delusional Christmas
Then i'd have to actually revise and edit it, get the structure right, hide the clues in there, make sure the big twists hit the way they needed too. and i just..." he shook his head, sighing.