Poem #19: Yo Pense (I Thought)

Its about reflection and critical thinking of the world around us. i've included the english translation.

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leave me be. poem

I don't half to take your criticism. because your hypocrisy is bigger than the usa. you just drive me to the brink to where i want to brake your face. if you can't handle this fate then change it your way.

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The Mourning After - Chapter 24 (More Q's than A's)

I am at a critical point in my training where i need to learn to totally suppress and control the spirit or..." his statement didn't need to be finished. we all knew what would happen. this was the reason he couldn't stay here in zangar.

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Jecht's Story

Jecht was often criticized for being a flaming hot-head. but it was not a good day to be a criticizer. hell, said criticizers were flying out the bar window now.

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A song I wrote.

So this is a song which is critical of the us government. it follows the song the russians by sting.

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2000 Reasons

So just letting ya'll know that i appreciate the conversations, the comments, the tacit votes of approval, the shouts, the criticism, the art, the contests, the views, and everything else that you all have taken the time to provide to me.

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Dusk's Adventure day 3

\*he uses drill rush landing a critical hit\* dusk: \*he uses brutal swing on shield again landing a critical hit\* shield: \*seems nearly defeated\* okay, i give! you win... dusk: thanks, can you get up? shield: yeah.

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A.W.E (Anthropomorphic Wrestling Entertainment) Chapter 2

He got the criticism out quickly as if he didn't really want to say it. "i appreciate it hector. though being an entertainer i consider criticism to be more useful." i couldn't help but think i sounded cold and dismissive of his kind gesture.

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The orphaned Riolu chapter 1

Another critical, riolu falls onto his knees and gets up riolu then tries to use hand to hand combat or paw to paw combat in this case on his opponent but the opponent dodges every time, riolu gets struck by a wing attack and it scores a critical hit, riolu's

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GoM-Ep15-The Enemy Within-

He is known to be very blunt, critical and very self centered with a huge ego.

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The Light and the Darkness of Humanity

Wow, this is pretty scary and inspirational at the same time. i don't mind any helpful criticism, so feel free to comment.

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"Family Tails" - Epilogue

Please feel free to leave any comments, suggestions, observations, constructive criticisms, questions, and thoughts in the comment section.

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