Helfer's Busy Day, Chapter 15
"i cannot think of anyone less qualified than you to criticize the security workings of this palace." helfer shrugged. "you set a trap, but you let whoever it was get away? i don't know how much i need to know to criticize that."
The Fate That Befell Yndyr: Chapter One
Energy critical. new power source detected. emergency bonding initiated.** **.** **.** **.** **\>bonding complete. beginning to power up systems** **.** **.** **.** **\>incomplete. organic memory detected. interfering with systems.
Red Shadow
I probably won't be accused of killing them; the police know my m.o. and know that i don't use guns, but their captain is a known critic of mine. i'm going to die. i don't know when or where.
DC Criminal Profile: Mire
Unbeknownst to his critics in hawaii and perhaps even to maleko himself, he had been using this power over water for years to increase his surfing prowess.
Alcoholic Influences
He was well aware of haiden's critical gaze as he poured a single shot into a plastic red party cup, and filled in to the brim with coke.
Game On
Not just criticism, he could handle criticism if it was coming from someone who knew what the fuck they were talking about. but des, he just kept going on and on about how the lion was too old for the game now.
Algerian Speed (part 2)
Having one of our drivers criticize his or her own team in public and in front of media will be against the terms of contract and it can be punishable by fine or even suspension, depending on the severity."
The Dragon Spirit Wishes
#1 of the dragon spirit wishes this is my first poem of this sort, so be critical, but understand if it's not great. the dragon spirit wishes i wish i could walk. i wish i could run. i wish i could fly, fly into the sky.
Confusion
Take it easy on the criticism! ;3 the great wolf howled to the empty sky, his confusion his pain plain to hear. "why? why must i endure? all the others receive the happiness they wish for..."
The edge
Constructive criticism is welcome!
The twining roses
Please give me some constructive criticism and comments.
The twinning roses
Please give me some constructive criticism and comments.