I'm almost done!?

**As of right now, I'm almost done with my rough draft of my first story. I think it's OK. But I really would appreciate it if I could get your thoughts on my story.**

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Team Valiant Arc 7.5 Chapter 1: Sons

You should _totally_ meet my grampa's salamence, bellator. he's _super_ cool and friendly." "a salamence?" qiang asked, joining caulin in rubbing ignus' belly. "what is a salamence?"

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"Didn't Wanna Miss Anything"

Sam is a shiny salamence. she's been a friend of mine for a while, to the point that if i were in a crowd of nothing but haxorus, she could pick me out in an instant.

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A Dark Sun Approaches

He immediately placed the salamence's ball on lisa's belt along with one of the tryanitars. he debated on the last he should give her then decided on giving her stan the stantler. he turned to lisa with the last three in his hand.

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The Human War- Chapter Ten

Bear left the soldiers as he entered salam city and saw the humans stare at him. "where is my son?" bear shouted at them in the common language. "where is the reverend lord?" the humans flinched and a couple ran off.

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Chapter 9

"What, what? The only way I know how...? Well, you're welcome but... what...?" Kyn could help but stumble over his own words. Making the human stumble, catching him off guard, was always a treat. She rumbled at him with a bit of laughter. "Is it not...

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Chapter 5

"it's an electric typed egg...luxray and salamence aren't...compatible." she tried, waiting to see if she understood, and if not she'd copy it down onto the paper. "that is... rather interesting, but understandable.

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Arc 5 Chapter 2: The Road to the South

"grampa victor's salamence." he replied quickly. "oh." lashanne nodded in understanding.

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Torch Gets Passed On

**present day** lisa held the heavy box in her arms while she jumped off the salamence. she turned to him and thanked him; he said nothing to her as he took off again leaving her alone in the wide, quiet street.

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The twelve preys of new year

The whole family said goodbye to flygon and salamence and prepared the berries of luck. had 10 minutes to the final year bell and they put your favorite channel whole family.

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Freiends or Users

A salamance was sitting in the yard sleeping. ben race over to it and gave it a hug. "hey there, did you miss me?" asked ben. as soon as salamance heard ben's voice it woke up and started to nudge ben's head.

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Chapter 5

Have you ever thought about what you're going to do when you're a salamence?" tensa didn't spend much time talking about his past, and now focused a bit on the future.

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