Four Rules of Shadowrunning
_Where's the fucking aircar, Dellia?!_ _ _ _I lost my link with it, stupid shit! I TOLD you to replace that transceiver!_ _ _ _Haven't had the time!_ _ _ _More like haven't had the cash..._ William threw himself out the office window anyway,...
Torpedo Run Chapter 19
Chapter 19 Like shoals of piranhas swarming through an endless black sea, the two armadas swarmed toward one another at immense speeds made ponderous by the sheer emptiness of space. Captain Leith watched, heart thundering with the...
Torpedo Run Chapter 9
Hi everybody, sorry this chapter took longer to put out. For some reason it just didn't seem to want to flow. Anyway, please give me suggestions, comments, critique, whatever you feel might help me make better writing in the future. Thanks! ...
The Furry Dead (Medieval Style) Chapter II
When he'd fought the rot ogre, Tomasj's sword fighting had been powerful, fast, graceful in a brutal and terrible fashion, a symphony of murderous motion. Once they'd entered the undercroft tunnels and encountered the tightly-packed rotting dead,...
Phil
Nobody noticed the old grey-fur had died until, ten minutes after closing and a half-hour after last call, the college-aged waitress walked over to gently shake what she assumed was a very drunk Phil. The elderly mutt been a regular for years, well...
Torpedo Run Chapter 22
Comments and criticism are very much welcome :) Chapter 22 Olliver lowered his massive, invisible armored shoulder and plowed straight through his second building in less than ten minutes, grinning with angry satisfaction as he took out his...
Superhero 4
Chapter 4 Doctor Theo Rémy floated over Eve's unconscious form, his old achy legs folded up beneath him in a posture that took longer to achieve every day. His paws, gnarled with use and years, were contorted into mystical mudra shapes that...
The Furry Dead Chapter XIV - Pressure
Hey everyone - Let me know what you think! Is Captain Summer coming off as a grumpy badass, or is he too cliche? I'd love to hear what you all think about the character development and thematic elements of the story. Trying to figure out if I need to...
The Furry Dead (Medieval Style) Chapter IV
Comments welcome! ---------------------------------------------- The tower sat atop a squat hill, the round fortification standing as a foreboding sentinel over the deep-rutted, flooded crossroads whose legs vanished into the rain not a hundred...
The Furry Dead Chapter VII - The Path Decided
Hi everybody. For those of you still reading this series, how do you feel about it? Is it too slow, too much exposition? Or is it doing a good job of describing characters and setting the scene and themes of the setting? I'd love to get your feedback...
Torpedo Run Chapter 15
Comments are very welcome, as are votes and such. Can't improve my writing without help :) Be aware that there is some medical hygiene-related grossness in this chapter. Trust me it's there for a reason - realism makes stories more interesting, in my...
The Furry Dead Chapter XV - Kindling
Hi everyone, another plot development chapter. As requested, enjoy more awfulness ;) Please let me know if the corruption and zealotry seems believable. I've read way too much George R.R. Martin to let my political intrigue be boring, so please help...