The Furry Dead Chapter XXII - Bittersweet Rewards
Hi everybody. Comments are extremely welcome. Also: Warning! Smex! Like a bunch of it! Kinda long, too. Chapter XXII - Bittersweet Rewards Cel sat in an unlocked cell in the Black Tower, just one level beneath the top-most floor, where...
Torpedo Run Chapter 3
Comments are always highly appreciated! Chapter 3 Captain Leith set down her tablet, uttering a sigh of frustration she hoped was soft enough not to carry. Her officers were at their stations, the bridge lit up like Christmas with read-outs as...
The Furry Dead Chapter XXIII - The Frozen Heart's Tale
Chapter XXIII - The Frozen Heart's Tale The Nameless One wandered the wreckage in a fugue of clarity, lost in the detail of every overturned stone, every burnt timber, every corpse shambling and not. He could see the very pores on their skin,...
Torpedo Run - Chapter 1 (Revised) and 2
Hi everyone. I've done some suggested revisions to the first chapter, and am putting up the second at the same time. Please feel free to give creative input, or correct my military information, etc etc.. Also, could you guys do me a huge favor? I'm...
The Furry Dead Chapter XXI - The Dying Time
Chapter XXI - The Dying Time Van pitched himself into a roll as one of the speedy clawed undead leapt at him, and came up on its other side with an arrow already nocked, pulled, and ready to release. He planted the shaft into its head to the...
The Furry Dead Chapter XX - The Battle of Amarthane
Chapter XX - The Battle of Amarthane Swirling snow had the City Wardens huddling on the rooftops of Amarthane, wrapped up in their cloaks and trying to stay warm as much as keeping watch. The thick fall would make long-range visibility near...
The Furry Dead (Medieval Style)
Outside, all was madness. The faithful knelt in prayer inside the grand, colorful, buttressed old church, dwarfed by its architecture, iconography, and worthless wealth, as the world collapsed. Their prayers were panicked, full of begging for...
The Furry Dead Chapter XIX - Doom and Desserts
Chapter XIX - Doom and Desserts Cardinal Tyvorus Dorshen sat on his ceremonial throne, running a bare-skinned fingertip along the fine engravings that sat just below its armrest. He was dressed in his ceremonial vestments, white on silver on gold...
The Furry Dead Chapter XVII - Conflagration
Sorry for such a bloody long chapter. I promise to work on making them a bit more concise in the future. Given the nature of this chapter though, it was hard to do. How does the action read? Is it exciting? Interesting? Believable? How is the...
The Furry Dead Chapter XVIII - In the Firelight
Comments welcome - Highly encouraged, in fact, whether positive or negative. Chapter XVIII - In the Firelight Royval plowed into an unwary fur from behind, ducking low to hit him in the middle of the back and smash him away from the alley...
The Furry Dead Chapter XVI - Sparks
Okay, long chapter here, but I couldn't find a good way to section it up. Enjoy! Comments welcome. Chapter XVI - Sparks Van looked up towards the grey sky, and frowned. A long breath through his sensitive snout told the fox snow was coming;...
Superhero 11
Chapter 11 Outside the heavily reinforced steel door to the under-basement, a tentacle beast of monstrous size even for its own kind raged and lashed and wrenched, mindlessly tearing at the steel with claws hard enough to peel scraps off its...