GRUESOMENESS TEST
Basically i wanted to see how well i could write a gruesome scene without any actual dialog. so, tell me what you guys think. any and all criticism is appreciated.
GRUESOMENESS TEST V.2
#2 of tests the sight was gruesome. the road was covered in blood and body bits. but this wasn't a car accident. of course, that's what the news would call it. an "accident". people wouldn't panic then.
Taerlyn (mm captivity graphic torture scenes)
Shots boom in the distance. A different weapon. Something vicious. Something new. Something stranger. Taerlyn's ears swivel to take in the odd sounds, the whoosh like arrows, only much thinner, many more together, how can they stay clustered so closely...
Lykos - 04 - Dreams and Visions
**Lykos** Chapter 4 (Dreams and Visions) Excitement was building all over campus for the coming Thanksgiving holiday. The weather was getting colder and the first snow had fallen, turning the green campus into a white one. While it was wet and...
Flight Academy: Chapter 4
Chapter 4: Third ring of hell The group rushes into the room. Staal places Shiro onto the soft couch then runs into the bathroom to grab a towel to lay Uski on. Corelec places Uski on the towel then wastes no time blockading the door. "What the hell...
Chapter 7: A Bad Hangover
Chapter 7: A Bad Hangover Paul awoke to a splitting headache and a dry mouth filled with the taste of stale vomit. The bright lights shining in his eyes only compounded the throbbing in his head. He lifted his arm to shield his eyes from the harsh...
Untitled venting story or "Oh dear."
He pulled the package from the boy's duffel and sat in a corner, tearing into the bloody meat with a gruesome grin.
Super mini story#1
Once those doors were pried open the viewers were met with a somber yet gruesome scene. the white daisies were awash with blood, almost to the point were one could say they were roses. if a rose had no thorns.
A new beginning
Another memory even too gruesome for me to explain in this story came to mind but it was just like amenti said i had been beaten with whatever weapon my mother had in mind.
On The Twelfth Day of Kinkmas
His rear was entirely ensconced by the stallion's palm, the fat paw much too big with fingers passing from buttock to hip and further, demonstrating for the first time the gruesome difference between them both.
HTF: The First Act (Happy Tree Friends basis)
So i am better explaining the plot of this whole fan-fiction, in this the characters of happy tree friends are anime humans or anime, with that stated let me point out that this changes courses and there will not be gruesome deaths like the actual show,
Viking Mountain
They were both felled by gruesome during the last summer season.” gruesome; a massive grizzly bear that had a habit of hunting any who wandered out of the village.