Commission: Riding Lessons of a Hyper Sort

Story by Kaizer Ryu on SoFurry

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#3 of Commissions

Commissioned by ExtremeWolf80

This one was a lot of fun to write, partly because it gives a reasonable approximation of Marie in hir college years prior to meeting Lyla. Shi is a scary bunny O_O

There are certain beings that just seem destined to lord over their lessers. In times past they might be considered gods or demons, and though we know better today they are worshiped and feared all the same. A recent transfer to an otherwise typical school is one such creature, and everyone in the town will figure out where they stand sooner or later. It's merely a matter of how many wives, girlfriends, and daughters need to end up broken on a fountain of breeding before it sinks in.


The wet slapping of flesh on flesh filled the area, joined by the sounds of pained and pleasured moans. It was quite a sight to see, really, if you were in the right position. From behind it was hard to tell what was really going on. The massive Clydesdale anthro's pillar-like legs flexed and dug into the ground, a pair of grotesquely oversized balls hanging between them and slapping against something again and again and again. At over eight feet tall he clearly dwarfed his partner, his nickers and neighing overshadowing the feminine cries of exhaustion, discomfort, and ecstasy.

A peek towards the side would reveal exactly who it was that was making such slutty noises. By any other measure she'd be a normal sized cougaress, but against the bucking stallion above her she looked positively tiny! Her face ran the gamut of emotions as he stuffed a truly titanic cock deep into her too small body, the contour of his equine dick easily discernible on her formerly flat belly. Her teeth clenched tightly as he rammed into her, pain mixing with pleasure as her belly distended around him, the broad head lodged inside her comparatively tiny womb dragging along her insides. The medial ring of his cock popped in and out of her with each thrust, scraping along her clit and making her spasm from the rough treatment to draw out pleasured mewls. Her hands stayed on her belly, feeling it deform under his assault and leaving her with a mix of shock and awe that she could take such a monster.

Her auburn hair splayed across her face, sticking fast in places from the mask of glue-like cum coating it and the creamy fur of her chest. Her blouse was ripped open and bra tugged upwards to expose her C cup tits, more cum coating them and refusing to let go despite the way her body jostled and shook. The firm mounds bounced back and forth with each impact of the equine male's hips, her skirt hiked up and her panties laying in a shredded mess on the ground. She had tried so hard to be quiet, not wanting to draw any attention to what they were doing behind the school, but her partner was having none of it. He hadn't stopped working her over until she'd yowled out in orgasm on his cock several times, announcing to any still in the building that she was getting the fucking of her life.

Richard's chestnut fur shone in the sunlight as he used the small female to sate his needs. His massive balls, gurgling and growing even bigger with each thrust, only added to the force of impact every time he pulled her tight. She wouldn't be able to walk at all until at least tomorrow, and would have a kink in her step for the next week at least. The thought made him grin and whinny, his thrusts growing harsher and her cries louder. Just because she was a year his senior the fucked out female below him had thought she could order him around. She just wanted the horse as arm candy, make the girls jealous that she had the burly new male at school at her beckon call. That lasted until she'd had her face shoved into his musky crotch. Sure she'd resisted at first, but like they always did she couldn't say no the moment she got a taste. After her first helping of his dense and virile seed she'd been too addled to stop him as he claimed her virginity, the pain long forgotten as her body was remodeled to take his thick dick.

He couldn't even remember her name at this point. Not that he cared. She'd carry several of his foals, mocked and ostracized by her peers and possibly even her family, but it didn't matter to him. She'd make an excellent cumdump until she was too big to move. He'd have others to replace her. Like the silvery vixen currently staring wide eyed at them from what she thought was a good hiding place. He knew the face but not the name, the girl in several of his classes. Her hand was over her mouth, eyes big as dinner plates as she saw his massive tool splitting open the older girl, each lewd slap making her wince from the force. She'd be a cute one to ruin.

He didn't miss a beat as he watched her, using his current cocksleeve roughly while already planning his next conquest. His fierce gaze finally caught hers, the girl standing petrified like a mouse caught in a snake's glare. Without breaking eye contact he turned, bringing his fucktoy with him. When he stood at full height the nigh insensate female's legs dangled as he reamed her, the towering alpha male giving the curious onlooker a full view of what he could do. His cock was perhaps as thick as or thicker than the cougaress' thighs, yet there it was sawing in and out of the overwhelmed female's body. They always thought it was impossible, but he hadn't found a cunt yet that couldn't swallow him.

He hadn't found one that couldn't hold his load yet, either. With the addition of the audience he found he didn't want to hold back anymore, his already fervent thrusts picking up, his nostrils flaring, and his muscles rippling under his fine coat as he readied to breed his bitch. "Keep watching, cutie! You'll see just how much you'll be able to handle when I fuck you full of my foals next!" The girl backed up in fear, falling on her ass but unable to run at the sight as his thrusts grew more erratic. At long last, after a true marathon that had left the older girl a drooling cum soaked mess, he hilted his massive meat inside her as his giant balls contracted, a loud neigh leaving his muzzle. Her belly, slightly swollen from his pre, rumbled for a moment before ballooning outwards at an alarming rate. Rich, thick ball cream burst from the flared tip to bathe her fertile insides, the hyper male's seed going to work to impregnate his filly as she screamed in mind blowing orgasm.

Again and again and again he fired inside her, his balls barely shrinking as her belly swelled to full term and beyond. Still he watched the other female, the way she took it all in before finally finding her legs and scampering off. Nice ass on that one. He was going to love pounding it until she squealed. By now he could set his current cum holder down with little difficulty, her over inflated belly holding her up so far her feet couldn't even reach the ground. It was just as well since there wasn't a thought in her head at the moment, her purring mewls lasting until she finally passed out.


Lunchtime was always a great time. As Richard enjoyed his meal, dozens of onlookers kept an eye on what was going on below the table. What he did was an open secret among the student body, the principal and most of the non-teacher staff either already carting around a belly full of foals or stuck with a mate that was. Morbid curiosity and horror held their attention as two females serviced him, knowing there wasn't much they could do aside from that. One girl enjoying his cock, a pretty mouse and former captain of the varsity gymnastics team, caressed her huge belly as she ran her tongue all around the flared head of the stud that had knocked her up. She was going to start homeschooling soon, barely able to fit through doorways already, and had been told to instruct a new addition in the finer points of cock worship.

Vicky, the same silvery vixen that had seen him the other day, was red with embarrassment but unable to say no as the other girl tending to the equine's needs. Her paws stroked along his massive length fearfully, the girl unsure why she had agreed to this. There was no way it would fit inside her! It was bigger than both her arms put together! Yet somehow it had fit into the mouse girl beside her well enough to knock her up with more than a dozen foals. The small girl wasn't even past her first trimester and already she looked ready to drop!

With a gentle paw the mouse girl guided the vixen's muzzle to his tip, their tongues darting out to taste the thick pre already leaking from the tip. The scent alone was enough to nearly make Vicky cum, and the taste sent shivers through her body. She could feel her womb heating up just from swallowing a few tonguefuls, a soft mrrr leaving her lips as the powerful male before her forced her into heat early. She'd heard he could do that, but hadn't believed it until now. There were rumors that birth control was completely useless against him as well, the girl beside her one such case. She made a mental note not to let him fuck her. Her parents would KILL her!

Four paws, one set of breasts, and two tongues caressed the titanic meat for minutes on end, the snorts and nickers from above telling them they were having an effect. The mouse girl watched her adorable protégé and guided her to the sweet spots she had found, Vicky's shame slowly melting as she ingested pre and inhaled his scent. Already she could feel her resolve failing, the need to give herself to such a superior specimen almost overwhelming. But she held firm, reminding herself that she could blow him but never fuck him.

Several more minutes passed by before she felt her nose pressed to the top of his cumslit by his powerful hand. Her tongue dove into the gaping hole to seek the gooey pre as she'd been shown, the mouse girl wrapping his length in her tits and complimenting her on learning so much as Richard glanced at her from his perch. "Time for your reward, little bitch. You better thank me for letting you get first dibs. Drink deep or I'm stuffing it down your throat right now." Vicky's ears twitched at his command, an involuntary shiver running through her heated body. Before it had even passed she heard a rumbling, her nose and chin pressed firmly to his cumslit so that it was held directly over her open mouth. With a sudden swell of the head her muzzle was inundated by cum, a heavy goop thicker than pudding and forced directly down her throat. Her neck bulged from the sheer force of it, cum ramming itself directly into her gullet as she desperately tried to swallow. More still sprayed out around her mouth, gumming up her face and soon the rest of her body in an opaque sheen of pure breeding fluids. Her eyes rolled back in ecstasy even as she struggled, the mouse girl and several others soon joining her to share in the feast. The floor was a mess, their clothes hopelessly stained, and their fur, scales, and feathers sloppy, but none complained. In the middle of them, the floor stained with her own orgasmic juices, was Vicky. Few things crossed her mind aside from how good he tasted, but one was clear. She was going to bear his foals.


The mid-sized suburban house rattled and shook amid the yelps of pain and pleasure. Richard held tightly to the silver vixen's hips, each thrust causing her poor bed to creak dangerously before slamming hard into the wall, the paint cracked and the drywall under it already crumbling onto the floor. Pictures had been knocked off the wall on the other side, windows cracking from the force of impact, yet he had only increased his efforts since the girl now impaled upon his breeding spire had lost her ability to speak. Like most of his pets he didn't even know her name. Becky? Bethany? Valerie? Something like that.

Her belly strained to contain a cock as big as her leg, her hide stretched tightly and revealing each vein and bump of the hyper stud's dick. He'd really had to give it to her to force the full length inside her, the vixen one of the smallest girls in his class even if they were the same age. Like a good slut she'd spent the rest of the day coated in his spunk and carting around her cum belly, advertising his virility and staking his claim. It was the carnivore bitches that got him the most pleasure. Watching the beta males of their own species fume but unable to deny a superior herbivore male had made her his own was a great joy. She'd look great with a squirming litter of foals keeping her stuck to the ground.

With each shove of titanic horse dick into her, a yip of agonizing pleasure poured from her dainty muzzle. The same muzzle that had already guzzled gallons of his spunk, huge quantities of foalbatter still resting in her stomach, now gave only incoherent cries for more. It had been her idea to invite him to her home, to make it the setting where he took her as his new cum receptacle. He wasn't about to argue! Her pointed ears folded back submissively as he dominated her body, his massive frame completely obscuring her as he worked on completely shattering her bed frame. His weight sunk the mattress so far down she was essentially stuck in the formed crevice, claws raking against her sheets as her mind struggled to process the force of nature invading her core.

"WHAT THE FUCK DO YOU THINK YOU'RE DOING TO MY DAUGHTER?!" Man, if he had a dollar for every time he'd heard that one. With a quick glance to the side Richard caught sight of the girl's father. By fox standards he was fairly big. If he put on more muscle he might be mistaken for a wolf. But he had nothing on Richard save the parenting instinct and adrenaline. Without pausing even a moment the large equine just grinned, his retort punctuated by each slam of his hips against the babbling female and the bed against the wall. "What...does...it...look...like?" With a quick shift in position he lifted the yelping female upwards, suspending her whole body on his dick as she enjoyed every moment of his thrusting despite her fuming parent. "I'm...breeding...her!"

With a loud whinny he bottomed out, the vixen's belly distorting to contain the gargantuan log of meat before almost instantly bloating outwards. The equine's cum factories contracted for all to see, injecting more cum in a single shot than most males made in all their most virile years. And he just...kept...going! The shocked father stood there with his mouth open, claws out but unsure of what to do. He still couldn't believe his little girl could take that much cock without permanent injury, the shape the larger male had forced her into disgusting to his mind even before the cum had started to flow. "Stop, you little bastard! You get that thing out of her this INSTANT!"

Richard's head snapped back to stare down the fox, his leg coming up to set his hoof on the bed and give the demanding beta male a better view of just how big his nuts were as they injected barrels into the orgasming female. "Or what? As you can see, old man, I'm not done yet. She's stuck on my cock until she gets the full load. Not that the fertile bitch needs it! I wouldn't be surprised if my boys have already got all her eggs! She's been such a good mare for me~ You can shut up and watch or you can leave."

"Gregory, what's going o-oh my goddess Vicky!" A smaller fox, larger than the one currently stuck on equine cock but smaller than her mate, stepped into the doorway and almost immediately regretted it. Her paws went to her mouth in horror at what she saw, her little girl's belly looking full term with triplets and swelling every second. The intense musk that filled the room made her eyes water, though it did not escape Richard's gaze that her nipples visibly hardened under her light top and her eyes lingered on his package as she grabbed her mate's arm. "Honey, do something!"

The male growled and bore his teeth, stepping forward as menacingly as he could. But it only got derisive laughter from the horse more than twice his size and easily five times his mass. "Oh please, little man, you think that's scary?" Richard pulled back as far as he could, the flare of his head catching on Vicky's cervix as he continued to pump his jelly-thick seed into her. Each pump of cum was plainly visible to the parents, his already oversized dick expanding and contracting to force each glob of sperm deep into his willing fuckpet. "I'm almost done anyway. I gotta say you pushed out quite the sexpot here, slut! She's quite pregnant at this point. Congratulations."

True to his word he was almost done. What they didn't expect was that 'almost done' to him was roughly a minute more of cum pumping orgasm. The drooling vixen was naught but a silver-furred condom stretched over a pool of semen by the time he managed to extract his cock from her loins. Her pussy gaped messily, her juices staining the underside of her belly and her thighs as she hung there limply. Despite having pulled out quickly there was no spray of cum from within her. Instead both older foxes could only watch as a mass of thick white gunk oozed arduously from deep within their daughter. It dribbled a bit out of her stretched pussy, but it barely moved past that and formed a plug to hold the rest of it inside her womb.

Between this plug and the goo covered cock Richard slapped unceremoniously against Vicky's ass, the scent of male was far more powerful than before. The nude stallion climbed off the bed shamelessly, staring at the both of them as they glared at him impotently. Gregory snarled, trying again to appear intimidating to the fearless alpha, and pointed out the door. "Leave, and never return. I don't want you anywhere near my daughter ever again, you hear me?!" But Richard ignored him, his gaze fixing upon the vixen next to him. He watched as she gulped fearfully, her knees weak from the scents assaulting her and her eyes darting from his face to his crotch. "I don't think my new foal factory agrees." Gregory turned to his mate, seeing the way the equine stared at her, and stood between them as he turned again to keep an eye on the towering alpha. "Celia, get out of here before he tries anything!"

As the vixen's musk-addled mind tried to process what her mate said, Richard's cock twitched. The barely flagged erection jumped back to full hardness, his overproductive testicles contracting once again as he relinquished control over his still unfinished orgasm. Gregory reflexively dove out of the way as a volley of pasty cum leapt from the flared tip, but Celia was not so quick. It struck her across the muzzle, great quantities of it landing in her mouth as she gasped. Her top was completely ruined by a deluge of off white sludge, her paws quickly gummed up in the intensely sticky seed as she moved to wipe it away. The next volley hit her right between the eyes, and the world for her went dark. The thick layers of sperm glued her eyes shut and blocked off all light. Her nose and mouth were hopelessly filled with the male's potent cum, cum bubbles forming as she struggled to breathe. Her ears likewise were crammed with more of the gunk, even the muffled cries of her mate soon dying as the dense fluid set itself where it lay.

The stallion's massive hands closed around the stunned vixen's arms, hefting her up like a rag doll as her mate stared slack jawed at the sight. His pleas were ignored completely as Richard set Celia's rump at the base of his crotch, her legs forced open against his waist and her back laying against the hot and throbbing maleness that had only moments before been breeding her daughter. In her sensory deprivation every touch was magnified as her mind flooded with his pheromones, the idea that her full weight was supported by the cum-slicked spire now gumming up her hair making her freeze. Without ceremony her blouse was torn open, buttons flying everywhere and her paws finally freed of their cummy prison when the stallion pulled the garment over her head. Her skirt and soaked panties soon met the same fate, shredded like tissue and tossed at the protesting beta male trying to reach his wife.

As Gregory untangled himself he saw Richard pick his wife up again, ducking under the doorway with her along for the ride. "I think a lesson is in order. You all seem to think you have any power here." The angry todd grabbed on to that wiry tail in another attempt to stop him, the stallion not even deigning to turn around. His powerful legs merely drug the much smaller fox along for the ride, Gregory's paws only letting go when they reached the stairs. All the while Celia was starting to struggle more, swallowing the taffy-like cum to free her mouth and wiping it away from her eyes. Her fluffy tail swished about, thwapping Richard's thick dick repeatedly as if trying to dissuade him but only accomplishing getting her fur stickier than before. A gurgled yelp finally escaped when she felt the warmth of sunlight and the tickling of the breeze on her fur. They were outside.

She shook her head vehemently, not knowing if anyone had seen her yet in this shameful state. All she got for her efforts was to be lifted up, her legs spread wide and that cuntbreaker cock pressed to her heat-stricken quim. Richard's muscles flexed, the stallion pressing her down on to him as the pathetic lump that was her mate ceased his threats and descended to begging while some of their neighbors took notice. Despite the apparent impossibility of the feat, Celia's pussy yawned wide for the intruder, her back arching as she was stretched so far. Her lips finally parted, a gurgling yelp muted quickly by a thick cum bubble forming. It grew with each thrust, the sheer thickness of the seed forming it letting it grow several feet in diameter before it popped. Her belly grew sticky as the film burst, the splattering of fluid on cement met with gasps of shock and disgust by the onlookers.

As Celia's belly distended, the invading cock molding her body to his dimensions as he so unceremoniously took her womb as his own, the overwhelming sensations were taking their toll. With each jostle of her tits, every piercing thrust through her cervix, and every scrape of her clit against the monstrous thing dominating her core, the fight left her. Even with the pain of being so thoroughly filled, each motion seemed better than the last. Unwanted pleasure washed through her as the hyper male used her as he had her daughter, her yips growing more lewd with each burst bubble. When his flared head extended deep inside her belly, locking the massive meat inside her, the vixen's body responded with delight even as her conscious mind drown in shame.

When the medial ring of that thick equine dick smacked into her sopping lips, her whole body spasmed and her throat cleared just in time to announce her lust-induced desires. "Fuuuuck yes! More! Harder! Give it to me, you bastard!" She wasn't able to see the hurt look on her husband's face as she gave in, nor the shock of her neighbors, and she couldn't seem to display her own dismay at having said what she just did. What was happening to her? She couldn't say no! He was fucking her without her consent in front of everyone, even her husband, and all she could say was how much she loved it!

The equine's ears twitched as she begged him for more, nickering as he picked up the pace. Inch after belly bursting inch disappeared into the smaller vixen, her whole body altered to be his cock sleeve. He didn't really care why they did it, but her admission was not unusual. Whether it was his cum, his pheromones, perhaps just the combination of his presence and his power, or something else, it didn't merit much thought. Females just bent before his will, going from fearful or disgusted to willing mares for his dick. Each move to a new town, like the one prior, had not been from hostility but from lack of available females. The ones that weren't hidden from him ended up heavily pregnant with his foals one way or another, and he wouldn't have it any other way. He had hundreds of foals across the country already, and he wasn't about to stop now.

Before long the crowd contained most of the adults in the neighborhood, Gregory on the ground behind the rutting pair with his face in his paws. With each new addition to Celia's straining body they seemed more disbelieving in what their eyes told them, more convinced she was going to die with that monster inside her. Even when her legs wrapped around his waist, the panting and babbling vixen actively helping him drive his full length inside her, the crowd still cried whenever he slammed hard and drove multiple inches in at once. They'd learn.

Nearly thirty belly straining minutes passed as he sunk the entirety of his pole into his new mare, the stallion showing no signs of fatigue even though he'd just done the same thing to her daughter. Though her eyes and ears remained plugged with his still hot foalbatter her mouth had been free and willingly spewing praise when she could stop screaming in orgasm. She seemed to have forgotten where they were as she felt the stud's balls smack her ample ass repeatedly. Any other day she was a devoted spouse and mother, someone the neighbors thought they could look up to, but it was all in tatters now. It fed Richard's lust, the degradation and corruption of this female he barely knew before her peers spurring him on to greater heights of force. His coat glistened as he used her, steam coming from his nostrils with each snort, the wet smack of hips mixing with her pained yips of bliss for all to hear.

When he suddenly stopped, Celia howled in protest. "N-no! Don't...don't stop, please! I need it! Fuck meeeee~!" Ignoring her for a moment, Richard let his cock hold her body up as his hands went to her legs. He pried her off his waist despite her efforts, the vixen trying to gyrate her hips as her paws stroked the easily visible monster under her fur. "Patience, cumbucket. Gotta get you in position first." Gripping her splayed legs he twisted her around on his cock, her juices gushing over his crotch and dripping down his over-inflated balls from the straining friction. He stopped once she was facing downwards, her tongue drooping out her muzzle as she spasmed helplessly on his dick. "There. Now you're ready."

Gripping her waist once again he resumed his brutal thrusts, her tits bouncing for all to see as she screeched in painful bliss. As his own orgasm rapidly approached, the stallion turned towards the defeated beta male behind them, letting him see what he could never do. "Just so you know, she's already knocked up. I never cleaned off after I pumped your little darling full of my young, so I got mother and daughter in the same load~ This was just establishing ownership." Gritting his teeth and whinnying loudly, the alpha stud bucked hard into Celia's willing form before pulling her flush. His balls pulled tight once more, and like Vicky the motherly vixen felt her belly invaded by barrels of cum thick as taffy. Her formerly flat stomach bloated outwards, even the outline of Richard's cock soon gone as she flew through the months. Heavier, rounder, fuller, happier, Celia's pleasure was magnified by the way her belly bloated. Her paws stroked the massive dome, feeling the heat radiating from it as he sealed his claim on her womb.

When she reached Vicky's size and just kept growing, Gregory went pale. Just how much could this freak of nature make?! The stallion just laughed, knowing that look rather well. "Get used to it, wimp. Your woman's going to pump out my litters for the foreseeable future. My sperm likes to stay a while~" With a steely glance that made Gregory shudder, Richard's next words were as much statement of fact as they were a threat. "I hope you're better at raising foals than you are at defending your claim. You'd better damn well be." Even as Celia's belly grew large enough to reach the ground while the massive male stood erect, he began thrusting again mid orgasm. "Now let's get to work filling her a second time. I'm gonna make sure you're reminded of who your better is for the rest of her fertile years!"