Guardian Blue: Thanks for the Fox - Chapter 5
They were just tiny light pink little things, curled like little commas, fleshy and naked. the realization hit her suddenly, and she felt absolutely no better when she understood.
Blow Pop - Burst of Glory
And if you have a complaint on my tense shifting or my comma splices. take a number! i know my severe weaknesses. i know i am not the best writer, i also know that i am not the greatest, but i feel my gift is understanding a persons wants.
Every Planet Needs a Hero
Dulcy will be right outside, he could be stuck in a comma for a year anyways." sally explained, biting on her tongue a little bit as she thought back to the fun she and bunny had planned on getting a closer look at the vulpes.
Peacekeepers: Prologue
I am also trying to break sentences up more and use fewer commas. i think it's making it more interesting to read and i actually enjoyed writing this. another small thing i am going to try and roll for different things that happen.
Salvaged
Her eyebrows were natural comma-shaped white lines over those beautiful eyes. "um, hello...are you alr-mmmm!" he would have finished the question, except she had grabbed his head and pulled him in for a kiss.
Yellowstripe and Reiga (bondage, sex, vore, violence)
"meet me in the bar," it said in the hooks-and-commas of the hero's tongue, and at the end was the symbol his captain used as a signature.
The Gamer's Crossing 11 - And Then There Were Five
She started to shakily write out the exact words, too scared to miss a single comma while whimpering to herself, before finishing her note which james snatched from her.
Where Kitsune Wait (Chapter 26)
As always huge thanks to [@mistersigma](/u/mistersigma) for feedback, help, and hunting down the dreaded comma. one day you will get to read the clappening, hopefully.
Stralia - Ocean's Depths
Next chapter i take aim at my comma useage, while it all looks above board i can't say i like how many i throw down, so we'll work on that. anyway, i hope you guys like it and the way the series is going so far!
Flying Circus
Just a little piece i wrote, originally to submit to the writer's clinic at the oxfurred comma virtual event, however the story mutated into something longer as i grew to enjoy the change of setting.
"The Thin Line," Part VV
To cpl winterbough comma grainmaster c/o 37th regt flourford stop orders follow stop escort capt chitterleigh persoc tor stop urgent you arrive soonest stop priority given to your transport
Divine University: Chapter 6
She was lost in a comma, battling for her soul the final step before being consumed.