Lovers Within War (Teaser for Paperclip Vixen)
#1 of paperclip vixen this is the first draft for a part of the story line. lovers within war somewhere in france 25 miles outside of paris december 24, 1944 400 ust fresh snow covered the 12th century undisclosed castle.
Life is Just a Storm- Chapter 25- Absence
first drafts are meant to be shitty. first drafts are meant to be shitty. say it with me now. "first drafts are meant to be shitty." (oh my god, why am i not perfect??) here is chapter 25. more or less. 4,163 words. twenty-five.
The Emotion - Rough Draft
A first draft for the start of a short story and a test to get used to using this website. the night slowly crept over the dense rain forest, its dark but gentle grip blanketing the untamed land.
Wasteful Death, CH 09
This is the first draft version of the story.
Wasteful Death, CH 07
This is the first draft version of the story.
Wasteful Death, CH 05
This is the first draft version of the story.
Author's Notes: Mark and Kim
Well, truth be told, the first draft of the finale did have treesinger ending up with a rather massively swollen belly.
Black Project Files Chapter 13: Roswell part 1
#16 of black project files first draft ## black project files chapter 13 zirra (c) by drakon on the queen mary june 26, 1947:zirra is a famous dancer, she is a large black and red cobra naga with a red and green rose tattoo design down her back.
Consent is for the dull
This is a first-draft that needs proofing and, perhaps, a lot more added. it almost works at this length though, so i'm posting it as a flash piece, because there's a good chance i may not ever write the rest.
Nightly Prowl: Part.1, Finding a Prey
(credit goes to lunar creations for helping with making this sotry better from the first draft)
Wasteful Death, CH 01
This is the first draft version of the story.
Iron and Agate
Literally a first draft but i'm proud of what i wrote. please don't let my pride get in the way of constructive critisism. if grammar and spelling is off its because i wrote it on my phone and cut n pasted it here. right now i'm looking at content.