Part 1 to 8 Comic Book Script

Story by cardia on SoFurry

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At The cardia, which is the stomach's inlet anatomically. It is like a circle flap, that has two closing parts or muscle sphincters o-o with a small space between them (so, one closing flap, a small tubular space between that and the sphincter before the stomach), Either way, I didn't make this difference in the story with one or two closing circular flaps.

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Ias (main character that is nude): Male, 5' 11'' 250lbs.; Put him in his late twenties; Forehead broad; receding hairline, mid thick eyebrows, eye lashes a bit longer though i hope that doesn't make him look too feminine (oh well), circular shape head. Nose and mouth though are mid sized. He is chubby around the cheeks and chin of his face. His chest, abdomen, and thighs are chubby as well. The only place he really isn't chubby is around his shins, ankles, and feet. Eyes brown, hair brown and medium-short length, with that being around the back of his neck and it is not so much with the sides of his head. Not a large penis showage of course but that's up to you. I didn't go into distinct detail in my story He is not very fat around the hips inasmuch around his belly. Belly is a bit hairy but not around the sides of it up to the hips. Belly being the largest feature on his body. If moobs are needed, they're not big compared to the abdomen.

Bandits:

I didn't go into distinct details in my story, so I'll make up examples. The original description was just this: several hooded and cloaked persons, their cloaks colored to match the dirt leapt out from hiding (which is pretty much your first panel in a way).

i would say, cloaked mountain dirt off brown colored full cloaks, near blending in with the mountains even standing aside their leader but just enough so folks can see them. The leader is the only one with his cloak drawn down to show his head and he's the sturdiest looking compared to the rest of them as they are all slender but a bit less well built than their leader medium build, especially the ones with the crossbows. Their hoods are drawn up around their faces and cover their arms and all that can be seen are swords drawn. If hands would be best displayed, keep in mind that folks in these parts could have brought on any type of anthropomorphic creatures onto their teams from around the lands they are in.

Leader Bandit:

Again, no particular details in the original story, as Ias didn't get a good time to look at him since Sidge, the cow-dragon, breaks it up quickly after he balks at his nakedness.

Human Male. Medium large build. He is in his mid thirties and burly, he is the only one who has his hood down but the cloak on his body. He has a dirt colored undershirt on it which the sleeves cover his hairy arms up to his fists that he has the sword clenched in. He has a full head of hair down to his mid neck in the back of his head and down above his thick eyebrows, beard, mustache and all is attached all around in a circle around his nose mouth chin, cheeks, face meeting his head hair, maybe picture paul bunyun. His original appearance is smugly but set on reacting quickly. He had a mean looking sword drawn, acid etched and curved in like a thin scimitar.

Sidge (Cow-dragon):

dragon crossed with a cow retaining all the dragon traits except its front paws had talons which were more so into a hoof shape. His legs were hinged to move as an animals and its belly was big pudgey and almost barreled and a half fat. Its snout, tail, neck, and overall length were much shorter then a dragons, making his overall length to be almost a 50 foot length and stretching in width about the size of the road which was almost 3 yards in itself.

Often times I have him flying in the story actually when I don't describe his wings and sometimes don't allow for it. His wings are furry dragon.

Page 1

We are on the edge of a mountain cliff with Ias alone, Naked, and the several bandits including the leader. Two bandits with Crossbows are up on the ledge's up the mountain side. See the mountain path is sheer like an S bend with them being more toward the inside of the first bend in the S.

One of the leader bandits is ahead of Ias, staring in shock surprise as encountering a naked person is the least thing he expected in the mountains. Ias thinks his surprise is mildly amusing and doesn't care so much how he appears to the leader.

Page 2

Maybe One Panel Zoom up on a open screeching cowdragon face. The next panel The creature goes smack dab planting himself in between Ias and the bandits clutching onto the side of the cliff with hind talons. He takes Ias up in a foretalon.

Sidge takes a swipe at the bandits who are backing away. The bandits all break and run away. Ias through this is leisurely looking. He is a bit tense because he is watching what is happening but is actually in a relaxed mode at all of it with a wry grin.

Page 3

Maybe end the second page with a shot of Sidge looking down at him and bringing him closer, but if not definitely maybe include the first panel is of him starting to bring him to his mouth. Ias is amused, but not anxious. Like he is looking into a cave but is not really concerned, but starting to get a thrill, on the edge of his seat and anxiously so.

A next panel maybe halfway into the mouth feet dangling out as he goes in head first.

Next panel maybe a view outside the mouth from in between jagged dagger teeth, not so sharp as his teeth are naturally less sharp because of cow traits. Then outside sidge tilts his head up. Next maybe a picture of a closed throat, circular overlapping closed.

Page 4

We enter the throat with Ias headfirst. Totally up to you as which is easier. Having looked at so many vore drawings and endoscopy videos, head first is more personal, side view is a bit better if giving perspective when still considering what the other character, Sidge, is doing. Mixture is good if well placed. Again, totally leaving this up to you. A good page of traveling down the throat. Think animal throat, pink and tubular but with all sorts of juts, bumps, indentations and protrusions and turns but still going in one direction, down, or slanted down if sidge is not upright.

Here would be a narration to as what I would say: Slip sliding away. He does try to stop twice while he goes down to get a good perspective of where he is and to fully enjoy what is happening. He slips down arms by his side. He is really wanting what is happening to happen, like a first time sexual experience, which is somewhat true because this is the first time this has ever happened to him. He is hesitant but in his head he is screaming c'mon. Not much is spoken in this part of the story but maybe a bit of simple thought here to the fact of how stock still of indepth interest, intrigue, coupled with pleasure.

Page 5

At The cardia, which is the stomach's inlet anatomically. It is like a circle flap, that has two closing parts or muscle sphincters o-o with a small space between them (so, one closing flap, a small tubular space between that and the sphincter before the stomach), Either way, I didn't make this difference in the story with one or two closing circular flaps. Maybe he has one because cows do or dragons do, I really didn't research so up to you to detail the difference. Ias is fully relaxed at this point like being put through a full body massage, dreamily delirious. He cums while being pulled/pushed halfway through the cardia sphincter.

He is oozed into the stomach, which could be a panel of him gooey or not so gooey say, his arms head and upper body through the second sphincter into the stomach but in the air above the roof and floor of the stomach. He is deposited down into the stomach's folds, and stomach folds being stomach folds, the entire oriface being wrinkly and parts of the ceiling drooping down here and there; the stomach is a J shaped organ and he is dropped into the larger part of the upper J part looking up at the Cardiac Sphincter. Anyways, he lays there delirious. The next part is going to be a flashback so he is laying there dreamily recalling how he got up to the bandits and this covers the first part up to that point.

Page 6

Flashback, and I don't know what would be a presentation of it, so will leave it up to you, maybe first panel being on Ias, naked, and sprawled out asleep on a grassy knoll at the edge of the forest but at the edge of the mountains. An apparition floats in and it looks exactly like Ias, full nakedness, fatness, except it is translucent, ghostly. Ias wakes up and cries out in joy at Sko, "I did it! I came to Pranoke!" and Sko says back, "Are you going to fulfill the story here then?" Next panel, Ias looks away shocked, "Oh no, I'm going to miss the next part!"