The Unbreakable Bond - Prologue
This is my first story and it might suck a lot so please give some constructive criticism! :3 it was a bright, shining day in the region of unova when 5 year old landon burst through the door of his house in nuvema town. "mom!
(poem) Let’s Hear It for the Fox
Each vulpine to their own, say i for reasons have they; i shan't pry no more of this criticism that breaks beneath vulpine prism red, black, and white are not the end possessed among the foxy friend but brown, white, gold, and black, as well and why
1 Voice
criticism? comment away! her name is pronounced jee-ar-eeh-en . a voice emanated from the mountains. it was a droning and humming voice, deep and warm and tired. no one else lived around to hear the voice, just giarien.
Learning to love: prologue
A fave will be awesome and constructive criticism is always welcome!
Introduction: Abandoned
**** post thoughts, constructive criticism, and other comments in the comments below. ^^** * * * introduction: abandoned by snowiri the crystalline droplets of water flooded the desolate landscape around the broken canine.
Shadow and Blaze Chapter 2
"well, the sedan crashed into his side making the chassis crush into tiny pieces into metal, as you can see only the driver seats door was critically damaged."who are you?" they all asked the hooded figure.
Into the Horizon: Power Contested Part 3
This one was the sub-light's going critical. dasher heard the door open and realized that he was helpless to do anything to save himself. he still didn't have his vision.
Third Arc Crimson Moon: Epilogue
Just a few critics who were a little harsh on rob but nothing to cry over." "good..." alexiel reached into his coat and pulled out several documents.
Rexi & Talon: 15 -- Rexi
Why was it critically important to send a messenger to the goldsmith, and tell him _do not proceed on my order_. what order? who was zackton working with? why? rexi was practically grinding his teeth.
Starting on a High Note
As always, any criticism is good criticism, and more stories are in the works. this story contains explicit sexual acts between a human and a non-human character, both of which are male. it's also super lovey dovey and romantic and mushy and sweet.
*DEPRECATED* Die For My Sin - Prologue
He had tried searching, and even shaping other rhenthar to suit his needs, but there were always problems, critical aspects were missing. the loyalty was forced, often desperate.
Female-On-Male Tickle Rape: Boldr
If you have any thoughts, suggestions, or criticism, leave them in the comment section below. tune in next time for another episode of: female-on-male tickle rape!