This is an entry for the write4fun writing comp for 2013. i originally planned to use more juxtaposition, but it was only a 500 word limit. i did use an awful lot of repetition though. tell me what you think. i'm always looking to improve.
Competition entry, Short Story
When one discusses the concept of emotion and when or when not to express said emotion, they tend to use the metaphor of a bottle. Such discontent and pessimistic ideas begin to fill this bottle to keep from slipping. But alas, there is only so much...
Jackal, Journal, creator, entry, writer
Massive chunks of masonry had been ripped out wholesale and the door itself lay, bent and splintered inside of its iron-bound frame some feet away, its entire entry smashed and widened, as if something too large to fit had simply bulled through it, and expanded
Paladin, Read the First Entry's Tags, Unicorn
Lachheim was a city that couldn't decide who or what it was.
The name of the city came from the dozens of tiny runoff lakes that dotted the landscape, fed by splintered tributaries and creeks that split off the Espree River. The 'Land of Lakes'...
Paladin, Read the tags on the first entry, Unicorn
This was all a calmer matter to focus on than the approaching planet and atmospheric re-entry looming beyond. with fingers somewhat numbed, he carefully pulled a battered portable shrine out from the canvas panic bag he'd pulled up from stowage.
Possum, Re-entry, Religion, Sci-Fi
The magistrate said after a long while in silence, bart recognized another entry to an undercroft at the end of the interchange he'd brought them up to. "be on your guard, dear guests - for my forbearance only lasts as far as that doorframe.
Paladin, Read the First Entry's Tags, Unicorns
A part of the 365-work challenge.
2. Caged.
About three things I was absolutely positive.
I know this isn't a good idea.
I wouldn't be too happy.
Not that it matters.
Why I'd agreed to get myself into this is beyond me. But it isn't for...
Forced Entry, Human, Lion, M/M, Trapped, Zoo
Well there's my first entry." said jewel. "really?" chandon asked as they all stared at starflight.
"so wait is starflight a real girl?" asked miki. "no..." josh said that so she would not know he was not even a human." well let's find your friends."
Camping, Death, Entry's, Monster, Recording, Skinwalker, life, weird, woods
The Wild Adventure Of Poink and Boink
Poink, Boink and the epic battle against the Junk Dragon
With the term "Adventurer" labeled onto you, you run into some pretty crazy things. For Poink and Boink, the label was legitimately true, whether they were...
Contest Entry, Dragon, Dream, Female, Male, Poink, Short Story, boink