Presentation - Writing Style
The narrative voice is always past tense, accept in very specific situations. 1stperson writing bothers me. i also dislike jumping between too many characters. **show, don't tell** it took me forever to figure out what this means.
Familiar (Part 1)
**Familiar (Part 1)** By otterlyoffbeat I let out a sigh as I leaned against the wall, looking at the masses filling the club and dancing in groups, pairs, or alone. This wasn't my scene at all, and I longed for the familiar feel of a paperback in...
Strictly Business (updated)
\*perspective shift, 1stperson - eric\* two weeks had passed after that night and i still hadn't been able to spot any siamese by the name jamie. "i hope he wasn't too drunk and just made that story up. he doesn't drink much."