Astraifort Estate (beta 0.3)
I think im going to edit that one some. the first explorable section of the game should be pretty much final please check all the warnings in the game and have fun comments and feedback on how to improve are always loved and welcome <3http://whitepython.net
A fur at Freddy's: the cancellation
With no feedback of any kind gave me nothing to work with to help make the story better and more enjoyablle.maybe when 'fnaf world' comes out i will make a new story based on that.it will take more than one person to save the series...
Goldenwolf's Edda
I love feedback. or better yet, get inspired and write your own! lo! harken unto me!
Prologue; Soulless
This is merely the prologue but there's more to come, please comment as i'm eager to get feedback. to the being that has found this, i implore you, share what lies within these pages with no on you would not trust you and family's lives with.
The pokemon trainer...
#2 of laura (old character) i would realy appreciate some feedback ^_^ i was drawing and sketching in my book until i heard somthing behind me..right away i turn and see a smiling trainers face.
Darkened Dawn: Part 1/3: Revolt To Revoria: Chapter 3: Kidnapping Kiddo
I'd love some details and feedback on how to make this better. thanks again for reading! "ergh, hey! let me out!" i was still in the bag, when i didn't know alice. "no," she said. "you'll come out when i let you out."
Test of direct c&p formatted text from LyX
I'd like to get some feedback here.
The final stop is here
Thank you for reading my poem, pleas give some feedback to my poem.
My Secret to You... (sonnet)
Give me some feedback please? constructive critizism is good critizism.
New Announcements 2/14/2018
I am really wishing to get some feedback about what works people enjoy and what works people don't enjoy as much. comment below what person you enjoyed me collaborating with or if you prefer i don't collaborate at all.
How We Don’t Talk Anymore
I do look forward to your comments and other feedback, and as always, remember that it will help others to find these stories to enjoy as well. cheers!
An Unexpected Adventure Ch. 1: It Begins
Again this is my fist story so feedback is greatly appreciated. i don't plan on making this story centric to one generation or anything.