The Lost One: Changes
Okay so i am rewriting my story. i'm going to leave up the original chapters for now and i would love to get any input as to which seems better: plot, style or anything else. any comments are appreciated as always and i hope you enjoy the read! ...
Tainted Love
I had forgotten what it felt like. The raw burning sensation of my insides being torn and stretched beyond capacity from an unwanted intruder. I never want them in, but I don't have a choice in that matter. My usual abuse involved individuals with...
Sam's Story: Changes
Pain. That was the first sensation. It flashed for but a moment but it was certainly memorable. Next came nausea, hot flashes, then cold flashes. Finally awareness came to him as the beep of a heart monitor came through the haze. The weight of an...
Sams story: acceptance
Sam had no idea what time it was when he finally woke up. All he knew was it was dark out and he felt like death. His whole body hurt, he felt sick, and he was exhausted. The alley still looked the same as when he passed out at least. Sam staggered to...
Rewrite demo
Pain. That was the first sensation. It flashed for but a moment but it was certainly memorable. Next came nausea, hot flashes, then cold flashes. Finally awareness came to him as the beep of a heart monitor came through the haze. The weight of an...
More Tainted Love
* * * I woke up screaming. It happened again; the third time this week and it was only wednesday. Well, technically Thursday now that it was 2AM. This damn dream just will not leave me alone. it has been 10 years since I was rescued but still it...
How to Train your Trainer
"I can't believe you put me up against a Metagross. Are you mental or do you really just like watching me get my ass kicked. What posessed you to throw a psychic type at that thing when you have a frikkin Charizard?" The Gardevoir didn't seem the least...
Wings of the Warrior: 1
Pain. That was the first sensation. It flashed for but a moment but it was certainly memorable. Next came nausea, hot flashes, then cold flashes. Finally awareness came to him as the beep of a heart monitor came through the...
Little Man
The Ascension. Twenty years and they still have no idea how it happened. All we know is that the world's population all stopped what they were doing, looked to the sky, and fell unconscious. When we awoke, we were no longer human. Well, mostly. We...
A New Companion
\*bzzzt\* "Another beautiful day out here in..." \*BAAAM\*. _Six O'clock, I've always hated waking up this early. Why I decided to wake up early today is beyond me though, I'm supposed to be on vacation. So that would make today Wednesday... what...
The Lost One: Loss of Self
So that first rewrite was a huge success compared to my original. one can only hope that the trend continues with this one. So i give you the next chapter of the story! oh and please, please, please leave comments, critique, constructive criticism!...
New Beginnings
Sam's ship was looming over them now as they shuttled into the hangar. Sam couldn't help but chuckle at the other Kor'Ran staring and looking around the massive bay. You could fit several large starships in the belly of this beast and that wasn't even...