Toby and Rex 3rd Draft Extract 2, Reworked
The Final novel assessment task for this semester was a "Drastically Reworked" version of the draft I handed in earlier in the year. I hope i understood the intructions properly, there are some formatting and grammar changes, but only the mid section...
Toby and Rex, 3rd draft extract
([http://www.sofurry.com/page/174042/tab/Journals](http://www.sofurry.com/page/174042/tab/Journals) Just in case you need the background) Dance, Dance, Dance... Grind, Grind, Grind... Toby could only watch with quiet jealousy. Those free-flowing...
Toby and Rex 3rd draft Extract 2
([http://www.sofurry.com/page/174042/tab/Journals](http://www.sofurry.com/page/174042/tab/Journals)) (what is supposed to happen in between the gap, still a draft!!!) \*\*\*\* Rex kept his arm around Toby and wore that consistent warm smile, the one...
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