The Explorer: Forward
I am very open to constructive criticism and if you give me some feedback, i will do my best to get back to you and chat with you about it, but dont take offense if i dont.
Friends, Lovers, Partners ~ Prologue
As this is my first submission, and comments and criticism are welcome. vote or fave if it pleases you to do so.
Jecht's Story
Jecht was often criticized for being a flaming hot-head. but it was not a good day to be a criticizer. hell, said criticizers were flying out the bar window now.
The Mourning After - Chapter 24 (More Q's than A's)
I am at a critical point in my training where i need to learn to totally suppress and control the spirit or..." his statement didn't need to be finished. we all knew what would happen. this was the reason he couldn't stay here in zangar.
2000 Reasons
So just letting ya'll know that i appreciate the conversations, the comments, the tacit votes of approval, the shouts, the criticism, the art, the contests, the views, and everything else that you all have taken the time to provide to me.
A song I wrote.
So this is a song which is critical of the us government. it follows the song the russians by sting.
Dusk's Adventure day 3
\*he uses drill rush landing a critical hit\* dusk: \*he uses brutal swing on shield again landing a critical hit\* shield: \*seems nearly defeated\* okay, i give! you win... dusk: thanks, can you get up? shield: yeah.
The orphaned Riolu chapter 1
Another critical, riolu falls onto his knees and gets up riolu then tries to use hand to hand combat or paw to paw combat in this case on his opponent but the opponent dodges every time, riolu gets struck by a wing attack and it scores a critical hit, riolu's
A.W.E (Anthropomorphic Wrestling Entertainment) Chapter 2
He got the criticism out quickly as if he didn't really want to say it. "i appreciate it hector. though being an entertainer i consider criticism to be more useful." i couldn't help but think i sounded cold and dismissive of his kind gesture.
Deception (Bread And Circuses)
Rebel, shoot deadly pin, terror spread by flag of false, feel the increase in your pulse, allow us to take care of you, for we know better than you do, your children are not yours to raise, a god you aren't allowed to praise, self-defense and critical
Priorities Upon Waking (Otherwise Untitled)
~ she chafed against the difficulty of de-tangling the mission parameter from amongst the nest of critical alerts and overdue notifications that were trying to intrude on her mind.
"Family Tails" - Epilogue
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