Faith- rough draft(bare with me)

#1 of rough draft story 1 i am a manga artist pursuing a career and if this story is popular among its targeted audience i will advance to character profile and eventually paneling. please use only constructive criticism as this is my life long passion i

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The Dragons, Chapter 6: Roughing it Royally

Amaris sat up with a gasp as he woke up and realized what was being said. He looked around and was a little disappointed to find Cetacea gone, but he didn't have time to worry about it. He was finally going to get to do normal boy stuff! He practically...

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CyberPIgeon X Script (Rough Draft)

CyberPigeonX Part 1 Sec-Server Control Room. 10:53 PM; March 16, 2017. "Cyber-Shields... Operational. Structural Integrity... Structural Integrity... Failed, sir. Integrity is slowly decaying. We cannot hold a positive charge." Doctor Marshall...

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Untitled Rough Draft, Part 2

"So," Corwin said as they walked across the docking bay floor, "where'd you learn to fight like that? Were you in the military?" "Nah. When I was growing up, some of my friends were learning martial arts for competitions, and I wanted to learn just...

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The Captain's Lament (final rough draft)

This is the final rough draft that has been sent to an editor to reach a finished copy. the book itself is completely and in the hands of an editor. so it won't be to long before i publish it.

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Untitled Rough Draft, Part 10

"How's he doing?" Kolya stepped into the med-bay and found Lorkis on one of the beds with more than half his body draped over the end and coiled up. Ralissa sat on the edge of the adjacent bed and Cora stood at a nearby console, staring at the readouts...

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Untitled Rough Draft, Part 9

"this was really rough on you, hon. let's get lorkis to the med-bay and patch him up. afterward, you should meet up with the others and spend some time in one of the observation lounges. just take it easy for a while."

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Untitled Rough Draft, Part 8

Should just be two or maybe three more and the rough draft will be finished.... "kolya?" "not now, corwin," she snarled through clenched teeth.

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Untitled Rough Draft, Part 7

"You guys okay?" Kolya paused at the rover's door and stared at Corwin, Zadra, and Lorkis as they sat in the passenger compartment. All three of them had been unsettled enough with the discovery of the_Vancouver_'s dead crew, but once they'd returned...

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Untitled Rough Draft, Part 6

"Still no luck?" Kolya leaned against the edge of a console and watched Ralissa's team poking at the controls and connecting instruments to interface ports. The flight deck had been illuminated only by everyone's helmet lights until Lorkis pulled a...

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Untitled Rough Draft, Part 5

"Okay, here we go." Ralissa pushed off gently and drifted through the open airlock door. Zadra and Lorkis joined them, followed by Kolya, Corwin, Dylan, Nishara, and Grishnag. Everyone tapped a quick burst from their thruster packs to accelerate them...

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