For Every Door that Closes -- Six
So i needed to ask some questions and get a feel for if the problem required me to merely bloody one hyena or if i would need to rework the way the entire tribe thought about their children.
Conjoined Siblings, pre bunny info (Updated)
Thanks to northpaw coming over the other day and asking me questions about a character i realized i really don't know much about characters of mine so i thought i would rework the bunnys original forms.
"Family Tails" - Prologue
However, given their numbers (and with the usual greasing of palms of politicians), g.e.l.f.s eventually won their right to continue existing through the landmark reworking of the u.n.'
Chapter 1: Slave
#1 of pure of heart reworked page one, entire chapter 1 on my patreonhttps://www.patreon.com/cymopoleia in a world without humans, where shapeshifters have taken control, slavery has come back full force.
Arthur: A Sleepover Story, Chapter 1
So as not to overwhelm people with a wall of text, and also because, after two years of improvement on my part i'm finding a couple dumb spelling and grammatical mistakes, i'm going to be posting a new chapter every couple days as the old chapters are reworked
01 Life Goes On - Daily Life
reworked with more detail, diversity and hopefully a least a little, or hopefully a lot better than the first time.
[Slightly Damned] Making Peace - Kazai's Scrapped POV
I then reworked most of this back into the story. see if you can spot the changes! start from https://www.sofurry.com/view/1351528 and swap over to here when the line "then she let them go, and they got to it" comes up.
Jack's Girls: Rewrite in consideration.
If you're interested in seeing this rework (i will work on it as and when i have the time), then please comment here and vote for which option you would prefer, by typing the number for idea you want to see developed.
Khusk's Command 1
There had been talks among the bandits, about animals transformed into monstrous beasts, their entire beings destroyed and reworked into twisted horrors.
What's the Measure of a Man? I Don't Know But My Tail is Three Feet Long
At this point i'm just going to chalk it up to inadvertently reworking them from a different point of view. as for the ending, well... it came out well enough, but i was never really happy with it.
Cutting to deep.
This is a complete rework of the first chapter, as i wanted to know how far my writing skills have come since i first started this series. cutting too deep by xan steel out story begins in the year 2169.
Painting With Pain
An old piece of mine that i quickly reworked just to annoy someone. **painting with pain** high walls of dark and jealous shrubbery encircled his coldly shivering form. grass towered above his bare and prostrate shape in the rain.