Christmas Brothers
This is my first story, so please tell me what you think.
The Camping Trip
my first story ever would like some tips on what i could do to make it better my first story you would think that life begins when you are born but for me life didn't start till i was 17. i wasn't a normal teen and i knew it!
After the Game
Well... this is my first story. i based it off of psychoram's picture, after the game. hopefully, i will write a few more stories... this one took me about an hour to write (from 1 till 2 in the morning mind you).
When the cat's away...
Okay, this is my first story ever, and also the first i'll ever have uploaded anywhere. i'm sure there are problems with it, but i hope you enjoy it anyway. a few things i should probably mention, this was written for my mate (a snow leopard.
choose your own Pokemon erotic adventure 1
Also this is my first story so please, tell me what you think i will appreciate it :) you pick charmander, you just had to pick charmander. seriously whats not cool about a fire breathing lizard that turns into a dragon, who _doesn't_ want a charmander. you
Weapon - Awakening
* * * no one will notice, but this is actually a re-write of my first story i wrote (back in yiffstar days) that was denied because i hadn't had anyone furry in the first part.
As The Night Cums
I hoped that you like this its my first story ever so if you want some pointers would be nice. i really want to hear what you think about it. good or bad please post them so i can make my next story better.
pokemon fun
Well this is my first story on ys. i hoped you enjoyed it as i enjoyed writing it.
Michael's Story- Prologue
Disclaimer: okay two things, one this is my first story so let me know how you like it and i am hoping for extremely editorial type comments, and i know this is kind of short so i apologize ahead of time, im just not sure whether or not to really continue
White (Chapter 2 of Black and White)
#2 of black and white the second half of my first story on here. a little short still, but i hope you enjoy it. i open my eyes, blinking a few times at the brightness of the window opposite my bed.
Best Weekend Ever
This is my first story. not a very good one, i know. i actually wrote it to fit a pic i saw, then turned it into a story. this was not a well thought out story, and i don't care.
Log Error
This is my first story ever, please tell me what you all think of it. * * * "good morning sir!' kix's bright, cheerful voice greeted zack as he walked into the control room. "good morning kix, are any of the servers active?"