"Skylands: The Third Gate" ch.11 (NaNoWriMo 2015)
"Eilekarra, in many ways, was the Kellendar of its time. Located on the island of Alamar, it was a unification of nine disparate kingdoms under one rule." Kelmore sat on a small, smooth stone bench outside the third gate. He wove the mystic rites of...
"Skylands: The Third Gate" chapter 2 (NaNoWriMo 2015)
"Newcomers: ya jus' can't trust 'em." The drunken priest slammed his clay mug down so hard, several others at the bar jumped. "Them's an' their ... their heretical, so-called 'gods'! I don't see why the Commons has such a love affair with 'em." His...
harsh beginings draft
"Is he dead?" "Nobody really knows... he hasn't moved in days" "Poor guy... I can't imagine what he must have done to end up like this" "I know what you mean... I've seen rough before... but this. This is something else entirely" "Shit he's coming....
"Skylands: The Third Gate" ch.05 (NaNoWriMo 2015)
Just over a week was the actual travel time but it felt like thirty days. Dorath was small for a duskland but large for a day- or cloudland. The enchanted ores keeping it afloat had been fading for centuries. It and its sister island, Carath, had...
Faith- rough draft(bare with me)
#1 of rough draft story 1 i am a manga artist pursuing a career and if this story is popular among its targeted audience i will advance to character profile and eventually paneling. please use only constructive criticism as this is my life long passion i
"Skylands: The Third Gate" ch.09 (NaNoWriMo 2015)
Climbing stairs, the first thing in the morning, was not Adam's idea of a good start to the day. He'd done it, before, of course: and not just in this world. Back home, in his first apartment, the elevator never worked and he worked overnight at a...
"Skylands: The Third Gate" ch.08 (NaNoWriMo 2015)
Eris had to pretend she wasn't worried. They had continued on, southward, as they had agreed. The hills to the west grew larger and more imposing. But Adam was nowhere to be seen. Planning for this early on, the agreement had been they would not try to...
The Rat and the Dragon
_This is a very very old story. This is the 4th revision, and still very rough. Please bare with me. I put it up to get some input. Thanks._ The light of the tavern spilt over the cobblestone street, the laughter and merriment drifting out...
mates love
That is my rough draft and a work in progress if you like the story ask me and i will continue it, and if you see errors or mistakes please tell me but don't be rude english is my worst subject in school.
The Best Christmas Present(Rough Draft)
Probably not one of my best works, but I kind of like it. Enjoy :) ** I sighed as I walked through the dark streets of Chicago, Illinois. I know, what a stupid thing to do. Walk around Chicago alone at the middle of night, but to tell the god honest...
Erina's rough ride. Rough draft
Erina was sitting at home on the couch, relaxing after the easy fight she just fought, She was a great fighter. The night was calm and relaxing, because the moon was shining down through the window. She was completely naked, and she was very beautiful,...
(Rough draft) Some Dirty Fun
Some Dirty Fun Another hot summer day was giving way to a warm summer night as a pair of equines worked in the backyard. The two lovers enjoying the time just working, the heat and sweat pouring down their bodies. ...