Think it could be a good story? the part where he visits the furry world seems cliché i know but it's a lot better when it's actually written and brought to life as i want it to be. and besides i'm keeping a lot of details out, so yeah.
ramble, work in progress
As before, i claim my right to be sucky at english grammar and spelling, i don't want any mails or responses saying: "good story but you gotta work on the language." yeah, i know that so keep it to "good story!" or "lousy story!" thank you!
Fox, Human, Wolf
Maybe the pilot had served on the front lines in britain and had a good story or two about fighting the luftwaffe to share over some beer.
Historical, Humor, Vixen, World War II
From behind the fading doors, he leaves one last remark:
"if you ever feel bored and need to read a good story, please... come again...!"
Introduction, Trance, Transformation
That being said, i still highly suggest you read it all the way through from the beginning, because this is a damn good story, even if i say so myself :d
so, that being said, read on!
Foreword, Note from the Author, Unknown Tag Error
Kusanaga
[author's note: as far as endings go, the last chapter sucked, but that's what makes a good story a good story... suckyness.]
"this one looks exactly like the other four we got in the arizona lab...
Abduction, Dark, Human, Lion, M/F, Military, Pain, Plot Development, Realistic, Story Progression
This is not a good story. it's "stroke" material. i've not written one of these in ages so--well--here it is. enjoy it for what it is. no real depth or skill, here. just ... a scene. just a character. just sex.
Ball Growth, Balls, Bunny, Cock, Cock Growth, Gay, Hyper, Hyper growth, Lapine, Masturbation, Paw growth, Paws, Rabbit, Solo, excessive cum
stories of other realms, other realities, and a mercenary faction that was led by a crocodile. they were called the 'ctacic mercenaries'. now disbanded though, two captains approached him at different times.
Fox, Lore, Raccoon, daily
I don't know if it is a good story or not, and some part might feel rushed, but it's just a short 4-part story that i want to share with you guys, so please enjoy!
critics and comments are welcome.
by the year 2025, the world as we know it has ended...
Fantasy, Fiction, First Person, Short, world