Mistress Maid Maria
Originally, i aimed for this to be a long one at first, with multiple scenes, but then i drastically reduced it to just the one sex scene as oppose to multiple.
Adoption(Chp11), Dinner with Alec(Chp12), The Dance(Chp13)
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Somewhere Out There - Short Story Of A Lonely Guy
Do you feel it should be longer with multiple scenes, or shorter to save room for other things? no judgement here, i'm honestly just curious. -is the "post mini-story" i'm throwing together important/interesting at all?
Hurricane Kim Chapter 22
I tried to put as much thought into making the scenery described as i could and there were multiple scenes that have been reworked over and over before i settled on something that i hope engages the reader's imagination. this chapter is very long.