Zion: Light of the New Moon, Ch 5.4 Shrad

** positive viewpoint: the tunnels leading underground should keep the party safe until the chimeras leave. negative viewpoint: while the chimeras stay, the survivors of the caravan will be at their mercy.

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Zion: Light of the New Moon, Ch 5.4 Bannihar

** positive viewpoint: the caravan is obviously up in arms, and they are ready to defend against the undead horde. negative viewpoint: they are probably signalling for help, so any attempt to join them will result in lethal combat.

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As you know Bob, show don't tell: Srsly (7 shows, no tells!)

In a novel where you're writing in what is now a popular viewpoint - close third person - you are trying to write from your character's shoulder. "john walked down the street, hating every step.

Welcome To Equestria

* * * ~~~~viewpoint: princess celestia~~~~ * * * "hmm...? what might this be? it's almost time for me to rest and twilight sends me a letter now?"

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610 Viewpoint Like A Missile

V=werhyjj34ze save point: viewpoint like a missile somewhere in south america, 1980 imagine your viewpoint like a missile.

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Welcome To Equestria: Chapter 3

~blu and hotshot * * * ~~~~viewpoint: hotshot~~~~ * * * the goodbye's were short and sweet from that point on. we both promised to visit when we could.

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Prophetic offering

It was agonising, and his viewpoint from above his own body just made it worse. he could see his chest rise and fall evenly, his guts quivering slowly but naturally.

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Information - Story Links

Swaps very frequently between character viewpoints. interlinks inbound links - - a light kitsune named teranda from the tails of power universe first shows up in the second segment of the story.

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Zion - Light of the New Moon (Pre-Start 2/3)

Thanks to your votes she will be the contributing narrator instead, providing viewpoint and context for the party's trip.

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Dawn of the Dragon-Chapter 11

Seeing through their viewpoints. see, after i see through one of their viewpoints, including yours, that'll give me some kind of sense in my brain of which direction to know where you're at." i internally gasped at that.

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Welcome To Equestria: Chapter 4

~blu and hotshot * * * ~~~~viewpoint: blu~~~~ * * * the morning came and zecora helped us get ready for the day ahead.

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