Finding Jack- (REVISION! ADDED CONTENT!)
_A big twist to the plot added! ;-) _ _A little forward, this is a story I have been working on in my very \*limited\* spare time. Please give me input on whether you guys would like to know what happens to Jack next. I have approximately 30 or so...
Finding Jack
_**THIS IS A FIRST DRAFT. PLEASE READ REVISION HERE:[https://www.sofurry.com/view/885306](https://www.sofurry.com/view/885306)**_ _A little forward, this is a story I have been working on in my very \*limited\* spare time. Please give me input on...