Out of Retirement (A1, B2, C7)
**chapter -7- out of retirement** _midnight san francisco, california_ ... ** nathanial carrington drew his foot back** and kicked a door. his leg glowed with the power of a lightning bolt.
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#18 of not so retired any more chapter xviii - sailing into the storm _great. hot chopper landing under sniper fire. in the fucking rain._ arlen held a paw over his eyes, trying to see through the sudden downpour.
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#22 of not so retired any more chapter xxii - iron rain the rangefinders read 960 meters, which buck told him in a whisper so quiet the tiger could barely hear it - even with the sound amplifiers in their lashes - over the sounds of bombardment going
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#9 of not so retired any more things get dark in this chapter. be warned, there is all sorts of nastiness to come.
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#5 of not so retired any more okay, partial chapter for today - things got busy, sorry. no porn in this one, but be warned of incoming violence. also sweltering, crappy brazilian summer weather. critique is very welcome.
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#8 of not so retired any more hey guys, thanks for reading! sadly, no sex in this one, but i'm tentatively pleased with how it turned out. i'd love to get more critique and comments :) they're like fuel for the creativity engine.
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#15 of not so retired any more chapter xv - funnel descending getting in hadn't been tough.
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#19 of not so retired any more chapter xix - gavin had left the security office a few minutes after he last talked to his boss and psychotic battle-buddy, climbing up through the oversized vent systems used in the hospital.
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#26 of not so retired any more not sure how good my action writing was here. does it keep a good sense of pace and suspense? comments welcome :) criticism is also totally okay.
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You won't get too many more goes at this before your retirement, so it's only fair that we give all comers their fair shot." this time, the ram's blood ran cold at the second mention of his 'retirement'.
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#28 of not so retired any more chapter xxviii - debrief, reunion sato goza had gotten the call and immediately made arrangements to fly, despite the discomfort he knew would be the price more so than the money.
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#4 of not so retired any more okay, new chapter. let me know how the character-building looks :) taking your advice and trying to flesh out the main characters one at a time to make them both more likable and their trauma more understandable.