It is about a couple caught having sex on the roof of a gazebo in a public park, as told from the viewpoints of three characters whi witnessed the act.
Collaboration, Collaborative_fiction_workshop, Fox, Hyena, Male/Female, Squirrel, Voyeurism, Wolf, WritersCrossing, public sex
Very nicely done though, and giuliano enjoyed the quality of the animation, how the figure seemed to waver quite naturally and not stand perfectly still; just the right look of patience melting away into lack thereof, a head approaching the viewpoint - the
Bat, Clean, Feral, Fox, Magic, Male, No-Yiff, Shrinking, Transformation
I hardly agreed with his viewpoint of the saurian race, but followed his lead anyway.
his steps led into the depths of the jungle, where creatures called out at every turn, making strange, sometimes alien noises.
Doom, Human
They both had valid viewpoints." she explained.
"and you prodded them quite strongly without providing them any real direction." he pointed out.
"i felt it important that they come to their own conclusions...
Faith, Fantasy, Wolf, Zion
She only stopped singing and skipping once, and that was to watch the little speck that was the ranger moving past her viewpoint of the horizon.
Cheetah, Elf, Moon, Space
Also, an ascii bunny is a narration break (where the viewpoint of the story changes). as you can see, i have also figured out italics. i would just erase my previous statement on them, but i figured crossing out would add a comedic effect.
Heat, Incest, M/F, Oral, Rabbit, Short, Vaginal, Voyeurism
"you could've just gone to see them," lucario said, finding it very strange to be seeing the world from a trainer's viewpoint for once.
"don't you think i wanted to!? don't you think..." ethan burst out as he grabbed a hold of lucario's head...
Ethan, Human, Lucario, Pokemon, species
She's one of the skeptics, and is trying to convert more of her teammates to that viewpoint. i suppose i wouldn't have done much more than that if i was in her position, and i could at least count on her to keep her team under control.
Cheetah, Fox, M/M, Story Progression, Story Series
Sometimes it's more subtle too, such as a statement of fact that should only come from the non-pov character's viewpoint.
for example: jim nodded, happy he had gotten his point across.
unless jim is the pov character, this is an omniscient statement.
Advice, Help, No-Yiff, tips, writing
The fox stretched, his gaze rolling down and then upwards at the raccoon's bare thighs and body in front of him, he rolled the chair forward away from the table, allowing him a much more up-close and personal viewpoint of the show he didn't expect to happen
Adult Content, Cum Bath, Deep Throat, Fellatio, Fox, Gag, Gagging, M/F, Oral, Raccoon, Story Series, Straight, Striptease, Verbal abuse, adult language, stripping
The story began with the viewpoint character, a female mouse anthro, making her way to a bar where she was supposed to meat an old friend whom she had not met in more than a year.
Bondage, F/solo, Human, Master/Slave, Masturbation, Rat, Rodent, Slave, Slavery