Dreaming
As promised, here's chapter two! Let me know what you think. The next chapter is going to be darker, and probably have less nice stuff in it :P If you're underage, don't read this. Also, go read "Asleep" first if you haven't already, or else this...
Torpedo Run Chapter 23
Hey everyone :) Sorry for the delay, Xmas break threw me off my game a bit, and this chapter didn't start writing itself until halfway through. Anyway, comments and critique are very much welcome! Chapter 23 Tenh growled, a low basso rumble...
Torpedo Run Chapter 22
Comments and criticism are very much welcome :) Chapter 22 Olliver lowered his massive, invisible armored shoulder and plowed straight through his second building in less than ten minutes, grinning with angry satisfaction as he took out his...
Torpedo Run Chapter 21
Comments are extremely welcome. In particular, let me know if the action stays exciting, the characters interesting, and so on. Thanks for reading! Chapter 21 Void Shadow grimaced, in his virtual world, as a near miss almost melted his wing...
Torpedo Run Chapter 20
Comments welcome! Let me know if the story is seeming to drag, or if this is exciting and maintaining your interest :) Thanks. ----------------------------- Chapter 20 With fire whipping up the nose cone of his fighter, Void Shadow prayed to the...
Torpedo Run Chapter 19
Chapter 19 Like shoals of piranhas swarming through an endless black sea, the two armadas swarmed toward one another at immense speeds made ponderous by the sheer emptiness of space. Captain Leith watched, heart thundering with the...
Asleep
Hi everybody. Another experimental piece from the Arlen. I'd love to get peoples' input on whether or not this is a good read. The subject matter is a bit...Uh...Well, I won't say morally questionable. It's pretty much downright evil, but in an...
Torpedo Run Chapter 18
Chapter 18 As the jump-counter dropped to zero, Captain Adriana Leith braced herself. Even the best calculations and mathematical genius could be wrong by a few seconds when it came to relativistic travel, and though dangerous errors were rare,...
Torpedo Run Chapter 17
Chapter 17 Nivea 'Niece' Gordon lay on the soft grass in her two-piece bikini and stared up towards the sky with a relaxed smile. They weren't going to get a lot of R&R, so she intended to make the best of it, sunning her soft brown fur in the warm...
Punishment in the Stocks
There is definitely something wrong with my brain. I decided to sit down and write something low on story and high on porn, just as an exercise in displaying emotion in my characters. This is what happened. It isn't pretty, but I'm kind of pleased...
Torpedo Run Chapter 16
This chapter has -holy crap!- gay porn in it! Enjoy! Unless of course you're not legal to read it. In which case rawr go do whatever it is teenagers do that isn't masturbation! Comments, critique, and so on welcome. Chapter 16 Jared Bull...
Torpedo Run Chapter 15
Comments are very welcome, as are votes and such. Can't improve my writing without help :) Be aware that there is some medical hygiene-related grossness in this chapter. Trust me it's there for a reason - realism makes stories more interesting, in my...