A sample scene

Taking critique on this sample work, it's pretentious af haha i haven't written a single piece in my entire life but yolo 'closer...almost there...just a few more steps to go.'

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Prologue: Sunrise Over the Alley

"heh, i mean, i was just wonderin', mate, if ya could, y'know, 'elp me out a bit, eh? i know i been short on cash, but ya know i'm always good for it, right? eh?" seth glanced sidelong at dougie.

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Why Pinkie Pie Smiles

"i don't want you to fail...but i don't have a whole lot to smile for," he admitted. "you have heaps to smile about!" she declared. "i...really don't," the pegasus said with a sad shake of his head, his tone hesitant.

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Rage Against the Machines

"since i thought that i needed a change of scenery i decided to activate a few of the mechanisms within this place and transport us somewhere where i didn't have to listen to anyone.

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Haunted Suite P1x3 - Dark Shadows

i mean, i figure mr. fancy usagi would want to remain on your good side." "i would assume so too, jikan.

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Best in Show - Tarien

In all honesty i was just going to throw them out since i didn’t feel right selling a brand i didn’t know, but since you’re in dire need i can give them to you for free.”

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Who am i. poem

Just who am i.

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How to Curve a bitches intention -

Good 'girl', i knew a little bitch like you wouldn't be able to resist for long. " the shep's paw made its way to the back of the small pink canines head, just slightly pushing on it.. encouraging the dog even more. " y.. yes sir.. i..

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RETREAT, HELL! WE JUST GOT HERE!

\*\*\* mutated or injured i could not care less i risked everything to bring them all out of this mess leave a creature behind? i would rather die!

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TheReason

i saw a boy dressed up as a fox and i thought he was really cool but others thought he was a weirdo and a freak. so i did some research and i found out that furries are one big happy family which welcome all new furries into them.

Martial Law

"wait, did i just see what i thought i saw?" "yeah, he was filming a woman that got pounced on by a husky before i called you over," roland said as he switched off the device.

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Best of Both Worlds (Part 2)

"i know what that information sheet said about you when i read it, but i can't help feeling like this. i think i'm falling in love with you", sawyer quickly stated, soon hiding his face by covering it with a paper towel.

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