Edited for Pleasure

Story by Sorin on SoFurry

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So, I was browsing art one day and happened upon a few pieces of art by Jasen Tamiia and immediately thought that it would make a great story. Luckily, he was more then willing to let me use his characters and idea. I'd go check out his profile to see the pics and get the full effect.

Ultimately, I'm ok with how this turned out. A few times it feels like I could have done better, but I'm not really sure how I would change it. I hope you all enjoyed reading it. Please comment and rate as always!


Warning: This story contains strange scenes of a sexual nature. If you are not of the appropriate age or do not like the tags listed, do not read. I take no responsibility for the viewing of this material.

*Legal: * The characters portrayed and the concepts are the property of Jasen Tamiia and are used with permission. The story is mine and may not be used in part or in whole without my permission.

Edited for Pleasure

Renee closed the door behind him with a heavy breath. His shirt was dark with sweat from his jog, so he was quick to strip it off. The fox's orange fur stuck out in clumps, but he didn't really care who saw him. It was his home, anyway.

The next thing to go were his pants and boxers, both removed with one motion of his hand. While clothing was needed outside, Renee didn't like it unless it was the tight restricting kind that Kii so enjoyed putting him in. So, he tossed the soiled clothing against the washing machine and casually strolled through the apartment with his thin chest and feminine lips open to see; the only article on his body was a black collar that he never took off.

As he passed through the living room heading towards the bedroom, he caught sight of Kii lounging on the sofa. "Hey, sexy," he said with a little grin as he stopped.

Kii was fully clothed in his black shirt and pants that would match his fur if it were only a little bit lighter. Unlike Renee, the jackal enjoyed his clothing unless it got in the way. Something about displaying his dominance over Renee. Such an argument rarely went questioned. But what caught Renee's eye was the pencil that Kii twirled through his fingers. Normally, Kii didn't partake of such simple quirks, and yet the man's eyes seemed to be transfixed on it.

"Something up?"

Kii smiled and looked over at the nude fox. "Oh, nothing. Just thinking, is all."

Renee nodded. "Alright. Well, I'll be in the shower if you need me." He gave his tail a raise to his mate as he walked away. Shower sex after a jog was always the best way to cool down and relax.

Sadly, Kii didn't follow him into the bathroom. The shower went undisturbed as Renee lathered up his whole body with shampoo and washed it all away, so he instead thought about what might have Kii's mind so entranced. Hopefully it was on the next way to subdue him and use him. Just the thought made Renee's sex tingle and add his own fluids to the shower's. But he couldn't partake of the pleasure, not if Kii had something in mind.

When the shower was done and his body was mostly dry, Renee walked back out into the bedroom and found Kii lying on the bed, the pencil still twirling gently in his hand. This time, Kii turned his attention to Renee instantly. "Come over here, Renee. There's something I'd like to try with you."

The fox smiled instantly and let the towel that had been drying his hips fall to the floor. This was why he'd held himself back. "What's with the pencil?" he couldn't help but ask.

"Just a little something I picked up from work." Kii twisted in the bed and stood just as Renee came up to the bed. "No more questions." His hand came forward and slashed the eraser end of the pencil across Renee's mouth.

Renee moved with the motion and looked back with a curious look. He started to ask what that whole thing was about, but his lips didn't move. He tried to open his mouth, but couldn't. In a moment of panic he felt up to his face. His lips were gone, as were his tongue and teeth.

In his moment of stunned stillness, Kii swept around his body, using the pencil like a magic wand. With two swipes, Renee watched his arms detach from his body and fall to the floor. He could feel the arms and the carpet under them; he could even make the hands and elbows move as if they were still attached, but where they had been were now smooth stumps as if he had been born armless.

Kii's arm wrapped around Renee's body and he brought the eraser of the pencil down to Renee's leg. He brushed it back and forth, and the fox watched in wonder and slight horror as the split of his legs sealed up. Kii stopped just shy of his sex. Renee looked like an armless mermaid or something.

He gave another look at his mate with a faint look of panic in his eyes. He could hear his heart hammering in his ears. What the hell was going on?

The jackal resumed spinning the pencil. "Don't worry, my toy. As you can see from your arm, this isn't a regular pencil." He spun Renee around and leaned the fox back so that he was lying helplessly on the bed before picking up one of the arms. With gentle strokes, he began to erase the arm from existence.

Well, not entirely out of existence. Renee could still sense the arm, but the more it disappeared, the less he could move and the fainter the feeling became until the feeling was almost gone completely.

"Your arms aren't gone forever," Kii said as he picked up and began with the second arm. "Everything will be replaced once I'm finished with you."

The promise made him feel slightly better, but it was still difficult to relax with his legs bound together, his arms gone, and no way to talk. He couldn't so much as moan or whimper, which he'd probably be doing just from the helplessness.

For anyone that doesn't know Renee, he's probably a bit on the kinkier side. Being bound or otherwise incapacitated and used is one of his greater turn-ons. It is also one that Kii was always willing to employ.

The pencil in Kii's hand flipped around so that the lead tip was down. He held it down to the bed and began to draw a few lines. Down, a small loop, and back. When the lines connected, the bed began to inflate and distend until a long purple rod was sitting on the sheets: a dildo. Renee wanted to moan again as he felt his sex start to moisten.

"Oh, aren't you eager?" Kii took the dildo and dangled it in front of Renee's face, even giving it a soft lick. He took it down and touched the head of it to Renee's sex. "Why don't you help yourself?"

His tunnel tingled and burned with desire now. He wanted to feel that length inside of him. His legs, or leg at this point, pushed against the bed as best he could, but he could only rub the tip against his entrance. His nostrils flared as his lungs pumped in exertion and excitement. No amount of twisting and thrusting could catch it into his depths. It started to both infuriate him and make him desperate; his eyes looked over at Kii with a look of burning desire.

The jackal smiled. "Alright. If you insist." His hand pushed against the dildo's end and slid it up into the sex. Immediately, Renee felt relief and pleasure. He would have moaned if he still had the throat for it. His hips squirmed and pulsed around the toy until Kii pushed it all the way in.

"For that, you lose another body part."

Renee felt his feet suddenly go numb. The sensation spread up his shins, and he looked down to see Kii rubbing out his legs. At his knees, Renee began to squirm more in a catch-22. He wanted to move, to feel the toy slide and twist inside of him; and yet being in such a state of helplessness made his depths tingle in such pleasure that only the very lack of control could ever give him.

His legs vanished inch by inch until they were only small stumps like his shoulders. The dildo still sat in his pussy, but he could only squeeze at it with his muscles. He couldn't even flex it around because his legs were gone. To make it worse, Kii reached around and erased Renee's tail too. His breath was so heavy, his eyes fluttered in the swimming high.

Kii drew another dildo on the bed and it came to life. "Do you want more?" he asked. His tone was one of total control, and he was obviously enjoying it.

Renee couldn't resist the nod. Kii put a hand under his rump and lifted so that the fox's tailhole was visible. The tip was rough, but it was a well used hole. Even without lube, the dildo slid in. The roughness made Renee's body tense. Conflicting feelings of rubbing pain and sexual pleasure mingled in his mind. The extra stretching made the one in his pussy shift upwards and press against his front walls more firmly. He tried to arch his back, to squirm more, but he couldn't. Kii's hand did all the work.

When it was finally lodged all the way in, Kii set him back down on the bed. The pressure shifted them again and Renee breathed heavily in pleasure. He wanted so much more. If only Kii could help him.

"Another dildo means you lose another body part."

He should have known that was coming. Kii always loved to work in a cost/reward system. But what else was there that he could possibly remove? His eyes bulged as Kii raised the pencil up to the top of Renee's head.

Stroke by stroke, Renee felt his head vanish away. The sounds of the room and his own beating heart went dead as first one ear and then the other was brushed away. Kii took his time with a crooked smile as he brushed it over Renee's eyes. Ten more good slashes, and the fox's head and neck were gone, replaced by a flat plane of flesh and fur between his shoulders.

Renee was once again caught in a strange paradox of feelings. He was still alive. He could feel his lungs fill with air, could feel the ungodly pleasure of his loins coursing through him. He couldn't see. He couldn't hear. It wasn't simply that he saw nothing and he heard nothing. There was nothing to see or hear with! How he was able to even think was a mystery to him.

And yet the loss of his sight and hearing and taste seemed to heighten his other sense even more. Primarily, his sense of touch and the touch of the dildos his hips squeezed around. The pleasure only seemed to amplify with each stroke that Kii made over his body. With nothing else to experience, Renee let his thoughts go and just enjoyed it.

Kii could feel his erection becoming prominent by now. He was seeing his mate now in a completely new way, as just a helpless mass with two love holes to be used. Of course, this was a fantasy that Kii liked to use quite often, but never had it ever become so literal.

He held the pencil in one hand as he began to remove his clothing. What other crazy ways could he use this thing? He didn't want to give Renee any arms or legs again; he was having much too much fun watching what was left wiggle in desperate need to help. Maybe he could turn his tailhole into another sex. He shook his head lightly as his pants went to the floor and his pinkish shaft finally came free. He liked the feeling of tail as much as he did pussy.

But the thought of multiple holes gave him another idea that he could definitely get behind. His massive shaft, 14 inches in length and a pulsing fleshy pink, slapped out against Renee's belly, making what was left of him twitch. Kii could make a few nice adjustments to this.

With the pencil, he began to trace across the base of the shaft. The flesh swelled and expanded at the magic tool's touch until a few inches of him swelled to almost twice its former size. A good healthy knot for his mate.

Next, he began to "color" along his groin just above the spot where his pride arose. A second flaccid, pinkish tip appeared and began to rise out of him. Kii set the pencil down for a moment to stroke along both of his dual-shafts. It was the same pleasure, but it was deeper and so much better. It was be a wonderful way to fill his toy's body greatly.

He pressed the second cock against Renee's body as it grew. The body seemed to understand what was happening even without his sight and what still existed squirmed and twitched. It made Kii smile. He was so helpless; it was his own choice if Renee received pleasure or not. He would acquiesce, of course, but simply having the power was its own thrill.

With a slow hand, he took the dildos from Renee's loins, first the tailhole one and then the pussy one. The legs under him twitched and kicked like a little child in protest of them being removed. Or maybe those were pleasure pangs making them jump. Either way, they made Kii smile.

He gave the dildo covered in Renee's fem-juices a long lick as he slid back. The scent and taste drove his cocks to their full hardness, so much that they almost hurt in desire to be stroked. He used one hand to guide them and the other hand to hold on where Renee's head should be. In one motion, both heads entered.

Renee was lost. He didn't care. All he knew was that two very hot, very hard objects were entering him. He also knew from their shape and size that they could only be his mate's cocks. Why there were two didn't even pass through his mind. That was the state of the matter, and the state of it was heaven.

Kii thought the same. The two shafts gave slightly different sensations: one of hot, soft depths, the other more squishy and tighter. His force continued non-stop until he was halfway in. The tunnels were loose from frequent use, but he didn't complain. It was his own doing that made them so. The walls of both tunnels were still able to twitch and squeeze in their reactionary pleasures. Despite knowing his partner couldn't hear, Kii rubbed a hand along Renee's belly. "Oh, always such a good toy. I bet you want it all, don't you?" He took the twitches as the yes.

So he went deeper. The organs in Renee's belly shifted around the intruding cock, but Kii just made a few quick strokes of the pencil along the belly that bulged from the his girth. The pencil obeyed his mind's commands and altered the body even more to make the entry way smooth and unobstructed.

It wasn't until the leading edge of his knot pressed against Renee's sex that he realized just how much he had pushed in. He had legitimately lost his thoughts in way of the pleasure. That was a first. And there were still the knots to go.

He gave a push, but the holes wouldn't stretch enough. A lustful growl rumbled from his hips and he drew back several inches. The force of his drive and the pull of his lover body were so strong that the flesh had no choice but to give to the advance. He felt the muscles within Renee tighten suddenly. "Yeah, that's right. You're all mine now."

The knot kept their bodies locked together. All Kii could really do was roll back and forth, but that was more then enough to stimulate himself. After a while, he even stopped doing that and just moved Renee's body up and down like he would a sex doll.

Dual stimulation plus the pull on his sensitive knots was starting to become too much. Kii could feel himself already starting to peak, so he eased off and sat still for a moment to cool down. The depths were so warm and tight that there was no way he could prolong his pleasure for much longer. Unless...

He got another kinky thought. He took up the pencil and reached down to his testicles. A few swift slashes were all he needed for his intentions. He made a quick circle around Renee's body with a few detail lines as well. No point in his own pleasure hurting his mate-toy too much.

With the preparations finished, he continued. A tug of the knots, a push of the shafts, back and forth, pulling and thrusting. He gritted his teeth from the pleasure that almost made his vision go white. The walls squeezed back in return, which only added to the level of stimulation. If he didn't know better, he'd say Renee was cumming too. In only seconds, it broke him.

He gasped and panted as his cocks fired off their load of cum. It quickly spread back along his shaft, making the love tunnels slick and sticky, but the knot kept it all firmly lodged inside of Renee's body.

After a few seconds of high, the pleasure began to fade, but Kii felt his balls continue to churn out more and more cum. He smiled as he felt the pressure begin to build around his cocks. "A nice big load for you, hun. I hope you can take it all."

Another shot, another shot, and then even more. It just kept coming. Renee's belly began to swell with the mass of fluid that both cocks were stuffing him with. Kii leaned down and hugged the body to feel it swell out against his chest and face.

Renee didn't know what was going on. Kii had done something with that circle. There was no way that he could take such a load normally, or that Kii could give it. But as his flesh started to expand outwards, he was only more and more delighted to be used as a cum bucket. His mind started to beg for more.

The request was already answered. Kii held on as the belly grew to the size of a basketball, and then to a beachball. With no arms or legs or head, Renee's body was starting to just look like a large orange and white balloon that was inflated by the jackal's spooge.

Kii held to the fur, hugging the growing ball of a fox, until it was almost 2 feet thick and his cock finally puttered out. The space felt so tight around his cocks that it almost hurt the tender shafts.

He reached down under Renee's rump and gave a sharp jerking pull. The knots resisted, but the outward pressure of the cum helped. Copious amounts of semen sprayed out of Kii's groin and onto the bed. That would be one hell of a mess, but he was sure Renee would be willing to clean it all up. If not, there were ways of convincing the fox.

When Renee's belly finally got down to a manageable level, Kii set him back down into the spooge. The body continued to twitch and tremble in fits of sporadic pleasures that he continued to feel as squeezes of his shafts.

"I think it's about time we check up on you..." Kii took the tip of the pencil's lead in his fingers and snapped it. There was a bright flash of light that blinded him, but he could feel his groin changing. When it faded, Renee's full body was back and his second cock was gone.

The fox gasped loudly and released a pent-up cry of ecstasy. His limbs flailed and twitched for a few seconds in the pool of jizz until he looked up at the jackal. A smile came over his face. "You're done already?"

The jackal smiled and spun the pencil through his fingers. His cock started to go limp and recede from the fox's ass. His mind was already starting to wonder what other things he could do to his love toy.

"Oh, I'm just getting started."