New Revelations
_note: no critiques, this is just for shits and giggles, nothing professional that's ever going to be published_ _prologue: [http://www.sofurry.com/view/496375](http://www.sofurry.com/view/496375)_ _chapter 2: [http://www.sofurry.com/view
A day in the life of a teenage pokemon Chapter 1 ((Rough draft, please critique))
Part 1 of a day in the life of a teenage pokemon Part 2: [http://sofurry.com/index.php?pid=140578](http://sofurry.com/index.php?pid=140578) Andrew was your semi-average 18 year old rich boy. He was still in high school, and had long since...
Strangers
In other words, no critiques because i know it sucks.
A day in the life of a teenage pokemon Chapter 2 ((Rough draft, please critique))
Part 1: [http://sofurry.com/page/140425/user](http://sofurry.com/page/140425/user) Part 2 of a day in the life of a teenage pokemon The next day When Andrew woke up the next day, he logged onto his computer, and set up the memory...
Fire
In other words, no critiques, because i already know it's terrible. also, i'm leaving all the naughty stuff up to your imagination~_
A Grand Release
Joey had always been an anxious child, needing to sleep with one of his older brothers or jack himself until he was a teenager, and that disposition, mixed with positive reinforcement with no critique...
Recompense, Part 1 (Fixed for real)
The lines of her face deepened, and she nodded, for once offering no critique. it was the highest praise he'd ever received from vilda.
Little Adventures #4 - The Price of Reason
This is no critique, i rather want to know how to proceed." amanda felt her heart flutter upon that statement; felt his looks explore her; just like his colleagues, but he was smart enough to find something. “it was yesterday, wasn't it?