A soul of pure fire part #1

Story by Kris the golden retriever on SoFurry

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So guys heres a story I have been thinking about for a while! It includes my new character, Maokai. A blue naga. You might hear more of him possibly, i guess it depends on my mood :D

This is for 18 years or older audiance. Please if you are not a legal adult, click dat red X button at the top of your screen. Thanks.


You know at only the age of 18, just graduating from High school and coming from such a small town that I would be here. Standing in front of my grandmas house in the suburbs of Los Angeles, her gorgeous Victorian style house in front of me, its deep reed facade keeping its true age a mystery to the world. My grandmother loved her house, I think more then she loved her self or her family, but with my parents gone from this world I guess all she had was me, and I guess I was never around much. To busy being a stupid teenager trying to prove myself.

With a deep sigh I look down at the box in my hands and clear my head, now is not the time to look back at how selfish I was. Now is time for new, now is time to prove myself to the world of who I truly am, prove that I am a capable adult like my grandma and parents wanted me to be, its time I step up and start by showing that I can own my own house. Yup, thats why I am here, this is now mine. Like my parents my grandma had passed the same way, she had gotten into a car accident and because of how fragile she was..she couldent be saved. I notice as I hear a small dripping sound from below me and see a small wet spot on the box below me, I didnt even notice I was crying. I hurry and quickly shuffle my way to the large front door and reach down the for the key box and type in the code that was written in the paperwork that the landlord had given me, a portly old boar, stuck up as can be. He seemed he didnt want to waste his time on someone like me maybe, it may have been my age. Who in there right mind would sell, well give, a house to some one of my age. Oh well, im here now and thats what matters..I guess

I finally punch in the code with my trembling hands and unlock the door and quickly walk in closing the door behind me leaning against it holding tightly onto one of my few boxes of belongings and by a slim glance I look up and notice that her house hadn't changed at all. Silk tapestries hand above every doorway into every room, a deep red with intricate gold patterns and filigree depicting the stars and moon on each and every one of them. This house really was something amazing, with her own personal style was everywhere in the house. Where all the conventional lighting fixtures would be these marvelous hanging tea lights. All were these small brightly colored glass plates with a small well in the middle where the small candles would set, I didnt even want to think about how my grandmother lit all of those herself as there were several in each and every room, but for now it was a bright day so the large customized bay window would like most of the downstairs living room, saves me some time to unpack and make my self at home.

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I dont know how long I had spent taking the boxes inside, unpacking them from my small 2009 geo metro. I really didnt have all that many things to bring in, but every so often I would walk inside the house and just take a seccond to look around again, smell the potpourri she had around the house and it brought back so many memories that I just had to stop for a little while to calm myself down. But finally after a little while I had gotten all my things to a place where they belong. My clothes had been situated into my grandmas old room where her clothes were all put into boxes and moved up stairs. My books had all found enough space on the 5 book shelves that my grandma has around the house, she apparently really loved to read although I didnt bother looking at any of the titles she had up there. I was just to busy.

By the time I had finished all the fuss of unpacking I noticed that I was sweating through my shirt, no one said California was a colder climate. Although it was perfect for my family of Naga, being primarily snakes we liked hotter climates so we could stay warmer.

I had wondered my way up stairs and into my new room to find one of my shirts that hung in closet, all I needed, you try fitting this tail into some pants. My room had an attatched master bathroom that my grandma had modified for our specific race. So instead of the overhead shower like most were acclimated to, she had a full body shower that was simply perfect. As I stepped in I turned a single handle and the water that came out was the perfect temperature. I sat there in the water letting it roll off of my scales as I took a few deep breaths and got out my body gel and started working it around, my head full of all these thoughts of how I was going to make it work. This house was amazing and thank god it way payed off, but what about my basic needs. How would I manage that with schooling? Dammit. I slammed my balled fist against the wall before I realized that I was tense, both hands in a tight ball and my snake like hood around a good portion of my body out, it took a while to calm my self down. We snakes have a tendency to have a bad temper, its kind of in our blood I guess. I finish washing the sweat and grime off of my bright blue scales and turn the water off and right next to the handle is another knob of sorts. It looks like the temperature dial in a car, but more round with a chrome finish. As I turn it fans located on the walls and ceiling blow warm air on me blowing off the water as it doesnt so much dry as it just rolls off the fans just there to help clean off anything else that might be there.

Finished with my shower and relaxing a bit I step out, well I guess slither? Anyway. Looking in the mirror I go to my room and pull out a waist sash, its like taking a long piece of cloth and simply wrapping it around your waist and then securing it with something. Its not something most furrs or humans wear as they have no need, its mostly for people of my race, see we dont have normal...junk you know? We have it yes, but its more hidden within our bodies and when we are aroused it comes through this slit, its weird I know bit ehh I cant help it, but the sash just helps up cover it up and fit in you know? Oh well. Wondering back down stairs I finally take time to look at the house, its been ages since I was here. The hard wood floors are in perfect condition, not a single scratch. The dark cherry wood walls still looking as new as ever, this house really had character, and a lot of up keep. I dont really know how technologically advanced my grandma was but I knew she at least had a land line, which was good, but I dont really know about wifi. I guess that would be something I would need to look into.

Getting bored i decide to look back and scramble through the paperwork our family lawyer had given me. The manilla envelope that he had given me was labeled with our family name, Misthaven, it was full of paperwork about my grandmas will and how she wanted her entire estate to be given to her only daughter, Meridian, my mother. But because of her sudden death along with my father, I am the last on in our family. No aunts uncles nor brothers or sisters. Only me. It also says that she had left me a few personal belongings but I dont exactly know where they are so for now I wont worry about it. There are more papers about bill payment for the services, water, electric and exactly where and how to pay them. More boring things to think about. With all the other things he had included a personal card in case I needed anything. Most likely I wont. Packing the papers back up and putting them back on the counter still bored I look up at the clock and notice its getting dark and about 5 thirty, I hear my stomach rumbling and instantly know what will make my entire night better. Pizza. Phone in hand I call my favorite pizzaria in town, only about 30 minutes away and the best vegetarian pizza in the whole world. Yes im a vegitarian, weird I know.

A few seconds after I hear the first ringback I hear a familiar voice. "Hi! Thanks for calling Fresh fit pizzeria! My name is Mark how may I help you?"

His voice made me smile to hear it, "Hey Mark, I was wondering if I could get a vegetarian with a white sauce substitute extra mushroom?"

"Of course Maokai how could I ever forget your order?"

His reply shocked me as I could feel my heart beat a little faster and feel my face flush my scales warming up a bit, "Mark how did you know it was me, I havent been in town for almost a year now?"

I could hear him laugh a little, "Oh trust me, I live in a town for of carnivores, no ones orders a pizza quite like you, with that attractive voice of you"

Yup that was it my face was cherry red now, "Oh gosh Mark, its been forever. Why dont you come over with that pizza huh..we can hang out a bit?"

His smile was prominent in his voice, I could tell. "Oh yea sure! Let me get that started, I will be over in about 30 minutes. Im assuming you are with your grandma and using your same tab?"

My heart weaps a bit at the mention of my grandma, but his voice and promise of a good night makes it all up for me and im back to blushing, "Of course! I will be waiting! Se ya man have a safe drive!"

And with that I hang up the phone still swooning over the fact that I was talking to my first crush. Me and mark met in school, it was my junior year of high school and his senior year. He was on the football team, tall jet black wolf. Not so much muscle as he was jut simply big. He ate well and worked even harder. Nice round gut that had some squish and a nice firm toughness to it. Sadly we never had a decent moment in High school, he was a jock, by all means of the word. Rude, stubborn and just a plain ass. So why did I like him? Well there was this day when I was in my last class of the day in PE. Now being a Naga in a class all about physical prowess, you would think I would be around the top of the class right? Well im not the best. I had speed and agility I wont doubt that, though, I never had that certain thing that most furrs or people had. So for our final we had this course we had to run, it was half a mile on the track, a quick course that included weaving through a set of cones, swinging from a set of bars over a set of bark chips, almost like monkey bars. Last was a run back inside the school to the schools private swimming pool, yea water. Now snakes may be adept at swimming but I guess I am just a special case. Now we were supposed to get in there and dive in as fast and as safely as we could. I was scared I was hesitating but guess who was behind me? Mark. The hottest asshole in school. With my natural speed I was one of the first few student in the pool area, not to far behind me was Mark. I was waiting at the end of the pool scared out of my mind he came bellowing in through the doors behind me and thinking he might be a little prick, so he nudged me. Now im not the biggest person as that nudge was like a brick wall, and I fell in. I instantly sank to the bottom of the pool, I couldent breath, I could not do a single thing. everything went dark.

It must have been not to soon after I had blacked out what they had found me, I remember being woken up to the feel of another persons mouth on my short muzzle. It was nice, I thought I was dead and this was like a kiss of death or something, but I when I opened my eyes it was the exact opposite. It was our coach trying to breath some life into me, not mark, not my highschool crush. But as soon as I woke up coughing up all the water that was trapped inside my lungs expelled up and through my mouth and then things were so fast it was a blur. Blankets on me getting hauled into an ambulance and rushed to an hospital. My parents were alive then as after they came and checked up on me in the hospital a few hours before visiting time was over, the door opened and Mark walked in. He was wearing his usual sports leatherman jacket and blue jeans showing off his large legs. From the wetspots on his fur below his eyes it looked like he was crying. I was the first to speak up, my voice a little hoarse.

"Hey man..whats up?"

He just stared at me in awe it seemed, then he looks furious "What do you mean whats up?! I almost killed you! You should hate me!"

I just looked out the window at the sunset, smirking a bit. "No I dont..oddly enough. I could never be mad at you"

I couldent see his face but his voice gave him away, he was almost crying again "How could you...feel that? I..did this...I did all of this to you"

I looked back over at him and he was standing next to my bed, he was good at being quiet, but I had a face full of his gut and I could not help but feel turned on. "Mark its okay. I forgive you, I dont hold a grudge"

He looked down at me tears welling up ins his eyes and before I knew what was going on..he kissed me. This wasn't like a peck or something you may give your mother. This was deep and passionate, at first I was shocked but as it kept going on I was was slowly enthralled. I had opened my mouth just slightly and he had entered my mouth, exploring it deeply. We stayed like this for a good few minutes before he finally puled off looking down at me and running out of the room.

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Before I could remember any more steamy moments of my first real kiss i could hear the doorbell ring and I knew who that was. I got to the door as fast as I could and unlocking the door I opened it, but to my surprise it wasnt who I was thinking. The man standing in front of me had to be at least 50, a German Sheppard, you could see it in his eyes, his face, the gray around his muzzle and he had this air about of him knowledge almost like an aura. He had a brilliant smile as he held out his hand.

"Hello, you must be Adith's grand child. Maokai am I correct? My name is Marius. I was a friend of your grandmothers for a very long time, we grew up together actually. May I come inside?"

I nod and open the door for him wide enough for him to pass, he walks in casually adjust his suit coat as he takes a left past the stairs and walks to the living room. I follow in suit,, curious why he is here I sit across from him in a lavish loveseat that I always saw my grandmother in, he smiles. "I remember always watching your grandmother sit there, sipping her tea always a good listener, very keen about some things. Although I bet your curious about why I am here."

I nod, "Yes actually I am, I have never heard my grandmother talk about you but you seem very familiar to me"

His laugh was strangely elegant, almost royal. "Well I was around here quite often when you were just a little boy. Your grandmother loved you so much. But I am not here to bring moments of nostalgia. I came here to ask you what you know about your grandma, why you got this house.?"

I look down a little with a puzzled look on my face thinking, "Well I am assuming I got the house because it was in gransmas will. I was and am the last living member of my family."

He gives me this weird look, likes he looking at me but not..like hes looking..into me? "Yes thats what I thought, well ive known about this house for a very long time now and I know all its little tips and tricks. Now its getting late and I think I-"

Interupting his sentence the doorbell rings and the blush on my face comes back but is faint as I look away from the man sitting in front of me, he chuckles "Ahh I see you have company over, perfect timing." He gets up and looks out the window for a moment then back at me "You know its getting dark, you might want to shed some light eventually" He nods his head up just a tad before he walks to the door.

I look at him puzzled, "Oh I dont know if I want to send 4 hours lighting all of these things. Grandma may have liked all these but I dont know, maybe a lamp."

He chuckles again before his paw grips the doorknob turning it, "Oh you dont need to do that, try talking to them"

And with that he was out the door, as fast as he came quickly past Mark not giving him the faintest time of day. I stand in the door way looking at him with a bemused look on my face just so confused I have no idea what to do, before I remember who is standing in front of me. I quickly gasp and scramble to gain some composure before looking up into the stunning face of my crush Mark. "Hello! Its nice to see you! Im starving!" I take the pizza box from his hands and go at a light pace to the kitchen setting it on the counter as I hear a light clicking, probably Marks nails on the hard wood floor. I hear them getting closer before I turn around box open and a slice of pizza in my mouth, he looks at me giving me hie quarky smile. Blushing I finish chewing and ask him "So how have you been man? I havet seen you in forever!"

I go in for a hug as he wraps his muscled arms around my lithe body, I say again behind him "You look even better! Have you been working out?"

I can feel his chest and body rumble as he laughs letting me go after a long hug his hands still on my hips mine still resting on his, "Yea I have been working out more, I gained a lot of weight after..well you know. So I decided I was going to get back in shape. How do I look?"

He takes his paws off my waist and takes a pose, flexing his large sculpted arms and pecs making his work shirt tighten over each mound of muscle, I stare in awe knowing that my blush is coming back to my face and I turn around as quick as I can stuffing my face with the rest of my pizza.

"Awe come on did you even look at me?"

I feel his paws on my wait again as they slowly move around to rest above my sash on my stomach as I blush more not wanting to run around he rests his head on my shoulder looking at my face I try and look away before he lifts a paw and puts it on the side of my face turning me twords him. "Whats wrong huh? Did i scare you?"

Swallowing the food I have in my mouth I look at him, "I just...I didnt know...that..you know"

He smiles at me showing his pearly white canines, "Of course..dont you remember that night in the hospital? That was really how I felt about you..I have always like you and now im comfortable letting the world know. In school I was scared, scared of letting others know. Whats they might think or do, but now with you I just...I want to let everyone know."

I look at him so shocked with my self knowing my feelings but never thinking this would ever happen..I dont know weather to be scared or happy..so many emotions I just look at him silently

His face turns from excited to slightly worried to very worried the longer that I remain silent. I notice and try to compose my self again. "Im..im happy I understand I just...never thought this would ever happen..I was always scared of what that night would mean..I guess im just..happy...this is just so sudden though...but I really like this...uhm..would you maybe like to go watch a movie...if you know...you can?"

The way his face lit up was so marvelous I found it was simply divine, me gave me a big smile "Yea I would like that, just let me call my work and give my boss a BS excuse about how my car broke down okay? I will be back in a bit." With that he let go of me and walked back outside pulling his phone out of his pocket. I instantly missed his warmth against my skin, the way his fur brushed against my scales, I couldent believe I was actually going to watch a movie with him..to be on the couch next to him hopefully snuggling against him as we may or may not be watching the movie, I snicker at my last comment as I put a few more pieces of pizza on a plate and wonder into the back entertainment room where I know my grandma has a large tv for when she had me and the family over for a nice movie. It was a large tv with sectional couches around the small room. It only had one window and it stayed primarily closed but there were more of these tea light holders but because they were not lit the room was completely dark, perfect. I set my plate on the coffee table infront of the couche and started picking out a movie shuffling through the movies looking at the different titles my grandma has in stock. She was pretty well stocked, new movies up to...well yea..

Occupied with choosing my movie I jump scared out of my skin almost as I feel warm paws come around my waist again, realizing who it is I calm down pushing back into Mark looking up at him as he is at least a head and a half taller then me. Him smiling down at me makes me feel safe some how, he pulls me as close to him as he can before kissing down my neck with occasional licks as I hiss a bit like a long sigh my eyes fluttering.

"Maark..we uhhm..havent even began to,,,oh gods.." he kissed me on my lips mid sentence interrupting me sticking his tongue into my open mouth exploring my entire mouth my thin tongue intertwining with his broad thick canine one, eventually him breaking the kiss looking down at me "Lets forget about the movie and get down to...the important parts..."

With that he picks me up kissing me again holding me at the cleft of where my more human looking body meets with my long snake like tail as the rest of my body curls gently around his grinding up close to him giving him small kisses as he walks me up the stairs and to the open door which just past was my new bedroom. My large four post bed had a lavish soft mattress that could probably fit 4 of me...or one of me and one of him..so perfect. He gently set me down as he took off his pants and shirt revealing the jockstrap underneath, white in stark contrast to the rest of his black body. Stripping what remained of his clothing I took of my simple waist sash as well, revealing my hard hemipenis jutting out of my genitile slit hard and dripping pre already. He straddled my body as he began kissing down it, feeling his most lips against my smooth body was something of my dreams. It was glorious the way he slid down my body, my scales not creating any friction. He began to get to my shafts as I felt is hot jowls wrap around both of them as one as they entered his hot wet mouth. Letting out a gasp I gripped his head fur lightley as he began sucking.

It felt like years as he brought my to edge with his masterful tongue work around the tips of my most sensitive pricks. I could feel him enjoying it as his raging canid shaft pressed against me, I could tell he was fairly large by just the way it felt. I knew I had something to enjoy atleast. After a while longer of his sucking on my twin spires and kissing my body he found what he was looking for, the spot to burry his bone. He licked my pucker gently as I let out long gaspy moans as my hands rested on his shoulders, he worked his saliva into me for a while before I could feel the hot tip press against me, it felt so warm and so alluring I just had to have it. I moaned and begd for him to put it in me and after a short while I got what I oh so wanted, it felt amazing. Having that hot shaft split me open, he must have been a good 9 inches long and 3 inches thick. It was very painfull but oh so devine. I could feel him slide into me and slide right against my prostate as my eyes closed in pure bliss as I was left speechless, only able to mutter groans and breath grunts as I could feel him enter me.

After a long process of him getting in I felt his furry balls press againt my lower snake like figure as he began to pull out gently and then sudden thrust in quite rapidly, it hurt but felt like he was shooting bolts of pure pleasure up into my body with every thrust. This was the best night of my life.

We went on like this for a while, thrust, grunt, moan, pree dripping out of my shafts as he held my clawed hands above my head making me submit to his whim, like I would fight it, then suddenly it hit me, the urge to cum like no other. It has been building up over time but now it was just too much to ignore! I left out one more loud moan as I told him, "Oh god...Mark..im cum...cum...cumming!"

With those words leaving my mouth, so did my semen. It shot acrost my body and landed on my chest and lower belly, I could feel the pleasurable burn on my skin as it cooled off fiarly quickly, mixing with mine and his sweat. He groaned down at me rutting like a wild animal as I could tell he was close as well, his know was present and I could tell he wanted it in me before he came, he was determined. With a few hard thrusts he finally got it into me, through my gritted teeth, as shot rope after rope of hot canid cum inside of me, I could feel it burn my insides with a pleasent warmth, I could feel it fill me. I was so exausted I passed out not to soon after he had cum, laying back he let my hands go and fall down to my side and he fall next to me, pulling me into his embrace as we both fell asleep, worn out after our exotic night. That was really amazing.