Father of the Pride threesome (revised)
#1 of father of the pride threesome (revised) i liked father of the pride in my late teens, so when i saw this picture, i asked the commissioner if i could write a story for it.
Chapter 1: A Discordant Melody
I have taken the time to proofread and make a few light revisions to reduce redundancies and remove contradictions, but there will still be errors.
Plot-Your-Own Yiff
Jake took the manuscript back and began revising the file on his computer. while he was working, tom went down to the kitchen for some orange juice and a bite to eat.
Professor Please
"hmmm..." said the groping bear, "i think we may have to do an oral revision..." "i knew you'd help me, sir!" the dog grinned and wagged. the bear gave the dog's ass one final slap.
Married!
Afterwards, i'll go back through and do a major revision on the series. gotta get'em all ready for publication and such, y'know? lots of changes to be made, based on everyone's feedback! now...
The Booth Revised - Part 1
. ### the booth, revised - july 27, 2012 m/m/m, oral/anal/caressing/seduction/foot-play/rough-sex written by afril, edited by chaos blackwing (cl) 2012 the gay furry association part 1 chapter 1 - a booth i sat in the
I Surrender
In revising this story i simply made a few minor grammar edits, and filled in a tiny detail or so. i guess when you do something right the first time, you don't have to do it again.
Precious Memories (Act1, Book1, Chapter3)
#3 of twilight of the gods book1 revision divergency here - i split the old chapter 3 into two parts during the august 2015 revision! so ... there's that.
Be Kind To Those Less Fortunate 2
Update (12/12/09) -- revised the story, adding in new content. be kind to those less fortunate 2 anger. an emotion generally associated with negative feelings, and one that was reflected in the eyes of the alliance soldiers present on krasus' landing.
The Zombie Apoc-Fur-Lypse, Group 5, Concludes
The storyline with the most number of winning votes will be revised and rewritten. go... do it now!
Spyro and the Sun God: Chapter 13
The mole said, turning in his chair to face the computer once again, "i will be revising the data on the energy within your body spyro, when you're done you should come back!" "got it. see you later professor."
Major/Miner: Altered timeline Chapter 1 of 12
revising an old blueprints and make sure it makes the switch from lethal to non-lethal takes and work." acheron plucks the blueprints out from max's paws out of urgency before she can unravel the blueprints herself.