As you know Bob, show don't tell: Srsly (7 shows, no tells!)
Lets say in your story you need to explain something that everybody knows, but you've been listening to these people who say 'show, don't tell'.
Thomas Shorts: Last Chance
I'll grant you points for sticking to your story, but i award you no points for credibility. now be quiet we're not too far from the surgery room. i must begin focusing on the upcoming procedure."
The Magnum Opus - Prologue
You would not be able to enter the book unless your story had all the components of a fictional narrative." the stranger smiled at cliff. “you know what those components are, right?"
The Letter A in Love - Abstinence
I looked outside, laughing to your stories when i left for half a year due to me being in the military. the hellish experience i had, the innocent people i shot in wars, i feel in guilt and all. i smiled though. i smiled, promise.
Maulaholics Anonymous (ADHG)
\>"thank you for sharing your story with us today michael and nancy. now i believe you're the last new member."
If Only You'd Wanted Me Back
"you owe us some more of your story, although i think i can guess some of your story now. you're a writer, or you wanted to be." carefully, the bear nodded.
Revaramek the Resplendent: Chapter Sixty Four
No longer part of your story." he took a deep breath, then shook his head. "or maybe, there's another story, told by another god, where you refused to bite the fruit at all." he snorted, flattening his ears.
The Bard's Punishment
I came to hear your story, that's all." the dragon's head darted forward and a hot blast of breath hit against the jay's legs as the toothed muzzle came uncomfortably close.
Writing Tips vol. 2
Now for some ways to spice up your story a little more. as i've already mentioned, direct thoughts are a big help. you also want to indicate what the characters are feeling.
Dear Diary...
You showed me stuff that i didn't know from before and it was an eye opener to hear your stories.
Ander - Part 1: Subchapter 8
your story can't end like this! your story hasn't even begun yet!_ she thought, desperately seeking purchase. were the gods watching this right now? did they deem this a rightful punishment for going against her parents wishes?
Intro
Two, i do want to continue writing my own stories as well, but i will write your stories as soon as possible.7. if you have any questions, message me. i will be happy to answer!most importantly, please enjoy the stories.