A Change in Pace
Hope this lives up to "Finding Jastin" I'd like to apologize if I doesn't. Criticism is always welcome. "Come on wake up, little guy" Brady stirred hearing the gentle voice, sitting up and rubbing his gray-green eyes. "What...
My Master's Mistress
Finally I finished the third chapter. Criticism is more than welcome as always. As are punishment ideas if I don't upload every two weeks (Jastin made me type that) Caution! What follows below is based on true events. No names or ages have been...
Master and pet reunited
Please let me know what you think and let me know how I can do better. I'd also like to express that this is not based on real events. The Nike and aperfectcircle belong to their respective owners. My character Brady can be used in whatever Jastin...
Revenge at last.
This is an old story I found while cleaning out my closet so I decided to post it on here. Please note that I was thirteen when I wrote this story so. Anyway let me know what you think I might remake it in to a series. I stood there pistol...
Why I'm fucked up
My first story. Criticism is welcome and appreciated. See my journal entry "soon" for more details "But why kehlan?" "Because I'm going to do something it'll be funny and if you don't I'm going to tell mom you watched adult swim." "I've...
The End?
This is what will ((Hopefully)) Be my coming out of retirement story. Given I'm sure I'm rather rusty be brutal with your criticism It's really apreciated. The year is 1890 The old west is in it's twilight years. The magics of Kitsunes, Dragons, and...
Finding Jastin
As always be brutally honest. This story is based on RL events. Enjoy "So Jastin what are you doing after school?" A sixteen year old fox/panther hybrid asked looking at the red husky beside him. "I don't really have any plans. Why...