First Mate Crit Is A Bugger
A shortcut through an unmapped system doesn't go to plan and james and the lion-like alien crit find themselves fighting for their lives on an inhospitable alien planet. and crit's species are consummate carnivores. chapter 2: something has gone wrong.
Thanksgiving Dinner (Vignette)
The possum was all over crit, smooching and cuddling with him every chance she could get.
Other people are there for you: Srsly (Get 5 Beta Readers!)
You'll learn more about your own writing than you could possibly realize by critting and editing other people's works, you'll figure out plenty about how plots sit together by trying to help other people develop theirs, and if someone's lost on some small
The League - Background Info
crit - this one's trouble. if you can get past the attitude, crit has a beautiful, deserty coat of fur on her and is cute enough in the face.
Black Swan pt 2
Would love some constructive crit. i woke up with a start, feeling another presence against me. my dreams still fresh in my mind as i find myself blushing at the thought.
Bad Bois Home Alone! ~Part One!
I really appreciate any comments or crits you can come up with, and i hope you enjoy it! just a small disclaimer. please only read this story if you are of the legal age where you live, to do so!
Ah, la Vache !
Sur l'ã©tiquette, il y avait ã©crit : foundation changeskin, nyc, usa, betatest service .
Rise of The Shadow Wolf Knight: Chapter 1
"sure thing dar, once power reaches crit. i'll return them to the shoulder docking bay. shall we return to our new friends?"
Digimon: Fusion ch.4.
crit. system failure! ---- icedevimon stared at the light, it was blinding him. he lifted his wings to cover his eyes. after a few moments the light faded out slowly so he could open his eyes again... only to stare into the barrel of a huge gun.
Realms of Valeron - Chapter 15
Gunnar, frenzy when the boss hits thirty per cent and if roka keeps his crits on cooldown, you'll be fine. any questions?" "i don't understand any of that" said biggie. sycorax replied, "just shoot it and you'll be fine."
Learning Curves
Don't be shy to rate and crit, even and especially if you feel it was a shitty story. least i know for the future. story intended for sequel. tears were forming in my eyes and i was struggling to gasp for air from laughing so hard.
Perverted Dildos & Dommes (1st Ed.)
And since it isn't a crit, i'm afraid your absorb pain ability isn't going to play in..."