A brother's love

This is a particularly dark scene i've had on my mind for a while, yes it is pretty... different to what most of you would read, but i mostly did this to work on writing in the third person perspective.

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Vael's life Beginnings

It requires some energy to visualise one's own anatomy from a third person perspective. a penis was there but nothing more. sighing, he went over to the river, bent down on his forepaws, and drank a few gulps from it.

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What's the Measure of a Man? I Don't Know But My Tail is Three Feet Long

Not the least of which was switching into the third-person perspective. it may not seem like much, but writing 'he said' and 'johnathan did' drove me crazy for the first week or so.

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The Guardians Shadow Pt2 Ch3

I had a bit of a difficult time typing this out as i switched from third person perspective back to first person.

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Gryphon Feathers - Ch2.

“_now, kayt says now,”_ she snarled, all heat and command and sudden third-person perspective. i didn’t even choose to. my body surged up into her as i came—hard, fast, everything at once.

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Love's Blossom

third-person perspective is still a tad on the awkward side for me, but i seem to do a much better job of varying the subjects of my sentences and my overall word-choice.

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"BLEU" - Thingy

That's when i regained my real existing personality, and moved into a third person perspective. my alternate identity turned and walked away as a dark and blood-stained figure, as the dream slowly faded.

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Visiting the Botanical Gardens (5/10)

Though he couldn't see it from a third person perspective it was like he could see it forming in his mind what he looked like, a werewolf that had was being held down by his chest as he attempted to get back up.

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Chapter Sixteen: Secret Reminders

:p (a/n: this chapter is from a third-person perspective. usual 'in-head' approach continues next chapter.) she stared at the note with bemusement the only remaining response.

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Reverse Summoning

I re-edited this from a third-person perspective, so fingers crossed i did it correctly. anyway, this story is shamelessly horny and kind of embarrassing for even me to read, honestly.

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