Writing Your Own Narrative

It had been no surprise to anyone that after the fire that happened to one of the apartment complexes in the area turned out to be an electrical short that the surrounding buildings would be inspected, but it still didn't make it any less infuriating...

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Confessions

narrator: after their intense orgasms, they feel very tired. veemon: lucas, i'm kinda tired. lucas: c'mon, let's go to bed. narrator: the both of them tuck each other in and fall asleep. narrator: it was friday!

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There is a human in my life! (Corrected)

I was a little confused because of that new style: 3rd person narration. i hope you like it.about the story: the same story from a different perspective. nothing special.

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Chapter 1 - Goldilocks and the Three Bears

The narrator's voice could be heard, telling the story. according to the title and the narrator, the story was called ‘goldilocks and the three bears'.

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Max Musk

narrator: "it's time for you to learn a bit about yourself. you're uncut, right?" max nods, rubbing the back of his head. narrator: "have you ever had smegma before?" again, max shrugs and nods. narrator: "great!

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Prologue - Out of Character

The wolf's head shot up, suddenly hearing a voice that seemed to be narrating everything he did. "show yourself!" cried the spooked wolf. "i cannot show myself," replied the voice. "i am the narrator.

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As you know Bob, show don't tell: Srsly (7 shows, no tells!)

In that i'm using narrative techniques as soon as i start going on about 'damn cans' and 'some kid'. the difference is the narrator is, it would appear, john himself. if i wrote it like this - 'john walked down the street, hating every step.

Interlude: Meet Nadia

Volunteer corps and military familiescall me nadia,  your friendly  interlude narrator.  i thought i would set some things straight about   the world before we move forward.  there are three ways  to join a crew. first there is the draft brand.  

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Zion - Light of the New Moon (Pre-Start 2/3)

If that is the case, philip lightfeather will take over as narrator. myrh: the unknown narrator.

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The Feline Creature

The feline creature was conceited and, one evening, while staring at his reflection on the still seas, he started to think about his magnificence. He was the wind and the breeze which shook the foliage with its swift touch; he was the goshawk and the...

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