Gareth (Yellowstripe) - M/M rape, vore
One was in the hooks-and-commas of kzinti script. "something like that. now, as to why you are here. just a routine investigation - whenever a prisoner dies in custody, there's a followup, naturally."
The breath of life Chapter 02: The beginning of a journey
It's the first time i say it without avoiding any point, comma or question mark._** **_"_** when we finally hear the man finished, dan was already totally stunned by that too much detail, imagine reaching the scene, his mind was a mess, couldn't
Back to the Future (A1, B11, C37)
I endured a comma for longer than nathanial carrington was alive. one hundred eighty-seven years, i slept. we had nanotech to keep our bodies functioning. it slowly rebuilt the mind, which had eroded from that virus. yet, my kind triumphed."
Chapter 3: Dreaming in an awaken state
Lol) since this site does post a note to every body that is watching this story every time i do change, be it something as little as adding comma. i will list the change right after this sentence so that you know if its affecting the story. 2-10-14 mod.
Kat\\\'s Dinner Date
Notably, i tended to overuse commas in my early writings. hopefully i've been able to get past that. squeamish people shouldn't read.
Chapter 5 - The Uncle
"so uncle 'luke'," i make sure to invert those commas with my paws. "what are you trying to do with the demon-core and what did you want me to do with it? why offer me a job?" "sometimes you remind me too much of your mother kid.
Tessith and the Kobolds: Part 1
Tessith squirmed a bit to catch his hind leg on a large stone sunk into the mountain forest's floor comma using the rock to brace himself as his hip started to work.
Mewflower
My own gloss right past me, and it's very helpful to have someone say 'knock it off with the bloody commas." i will say, i took inspiration from a number of other transformation writers, both here on sf (or no-longer on sf), and other sites.
Story Time: A Familiar Fit
Special thanks to [fa: moondragoness:](http://www.furaffinity.net/user/moondragoness:) for comma culling **continuity note**"a familiar fit" takes place **before** the events detailed in [mouse trap](https://www.sofurry.com/view/765587).
Aching Love
Also this story came to me by a dream (and very odd how my mind thinks up of this when i'm sleeping) and everything that's written here is exactly how it happened in my dream with a few differences here and there (i also abuse the commas in this so please
Jordan
"you're in a comma, but don't worry. you'll wake up soon." "and who are you?" "kyle, i'm your watcher." "my what?" "your watcher, sort of like a guardian angel, but unlike angels i was never born, i was never alive.
To Be With a Dragon
Brought to the forefront was his hidden desire to be caught in such a situation(comma) while rational distress melted away.