The Daemon
Any idea or criticism on how to improve it would be appreciated.
You
Any constructive-criticism is welcome. ^_^ how many times must i tell you that i'm fine you always loved to point out every single flaw who are you to think that you are divine i'm going to be the first to say that your word is not law.
Going Concerns (Chapter 5)
"you said we were stopping to buy critical supplies!" "we were." he handed her one of the mugs. "you never asked what i considered critical." she laughed, taking a sip. "so. do you have anywhere to be today, somewhere that's not right here?
Dragon RP-Chat
I welcome constructive criticism,such as how to improve the environments or the stroylines,but if you give me hate i will block you lol. also guys,please don't sign up for the rp until at least the continent pangea campaign is up.
Untitled
Hoping some one would read and give me some helpful comments/criticism seated on a bench, tail lying motionless my domain never makes me feel whole.
Secret Rendezvous
Secrecy and discretion for this clandestine rendezvous was critical, as who knew what others with nefarious intent could be watching them.
Starborne - Trial by Fire: A Small Step for a Canine
Balancing energy consumption and travel speedagainst mean time to critical failure.
The Temeraire
Biometric, genetic, and neurologic security systems are installed in all critical areas of the ship to prevent theft, including all control consuls.
News Update about Confined
Thank-you for your dedication to the series, as i couldn't have had the inspiration to write this without your criticism and praise. have fun reading the next few chapters of my next story!
Poem #11: Words
#11 of poetry critical thinking about human use and connotation of words themselves. wrote it in (not for) english class junior year. _words_ what are words written across the page? what emotions are written into these words?
For you, my Heart; for you, my Soul
You are strong within, my heart know that, forever, i'll be your guard construcitve criticism appreciated. however remember, this was my first poem ever so don't tear me into pieces because it is bad or something.
Poem #9: The Question Why
#9 of poetry a poem about critical thinking in regards to the why of life, and all its contradictions.