Savagery chapter 6
crits are cool, if you want to leave any. hope you enjoy. and have a merry christmas!!! chapter six truth sounds of birds chirping roused sleet the next morning. the headache was worse than the one caused by the hangover.
Preparations.
Comments and crits are very welcome! just dont poke fun at any spelling or grammar errors too much guys, as i say, this is being typed out just before work and i have no time to go over and correct it too much.
Hunting Party
So no crits :u_
Life of a Little Killer : Chapter 1
C&c please (comments & crits). there might be some edges i need to trim... so all comments are helpful.
Digimon: Fusion ch.4.
crit. system failure! ---- icedevimon stared at the light, it was blinding him. he lifted his wings to cover his eyes. after a few moments the light faded out slowly so he could open his eyes again... only to stare into the barrel of a huge gun.
Temps de chien !
Elle se souvenait encore de ce qu'il y avait ã©crit dans le mail qu'elle avait reã§u trois jours auparavant: â«â cher monsieur/madame nous sommes le fondation changeskin.com.
Safety
._ _no crits, because i know it sucks_
Squad Goals - Ch24
Though their timing isn't perfect for a speedrun like i would do, the crit damage that their dpsers deal is phenomenal and should rack them up some serious points, even if their overall time suffers slightly.
Once Bitten, Twice Shy
_ _no crits because i know it sucks_
Bad Bois Home Alone! ~Part One!
I really appreciate any comments or crits you can come up with, and i hope you enjoy it! just a small disclaimer. please only read this story if you are of the legal age where you live, to do so!
Rise of The Shadow Wolf Knight: Chapter 1
"sure thing dar, once power reaches crit. i'll return them to the shoulder docking bay. shall we return to our new friends?"
Creature From Hell
This is my first story so comments and crits are welcomed all characters and events are created by me but the places named are real otherwise its all form my mind to those who think crossville tennessee is a peaceful town, some survivors of a cataclysmic