The War (Rough draft)
Any criticism would be helpful :-) -------------------------------------------------------------- _All warfare is based on deception._ _- Sun Tzu_ **The War** --------------------------------------------------------------- A single crack is...
The Princess and Her Pet, Part One
Also a very rough draft, full of bad grammar habits i've long since broken, and too many exclamation points. this was originally posted years back on my main account, but i'm slowly switching all that stuff here.
Across the Surface
"What?" Satrina blinked unbelieving at her husband. "We're going with the pilgramage. I've already made up my mind. Now start packing." He turned away. Satrina watched her husband who was over twice her age and had been the best friend of her...
More Than A Monster - Chapters Twenty Five and Twenty Six
Chapter Twenty Five I spent much of the day scouring my collection. The first thing I had to find was my raiding bag. I’d long ago taken some of the largest, sturdiest furs I had and stitched them all together to essentially form a massive bag. I’d...
More Than A Monster - Chapters Twenty One and Twenty Two
Chapter Twenty One I dozed off sometime in the middle of the night, out there on the river bank. I woke to find myself slumped over against the grassy shoreline, my neck stiff and aching. Just as I’d convinced myself I wasn’t so old after all,...
More Than A Monster - Chapters Thirty One and Thirty Two
Chapter Thirty One The rest of the day seemed to drag on forever. After the heart pounding heat of battle, and the seemingly endless flow of adrenaline that had roared through my body all morning long, the aftermath seemed far more arduous and...
ROUGH DRAFT: For Lucieth
**this is a very, _very_ rough draft of a story i owe lucieth over on fa for my half of an art trade.** **_very, very rough draft_.
The Emotion - Rough Draft
The night slowly crept over the dense rain forest, its dark but gentle grip blanketing the untamed land. Creatures of the day took heed of the night, retreating to their homes and hiding places. The tall trees atop the central hill were the last living...
Purgatory -Rough Draft/Arrival-
'We have some celebrities here boys and girls' the voice over the intercom would echo as the shipped rocked back and forth through the pull of the gravity from the nearby sun. Those within the ship would all be seated and none to happy as they shook...
weird love
This is my rough draft of the dream i had a few days ago. comment and tell what you think of this new story that will be longer next time and start off meeting the pack.
More Than A Monster - Chapters Sixteen and Seventeen
Chapter Sixteen I left Ravek behind to care for Kylah as I ran down the street. At least most of the fires seemed to be out now, and not as many people were screaming as I ran past them. Most of the crowd that had chased after the group of soldiers...
The Rat and the Dragon
_This is a very very old story. This is the 4th revision, and still very rough. Please bare with me. I put it up to get some input. Thanks._ The light of the tavern spilt over the cobblestone street, the laughter and merriment drifting out...