Star Fox Chronicles: Chapter 1: While We Wait
If you could please leave some comments and advice on how to improve my beginner writing skills. i'd greatly appriciate it. thanks, and chapter 2 should be up really soon.
Like Fuzzy Bunny's
Seriously, i need feedback to work on my writing skills. please comment. :) my name is merry newflend, wife to david newflend. we have bin married for 5 years now.
Wolfen - Chapter 5
Just a warning, though, my writing skill has improved some since i first started writing. keil woke everyone up and gathered them together once the moon rose. "all right, pack. tharren, you will take my role while i am gone.
Chapter 1: A Change of Mode
It is intended to be fun, and hopefully will hone the writing skills of those who decide to participate. i have selected a group of characters familiar to most, if not all who enjoy reading furry stories.
Transformative Works
He didn't think to magic his writing skills into existence, nor to give himself money, fame, or anything. his thoughts settled on mark. that bastard. that pompous, tea-sipping bastard.
Black-Winged Angels Chapter 1: Avila
The changes are necessary because i feel like my writing skill has improved since writing dragon's pride, so i discard some unnecessary details that can be said 'un-dragon-like', but i still leave some overly fantastical moment so the whole theme does not
Wolfen - Chapter 14
Just a warning, though, my writing skill has improved some since i first started writing. verik looked into the wolfen's beautiful purple eyes. he opened his mouth to speak, but she pushed him away and got to her feet. "who are you?
From the Real to the Fantastic. Chapter 1: The Real.
(this chapter is very old, and although i have given many edits to this one chapter, my writing skills have improved much since, so i would appreciate it if you would continue reading on despite this poor beginning.)
Experiment 261 Chapter 1
When it is complete, i would like someone to give a good critical review of the entire story to see how i can improve on my writing skills.
Family Enslavement
#2 of experiment triple zero ok i came up with the idea for this story series originally but since i lacked the writing skills i have gone into business with another author.
The Victoria Chronicles - 01, In the Beginning, There was Man
#1 of the victoria chronicles so i finally got chapter 1 finished. or at least as good as my meager writing skills can accomplish at this point. not gonna lie. the first chapter took far longer than i had hoped it would.
Wolfen - Chapter 10
Just a warning, though, my writing skill has improved some since i first started writing. that morning, verik had the same dream again, only slightly different. he still couldn't see anything, but there was something else.