Guardians: Downfall Revised Chapter 6
#7 of guardians downfall revised revised chapter 6 of guardians: downfall. please support the official release in august!
"Submit" (a poem)
I've revised it. "submit" i've made the thumbnail. i've shrunk it down. i've tweaked the colors. i've designed it. "submit" i've written the tags. i've made a summary. i've put it in the pool. i've uploaded it.
An Unexpected Love
#1 of an unexpected love (book) did a little revising a while back. decided to post the new revised chapter up just to make something new i guess. (this is the third time posting it because it keeps getting messed up....)
A Fire In The Sky, Prologue
Sangheili/elites belong to 343 industries/bungie and microsoft all (current; a couple canons may make appearances later, if i don't revise around them) characters, to me.
The Encounter Part 4
I sat for hours, writing, revising, rewriting, adding details, removing details, and simply breaking my own story apart to make it the best i could. in the end though, it was about 20 words too long.
Phoenix - Prologue
#4 of phoenix this story is being revised so that the plot is different. don't worry, the original prologue still exists. just not here. ** i'm sorry to say that this post no longer fits with the rest of the story.
Astraifort Estate 0.9
I gave it several revisions. also i wanted to make the text and dialogue to flow as smooth as possible.
College Days - Chapter One -
That meant hours of mind-numbing research, revision and study - not going out and socialising with his friends and acquaintances - no more wild frat parties...none of it.
Canine Gaymance- The Small World
There were a few students there, either revising for yesterday's lesson or having their mobile phones with earplugs out and play with it.
A Student Movie - part 1
Mark already knew the scenario, so he just revised his lines. erwan took a close look. him and mark are a couple. mark comes back from work and directly goes in the room and hugs erwan.
Chapter Two
I have finished chapter three but i still need to do my final revisions. i will be posting the revised versions of the prologue and chapter one here momentarily. hope you all enjoy it as much as i do writing this story.
Lie-f...
Among mystery, among the lost lies a price paid beyond any cost division only in thought, revision ever on the edge many look to quickly what lies below the unthinkable ledge surrounded by much, not many grasp what lay in front of eyes closed that see